Date: Aug 24, 2011 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Your writing is beautiful. Consider me hooked!
Date: Aug 24, 2011 01:46 am Title: Chapter 23
Noooooooo, I was so caught up in this. Please update soon. Poor Michael just being in the same space with him was too. Joe..UGH! Serioulsy he has no respect it seems. Where on earth did Michael get his heavy dose of humbleness and respect from?. Good update as always.
Date: Aug 23, 2011 12:24 am Title: Chapter 22
Please more, more, more....I miss them.
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2011 01:39 am Title: Chapter 22
Oh snap, i almost thought his sister would catch them and the little fingertips kiss thing was super cute :) cnt wait for more good job!
Date: Aug 18, 2011 12:54 am Title: Hawaii.
He get me so confused!!!! he is so king and lovely with her in this chapter.... I fell in love with him!!
I also think he loves her....he needs her....
this update is so wonderful!!!!
thanks for this chapter....it made me dream!!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2011 12:42 am Title: Chapter 22
This chapter was so short but it covered so much... beautiful...I love this story and I love this dreamy special place that it takes me each and every time I read it. "She can still see flecks of sand in his hair like star dust" So, so cute. Tatiana his Neverland, his escape to a place of love, freedom, comfort and acceptance. I believe that Micheal keeps their love all to himself in fear that the critical and harse world that he lives in, will some how destroy the love and enjoyment that they both share.
I love it, I can't wait for more.
Date: Aug 17, 2011 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 22
Like "liberianGirl777" I check anytime too! lol
I dont know what the problem is within Michael and his father... but I can imagine... maybe money....uhmmmmm
I feel like there are many things keeping them apart.... sometimes It seems Michael needs her so much...sometimes it is like he doesnt need her.....
I hope he doesnt break Tatiana's heart.
Keep writing!!!! pleaseeee
and sorry about my english.... I try to do my best.
Date: Aug 17, 2011 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 22
I am enjoying this story, please continue. I like the little quips that MJ makes...;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2011 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 22
Great job! :) Please keep going.
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2011 11:48 am Title: Chapter 22
The more this goes on, the more I feel his resolve breaking. Or maybe he really is only using her for one thing. Or maybe his need for SOMEONE is becoming a need for HER. PLease continue.
Date: Aug 17, 2011 02:57 am Title: Chapter 22
i seriously squeal anytime i see that you've updated LOL. it's sick lol. great job =)
Date: Aug 15, 2011 06:44 pm Title: Hawaii.
more heat please....
Date: Aug 15, 2011 06:44 pm Title: Hawaii.
more heat please....
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2011 02:00 am Title: Hawaii.
"...she turns to look at him, "nobody caught us," She smiles"
"He runs his fingers through her hair, kisses her forehead, whispers, "You give me permission, you dont even now."
Ahh, it's so magical, sweet, mysterious..all of it. The secret, the beach , the night under the stars.. I loved it! I love this moment in time , this adventure, this love.