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Reviewer: mjjfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2011 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 26

Your last words are so true about Michael through out his lifetime.

Reviewer: MjsWendy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2011 01:43 am Title: Chapter 26

Lovely, how true , how true, " He was the most protected, vulnerable person she knew and the most dangerous." I swear Michael was the only man I wanted to wrap up in a blanket of love a stowe him away in the closet for protection. Like Tatiana we all want a piece of Michael to love so deeply and madly, twe want to claim him as our very own and keep safe all to oursleves.

He was so misunderstood, lied on and betrayed. In turn it made him made him so very unhappy at times. Great update, I was worried you werent gonna get it back.

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2011 11:11 am Title: The Morning After.

here's what I would like to see, my fave author.

tatiana finally, maybe tentatively, fearfully, confronting michael on what the hell they are, and michael answering her is some sort of honesty. i don't care if it's a good or bad answer, I just want her to have  an answer! it's men like him that break women's hearts every day. 

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2011 11:40 am Title: The Morning After.

Poor Tatiana!!!! Sometimes I dont get what Michael think or feel about Tatiana.....

I want more chapters!!!!

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeee write ASAP

Reviewer: BreakOfDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2011 07:47 am Title: The Morning After.

this is the most beautiful, amazing, perfect story here... your style is so unique, girl! so keep goin!

let him spoil her a bit... i guess she needs some commitment from him now... ;-)



Author's Response: Hmmmm you've given me an idea, thanks :D

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2011 09:52 pm Title: The Morning After.

I love that this story is told in first period, it adds so much emotion to the story line. Babe, even though you have writers block you never fail with your stories, every chapter i read makes me fall in love with it more and more :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2011 10:41 am Title: The Morning After.

this is one of my favourite stories on this website, its one that i have saved to my favourites and its the first one i see when i come on here, you've written an awesome story, its how i kinda imagined them to be with each other, had it been true! just a thought maybe he could let her in sometimes and begin to open up to her, i totally loved that chapter when they were pretending to have so many kids, when they spoke to that older couple they'd met, it was so cute because she didn't expect that from him and yet she played along, absolutely epic! hope the writer's block goes away real soon! juls xoxo



Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2011 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 24

this capter was so sad!!! i read it too many times! I was so sad for Michael....  I was so moved when he say he didnt want people know what he have, cause they will want it too..... It was like he doesnt want to share or loose his treasures.....sorry about my english....I do my best



Author's Response: Your English is fine, thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: chi chu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2011 02:09 am Title: Chapter 24

This is an awesome update. I completely agree I believe that Michael wants to trust Tatiana but he has a really difficult time because of the mistrust, betrayal, and manipulation he had to go through with others. They are taking baby steps which is good, and he seems a lot more comfortable with her. Please keep going!!!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2011 01:24 am Title: Chapter 24

Its kinda crazy though because it seems like michaels character in this story is so depressed. Could you imagine if he was really like this in real life? Cnt wait for more amazinggg

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2011 01:18 am Title: Chapter 23

Omg the emotion in this man!!! It just kills me i feel like im like watching the whole story happen. Its great. Great, amazing, wonderful job!

Reviewer: MjsWendy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2011 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 24

Wow, very passionate. He comes so close and falls so short with her. It's not easy to trust another with your heart, mind and soul. It's especially hard when you've been betrayed so many times and your head is filled with so much doubt, anxiety, self esteem issues and mistrust. I'm interested in seeing how this develops for these two. Please continue.

Reviewer: wisdom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2011 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 24

:'( :'( :'( PLEASE CONTINUE!!!


L.o.v.e.

Reviewer: chi chu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2011 08:49 am Title: Chapter 23

Great update :)

Reviewer: kaity6494 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2011 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

Your writing is beautiful. Consider me hooked!

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