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Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2011 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 29

this is still a totally epic story, i love your writing so much, as i've said before, it just makes me wish this could have been true for both of them, i really believe she fell for him and him with her, but the business and frank got in the way! awesome! xoxox

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2011 07:27 am Title: Chapter 29

Aww:( poor tati it sucks when you like someone but they don't fell the same way. Lovly job dear

Reviewer: MjsWendy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2011 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 28

Ah, what a freakin tease! Where on earth is the rest. LOL!! I need more time with MJ and Tat. More and longerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr please. I loved it..he makes me antsy  and gitty every time they meet up. I can't image  ever being the recipient of his stares, hugs, attention and well touches.. (shivers) I loved how he reached out and played with her hair strands..so MJ and soooo cute.

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2011 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 28

Girl! why did I feel this chapter so SHORT????

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I LOVED this chapter!!!! So much!!!!  I love how they try to talk...to look at each at day....I seems so hard for them, but I'm glad how they try to!!!!!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2011 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 28

Haha i love how you illstraute everything he does :) i love it:)! Cnt wait for more

Reviewer: chi chu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2011 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 28

I was getting into it please keep going, please continue. It was getting so good. :)

Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2011 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 28

such an awesome story, i always get so excited to see you've updated, please keep writing this, pretty please!!!!

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2011 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 27

I need another chapter pleaseeee lol

Reviewer: MjsWendy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2011 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 27

Sweet Jesus, that was  great. Ugh! Mike is soooo romantic here..Miguel?..cute.I can see his sexy confused face. They way his skin bunched together in that spot between this brows...loved that when he did that. I can so see his confusion and slight hurt as to why she did not share with him something so special and important as her birhtday. Loved it.I thoght Doran was gonna make a move. Seriously no one suspects them?. It's not that hard to see sparks between two people set on hiding it. Wow! I loved this ahhhh too short. More and more!

Reviewer: claudiux9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2011 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 27

Ohhhh so sweet!! I love how Michael thought of the roses! What a detail!!! Keep writing girl thank you for this update

Reviewer: chi chu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2011 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 27

This was so beautiful, I love how Michael gave her that necklace and the flowers. He's showing her that he truely cares for her even though he may not say it. Can't wait to read more.  :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2011 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 27

Omg Have you ever thought of writting a book? Youre to good! Love it!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2011 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 26

Jesus, you get me everytime with this story. I adore it, your writting style is amazing. Every single time I read a chapter I can partically see the whole thing in my head. Lovly job dear

Reviewer: kaity6494 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2011 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 27

You're writing is so... what are the words? I have none, I suppose. Keep making me speechless!

Reviewer: kaity6494 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2011 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 26

You're chapters are always the best. Can't wait for the next one!

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