[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2011 05:14 am Title: A Painful Summoning
Whhhhhhaaaaaaaaaat?!
Grace! You sick no good piece of low life...
Gah! I fell asleep last night when you updated...grr. But that may be a good thing cause homicidal thoughts would have kept me up all night.
Geeez! So poignant...emotion just radiated from this chapter!! I am totally sniffling like an idiot.
Amazzzzzzzzzzzzzzing!!!!!
I may die if this doesn't reappear in the most recent updates again tonight.
....gah!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2011 11:58 pm Title: Simply Michael Jackson
*stares at the screen quietly*
Aaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!
First off, I love the shopping trip lol how funny that jazz drug her lingerie shopping.
Seriously. Hilarious.
Second, you nearly gave me a heart attack when he mentioned a black box
I was like....whoah.....WHAT?! Lol
Gah! The scene between Anna and Michael at the end though..so worth the wait!!!
Intimate, sweet, beautiful.
I especially love the I love you more and how it affected Michael hearing it. I
Amazing from beginning to end as. Always.
Author's Response:
Thank you maam!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2011 01:53 am Title: Love Heals A Broken Heart
*puts hand on chest and gasps for breath#
I am...PHEW! I am going to...mercy sakes alive.
That was intense. Very intense.
THAT...was worth the wait lol. I don't even know WHAT to say because i'm still trying to regulate my breath properly lol.
AND! YOU THANKED ME! THAT...was sweet. AND a nice surprise.
Thank you for not threatening to shoot me every time I whine about updates! lol :)
Seriously...you do an AMAAAAAAAAAAAAZING job every time I read. Every chapter is different and unique and incredible.
FANTASTIC job Miss Temptress.
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2011 05:39 pm Title: Broken Hearts
FORGIVEN HER? He FORGIVES her?
And then ASSAULTS HER?
GAH! I wanted to kick Brian and Michael's ass and cut Brian's manhood off his body.
I was like AH! And then AHH!
And then Chris.GAH!!!! ! I want him to go kung fu on MICHAEL AND BRIAN.
Stupid judgemental jealous jackass. Needs to get his damn eyes checked.
PLUS!
I'm telling you. EVERY TIME I read what Chris is saying it's like I'm watching him an interview. It is THAT DEAD ON!
GAH! I'm about to have a heart attack. UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
Seriously. SOON!
Author's Response:
OMG Really! Leah you are cracking me up with these reviews!! I'm glad you can actually see Chris like he would be in an interview. That's what I try to portray him as! But Im seriously glad you like the chapter!! OMG!
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2011 12:05 pm Title: Curiosity Killed The Cat
:))))))))))))))
this was FUUUUUNNNNNNNNYYYYYYYY!
my,my...what's going on in there?
GREAT CHAPTER AS USUAL!
NEXT PLEASE!
MUCH LO-------------------------O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2011 02:05 am Title: Curiosity Killed The Cat
OH DEAR WORD!
YOUR trying to KILL ME!
This was hillarious. All the way through. I LOVE Jazz and Chris together...they would kick ASS as a couple!!
....which looks very plausible at this point.
And Anna peeking at Mike through the steam...gah! Hillarious.
And the little jealousy thing in the beginning? Was ridiculously good.
Author's Response:
LOL Amazing things happen with some caffiene! Im soo glad you loved it!! More surprises to come though!
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2011 07:11 pm Title: Who Could Resist?
GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chris needs to be in future chapters. I LOVE the interaction between him and Michael.
hahahaha.... the Rolex. The parallels between him and Elvis are astounding...the way he just flippantly gives things to people among the many others. I LOVED the way you wrote this scene!!!
I love this story and I think i'll die in anticpation if you don't update it tomorrow.
Seriously. It's amazing and i'm still completely addicted.
Author's Response:
LOL Chris is really going to be in the story even more now that he's introduced. Some hilarious situations are gonna happen!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2011 07:21 am Title: Someone Is Going To Jail For Attempted Manslaughter
This was SUPER SUPER AMAZING!
LOVELY!
AND SWEET!
GOD,I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!
NEXT PART PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
MUCH LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE L-O-V-E!
Author's Response:
LOL Awww..thank you for the review! I'm glad your enjoying the story..stay tuned there will be another update tonight!
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2011 01:12 am Title: Someone Is Going To Jail For Attempted Manslaughter
You go Anna! Rip the little bitch's head off!
lol. i was getting ready to go to bed when I saw you update again. Yay!
It was great. And now they're exclusive so *fist pump*
Aggressive Anna is adorable.
Author's Response:
LOL Yea I thought it was time for them to be exclusive, FINALLY. LOL Anna is not one to mess around with, especially when it comes to Michael. :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2011 07:50 pm Title: This Was No Accident
Are you FREAKING KIDDING?!
Bitch!
Poor Anna! I wanted to hug her! I am so damn mad! She was so nervous and excited and then THIS? Gah!
You do such a good job making me feel what she feels. I'm happy when she's happy and so damn upset when she's hurt.
Positively an incredible chapter. I wish there was a twenty star rating option...
Author's Response:
LOL Awww...Yea, I know. My blood pressure shot through the roof just writing it, so I can imagine how you're feeling it. I put myself into that position and write how I would've felt. But I am EXTREMELY happy you like this chapter. Make sure you tune in for the next update...going to be a lot of drama!! Don't wanna miss it. ;) That's all I can tell ya for now though. Should be another one up soon!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2011 10:29 pm Title: Early Morning Coffee Confessions
"no fair..you've found my weakness but i've yet to find yours."
"I thought that was quiet obvious!"
Ahh! that was too freaking adorable for words.
That combined with vulnerable Michael?! *SIGH*
Amazingly amazing.
Just the light hearded thing I wanted to hear after proofreading my own chapter lol. ;)
This story is freaking amazing.
Author's Response:
LOL OMG I'm so glad you like it! I wasn't sure how this would be reviewed. I can't wait for another update from you. I made a pact I am staying on herre all night and wait for the next one. I'm dying to know what goes on!!
But thank you so much for reading. :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2011 11:46 pm Title: A Late Night Visit
Gah! My mind is so muddled with things to say I don't even know where to start.
....Seeing as how the imagine of Michael right above me is distracting the HELL out of my i'm going to start with that lol.
That is to freaking adorable for words. gah! I love these moving images you place in your story.
Also, YOUR A FEATURED STORY ALSO!! YES!!! I nearly fainted when I saw we both were on the main page lol. I can't believe it. BUT you totally deserve it and I am both FLOORED and HONORED I am one of your favorite authors :)
You have quickly become one of mine as well :)
Now...the chapter.
AGGH!!! I wish I was able to reach into your story and grab the damn pillow...lucky fan.
Seriously though Michael and Anna together are to cute for words. I also LOVED the Midas convo they had...that was really impactful.
Great job, UPDATE SOON!
Much Love,
Leah <3
Author's Response:
LOL Awwww thank you. As for Michael's image in the story, it distracted me too. I kept staring at him like if I did it enough somehow he's pop out of my screen.I'm crazy like that.
I remembered learning about that story in school for en English project and I thought it would be a good idea to put that in the story. I love getting reviews from you. Makes my day!!
Update is coming soon. Thank you for being my loyal reader!!
<3
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2011 04:17 am Title: After Practice..
I'm pooped from reloading WDYL so this will be short lol.
I was really excited to see two chapters up!
They were amazing as usual. I love how Michael messes with her while she's on the phone lol. That was cute.
As for the story thing just hit me up under my profile sometime :)
Author's Response:
Will do! It sucks you had to reupload the entire story, though. Doesn't deter me from reading it though! Seriously too good for me to lose interest. I can safely say I'm hooked until the end. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2011 10:43 am Title: Whose Bad?
Oh my damn! You were going to stop writing it?? Nooooooo! I definitely would have went on strike then...lol ;).
I am seriously in love with your writing. I read through a bit of your other stories last night and found myself addicted to them as well (I'll post a review there later as well). Someday I'd love to cowries something with you if you had the time or even wanted to lol.
Seriously though. You are incredibly gifted...I think you are one of my absolute favorite writers on and off mjfiction.
Now...for this chapter. I seriously about had a heart attack when I saw you updated already...and omg this chapter was...again...freaking amazing.
I wanted to rip Graces hair out when she started being an ass to Anna. I mean seriously...get a freaking life. Anna hadn't done anything to deserve the crap she was dishing out.
And Michael reassuring Anna again? *melts*
Amazing. Just really freaking amazing.
I also loved that Michael walked in and what he said when he first spotted them lol
And when he forgot to be on stage? Lol that was great.
Overall, I sound obsessive and crazy lol but really...it was great.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I would love to co-write a story with you. Just let me know when you want. Yea, Grace is gonna be a problem. Im glad you've stayed tuned in. LOVE
[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2011 08:27 pm Title: First Flight Jitters
.....Agggh!! Are you trying to kill me or something? Seriously. You write a KICK ASS chapter like this and then nothing?!
I'm going on strike. No more who do you love till I get this damn thing updated.
Lol...I'm just kidding. But seriously, this story is incredible. I nearly melted in my chair when Michael invited her to sit with him and then made her focus on him....sooo sweet.
And then when she got on his lap?!
Ugh. That was incredible.
Author's Response:
LOLI seriously laughed after reading this. Thank you so much for liking this chapter so much! It means a lot coming from one writer I admire a lot. I'm trying to be descriptive as possible, but I really am happy you enjoy it. Thank you so much for giving me some much needed feedback. I've been really wondering if I should finish it. Now thanks to you, it's gonna happen! Can't wait for another chapter in your story! Incredible!