[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2012 05:58 pm Title: He Let Me Down
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UPDATE REQUIRED. NOT OPTIONAL. NOT REMOTELY OPTIONAL.
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I swear to God
I thought i was going to explode until I got to read this and now that i have im like going into hypertension.
SO MUCH DRAMA, TENSION
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chris...I just wanted to go off on him when he called her that.
I MEAN SERIOUSLY?!?!?!?!
I mean, I LOVE CHRIS. BUT RIGHT NOW I HATE HIM.
STUPID NO GOOD *mumble mumble*
Jazz, Anna- I'll load the rifle.
UGH and MICHAEL. Dont EVEN GET ME STARTED.
ITS NOT HER FAULT HE CALLED HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JUST BE GLAD SHE DIDNT HIDE IT FROM YOU YOU JERK..
AND SERIOUSLY. HOW IS IT NECCESSARY TO THROW A PHONE DOWN THE TOILET?!!?!? GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
Author's Response:
ROFL Leah, I love it when you review! Because it makes my day knowing your all wiggin out over this!! BAHAHAHAHA
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2011 02:26 pm Title: Over Reactions
Like you have a right to talk Mr. I'm Bad ROFL.
TEMPY, I've read this twice and all I've got to say is.....THIS IS SO NOT A LEAHDATE!!!!!! I ALREADY READ THIS ROFL.
No, I'm teasing, Seriously, amazing and OMG I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL YOU UPDATE TO SEE CHRIS AND JAZ GO AT IT. BAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
Not to mention Michael and Anna rofl.
So much tension...these boys are about ta DIE!!!!!!!!!!
BAHAHAHAHAHAHA Ok. Update soon.
Date: Dec 23, 2011 10:08 am Title: Home
Hey, new reader! I'm loving your story, beautiful, very interesting.
I'm glad Anna is a great girl and really loves. It will help you go through all that for sure.
Thank You!
Sandra
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2011 08:55 am Title: Home
lovely chapter !
Mike was SO FUNNY when he observed Dr.Black's reaction!
as Chris!
what can I say?
LOOOOOOOOOVE YOU!
MUCH L-OV-E!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Im sooo happy you liked this chapter. I was worried!! Stay tuned for the next update!
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2011 04:54 am Title: Home
ROFL I forgot you mentioned this as a scene idea so I nearly DIED when he walked in on ANNA. THAT. WAS. GENIUS. Lol.
ALSO, JAZ AND CHRIS?! Cutest couple ever. Jaz is so spunky and outspoken and Chris is so hilarious...you do such a good describing Chris and creating chemistry between them I ALMOST WANT A JAZZ AND CHRIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL lady seriously. I love this story! Every time I read it I'm like...with? SHE SERIOUSLY READS MINE?!
LOVE IT. LOVE IT?
LOVE. IT.
AND YOUR UPDATING LATER?!?!?!?
GAH! GO TO BED SO YOU CAN WAKE UP AND UPDATE!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2011 10:48 am Title: Meet The Family.
Who...what...and the she...and I.....gaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!
Crazy old woman. Here Michael is kind...and sweet....and obviously adores her daughter and she has the nerve to ?!
Snarkies!!!
I'm going to go insane. Beautiful tender moments between Anna and Michael...and I'm pretty sure my heart was racing too Anna so don't worry....
Gah!!!!!!!!!! AMAZZZZZZZZING!
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2011 10:30 am Title: Meet The Family.
SAD and SWEET chapter....
I'm DISLIKE when people judge the others by the first look or by what they heard....NOT fair....AT ALL !
as ALWAYS....I BELIEVE that you are talented and beautiful! as all the writers and viewers of this site!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2011 12:53 pm Title: Scream
BAH!
What is with these freaking nurses anyway?! lol
Every time I think about LaToya I just get frustrated all over again. Seriously...I think what makes it so heart breaking is that it actually happened. I mean, can you even imagine?
GAH! Poor Michael. He had to endure so much crap while he was alive.
Anyhoo Miss Thang...it was excellent as always.
AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT!
Maybe now that you've updated I can actually get something accomplished lol.
Much LOVE! MUAH!
Leah
Date: Dec 11, 2011 11:14 am Title: Television Is The Devil
I love it. I hope Michael is okay.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2011 08:36 am Title: Television Is The Devil
DAMN YOU LATOYA!
...GAH! What makes this so annoying is that's actually what she said. HOW DO YOU DO THAT TO YOUR OWN BROTHER?!
Idc that she said she was forced. B.S.
I could never do that to my family.
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! SOOOO MUCH DRAMA!
I'm going insane. I am actually going to go INSANE. UPDATE!!
lol- Seriously. It was good. But update.
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2011 11:45 pm Title: Reunited
WHA-WHEW!!!!!
GAH!
Oh MY SKLDJKL;jask;lfjs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was...gah. I need a minute. Can't even get it out.
PHEW!
That was incredible home skillet....SERIOUSLY.
Amaaaaazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't even know what to SAY because it was that good. Emotion packed from beginning to end...had me on the edge of my seat from the moment I started until the moment I ended.
And Michael and Anna's conversation at the end?!?!?!?!?!
I thought I was going to lose my mind...it was that good.
And now...this picture of Michael flashing over the review box....HAS ABOUT DONE ME IN. RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWR!!!!!!!
LOL Love it :) AS ALWAYS.
MUCH LOVE,
Leah <3
Author's Response:
LOL Ma'am, it's not an MJ story if there's not at least one of him in it! And every picture is sexy, so we lose that battle! Im soooo glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2011 03:15 pm Title: A Road Trip
Ok....IF I REVIEW FIVE TIMES WILL YOU POST TONIGHT?!!??!!
GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't....I can't even TYPE...
So many things going on here...and my hearts all twisted and my brains all muddled! lol
I'm trying to write the chapter for WDYL and I just keep staring at the blank page watching the cursor blink still in COMPLETE SHOCK...
When you said there was a cliff hanger....GAH.
I didn't realize it was GAKJLfasldkfjads!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lady...your writing is incredible...and I get worked up every time I read it. AMAZING FANTASTIC and BRILLIANT.
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2011 11:35 am Title: The Dare
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Woman! I am going crazy lol. First off, I need...NEED...you to repost your other two stories. I have been obsessively replaying the zoo scene over and over again in my mind.
SECOND! I just wanted to say AGAIN how absolutely amazing this story is. I know, i've reviewed every chapter...in psychotic obsessive detail...But I truly think this story is underappreciated and should have it's review count be in the 100s.
Beautiful plot, character development. It's so detailed if I close my eyes I can picture it...and Anna and Jazz have incredibly friendistry...not to mention her chemistry with Michael.
That's enough to bake cookies on.
ANYHOO! :)
Love it girl. Keep it up. AND POST YOUR NEW ONES SO I CAN OBSESS OVER THOSE AS WELL!!!!
Much Love,
Leah
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2011 08:26 pm Title: Back in California...
.........ahhhhhhhhh!
Micheal really needs to stop taking things out on anna. Freaking crazy man.
Anything that deals with something like this gets me worked up lol.
Beautifully written :)
I'm sorry this is so short but idk how muc longer I'm going to last!
Much love,
Leah