[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2013 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: First Encounter
Please Update Soon!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2011 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: First Encounter
it's nice start to a story. but u should rite more nd put more action in ur stoy. make it juicy. How did you pronounce lekerol?
Author's Response:
Don't worry it's getting plenty juicy. you find out whats up with liv in another installment. also you pronounce it [luh-carol]
sorry for the confusion and thanks for you great feedback! Spread the word!
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2011 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: First Encounter
Whassup w/ olivia? or do i jus have to wait to find out, lol?
Date: Nov 14, 2011 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: First Encounter
Kindle I liked ur story but I think u need 2 go over it again. Some of the parts didn't make sense. But overall I like it. I liked the way u put a preview 4 ur summary. The scene btwn olivia 'n' michael was cute. (u should put more of him in the story!!!) Wen will u update?
Author's Response:
I got u girl. I'm working on it. I'll put it up soon. Spread the word about my story if ya wouldn't mind plz ;-)