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Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2010 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 25

Oh YES! I'm so glad she agreed to come with him to Alabama!
Wow, that scene outside when she talked about her father was so emotional..
I really hope things will remain good between them.
Now everything is going so well, it's wonderful ;)
And applause for Diana's ass finally growing up and supporting Tinsley and Michael as a couple
I thought she'd never learn.. I'm so relieved
But that Brooke person trying to make friends with Tinsley.. uhh I dunno.. doesn't feel right to me!
Anyway, keep up the great work and update soon pls?
I can't wait to know what happens in Alabama xD

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2010 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 25

Awww..Cant wait!!!

Thanks for the pic..



Author's Response:

Haha, you're welcome..
I have a lot of rare pictures like this, thought it might be fun to give you guys some visual support ;)

I'll update soon x.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2010 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 24

Ah hell.. wtf does giraffe ass want?? Mike does not want you Brooke!!! Go away, Mike and Tins are HAPPY and IN LOVE!!!! Ugh! I hope Tins and Mike stay together. And marriage?? Hmm.. 

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2010 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 24

great update....i hope brooke doesn't cause to much damage. I love Tinsley and Michael together.

And the part with the brothers teasing michael had me dying.

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2010 08:24 am Title: Chapter 24

I LOVED this chapter, once again

it was so much fun to read the part with Michael and Tinsley.. I loved how they were teasing each other and stuff. They are just the perfect couple!! 

I hope nobody's gonna try to come in between them again. Like that Stupid Brooke Shields!! UGG, I want to just murder her xD

And WOW, what was up with Joseph? Gosh, I always hated that creep - it's hard to imagine that HE is actually Michael's father... 

Anyway, I hope Brooke won't make too much damage again, cause then I'll be SO PISSED!

Update soon PLEASE, I'm on the edge of my seat for more Xxx

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2010 02:39 am Title: Chapter 24

Ohh hell naw, WTH does brooke want??

BTW i just LOVE this line "Na-ah! Don't curse! You know I don't like that…" idk why but i just LOVE it!!

Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2010 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 24

ohhhh crap

Reviewer: CleoLovesMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2010 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 24

Great update, definately worth the wait :)

Uh oh, Brooke, get out of it! 

Update sooon :D xxx

Reviewer: heroxmyworld Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2010 10:08 am Title: Chapter 1

After years of reading fanfics, I had thought that I'd seen the best of them already.....and here you go.........YOU. ARE. AMAZING. you took my breath away with this chapter....the way you organize this, the persona you give Michael and how you display him being a normal man with normal needs, but still implement that unnaturally sweet personality he has...not just the scenes before it were beautiful, but everything about when they finally made L.O.V.E....was....perfect. Please give us the next chapter and don't ever stop!!!I'm so addicted!!

Ps I LOVE the scenes where u made michae and tinsley flirt!(random I know, but exciting just the same!...especially that phone sex chapter...Omg..you're a genius)

I just hope Diana doesn't come back into the picture and seduce him into bed...even though his body, and even his heart longs for tinsley, and is dedicated to her, she knows it's that part of his mind that she will always own, and at the drop of a finger she can decieve him into thinking his heart and body wants her more...omg...u got me thinking too hard...please give us the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Omg, thank you so much for that awefully sweet review!
I never thought people could like my little story that much.. I feel very honored, I gotta say ;)
Again, I'll try updating soon but I can't promise anything.. Stay tuned ;D x

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2010 04:33 am Title: Chapter 23

Damn, I forgot to rate.. Definitely 5 stars for THAT ;D



Author's Response:

Haha. Thank you very much! x

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2010 04:30 am Title: Chapter 23

I'm speechless right now... That had to be the sweetest thing ever!
I can't believe they finally made love!! I'm SO happy! I just hope everything will go well from now on and all the other bitches will back off and let them be happy together.. Cause I doubt that Brooke is gonna leave just like that.
Anyway, GREAT JOB! and please please please don't keep us waiting that long for the next one! You're killing me here XD
xx

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2010 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 23

OMG THAT WAS AWWWWWWWWESOME!!

Wow soo SWEET and cute and romantic!!! wow I really like this Love making cuz that is exacly what it is Love making i loved how he reasure her that she was safe with him and how he was worried if she was reasy or not..So sweet.. Wonderful job!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback. I'm very glad you enjoyed it!
Stay tuned.. x

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2010 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 23

Their lovemaking was beautiful.. perfect!!! And no condom, huh?? Hmm... might be some baby makin goin on soon!! LOL. It was great though, and about time. They both needed that and its good to see them consummate their love. Yay for Tinsley and Mike!!! I'm so happy for them! 

Reviewer: CleoLovesMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2010 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 23

I love this story :) Keep it up :D xxx



Author's Response:

Thank you! I've started with the new chapter already but my time for writing is very limitted these days..
I'll update soon as I can. And I just want to thank everybody for their sweet reviews and stuff!
It's very encouraging.. x

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2010 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 23

YAYYYYY!!!!! Michael and Tinsley finally made love. I love this chapter. Please update soon, I want to know what happens next.

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