Date: Dec 28, 2010 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
Great update....
Date: Dec 27, 2010 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 31
Smdh!!! Jermaine is scum!! Poor Tinsley. I hope her and the baby will be alright. I wish she coulda done more tou fight his ass off though. The damsel in distress thing is getting her nowhere! I just hope she and Michael can move.forward in their relationship.
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2010 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 31
Oh damn DRAMA!
Im so happy michael got back in time to save her! Jermaine is an asshole for trying to hurt his lil brothers girl. Thats dirty. :/
Cnt wait for the next part :D
Date: Dec 27, 2010 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 31
Aww yay Mikey breaking down the door :') I new he'd come and rescue her :)
I really hope the baby's ok.
Great update, thank you xxx
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2010 07:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay first off, this is my review for like the last 30 chapters. Im new to this site and I found out about it like the day after thanksgivings. I saw your story forever ago but I'm going to be honest I didnt want to read it because it already had like 25 chapters done when I came across it. So i was kinda thinking. Mmm I'll read it later. But due to the christmas season; I have already got all my shopping done early because I started like the second week of december. So for like three days I was just home bored and OMG thank you for this story!!!!!! It is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo bomb! I love it!!!
I love how diana was so attached to michael when he started liking tins, I love the fact that the family is really nice to tins expect for michaels jerk brother in this most recent chapter. I love how funny tins friends are, everytime I was reading something that they were inculded in made me laugh espically the part when they met him at the hotel and he invite them to come along with him to an interview I believe. The sex parts! Dont get me start xD hahaha I could go on forever and forever and ever! I just wanted to say all this and rumble on haha because this story is really good and so well thought out! I have MASSIVE respect for you! Keep doing what your doing! Because this story is great I fell in love with it over the cousre of like three days haha. I need to end this review now because I but its like an essay or something now. My bad xD but once thank you so very much for the great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the essay ;p
No seriously, I really appreciate it when people like my story and review,
I'm very glad that you love it and that you took the time to read all 30 chapters..
I know I loved reading your review!
Another update's coming soon ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2010 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 30
Oh GOOD GOD! i cannot believe Jermaine!!
What a sick ass man and a terrible brother!
Oh god, he knows how much Mike and Tins love each other and she is pregnant! Forcrying out loud!
He's lost his sick mind hasn't he? ASSHOLE! I hate him now!
And Brooke Shields? seriously Tins? hell,she's just playing with fire, isn't she?
I hopeBrooke isn't up to something again!! She seems very suspicious to me, for some reason
And the part with the massaging; LOVED IT! Until Frank had to come and ruin it of course ;P
Anyway, update soooon cause I'm dyiing down here!! xx
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2010 03:19 am Title: Chapter 30
Jermaine's a sick bumbaclot.
Date: Dec 21, 2010 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 30
OMG NOOOOO!!!!!! MICHAEL PLEASE SAVE TINSLEY!!! WHERE THE HELL IS HE? AND WHY THE HELL IS SHE TALKING TO BROOKE!!!? I DON'T TRUST HER AND SHE DAMN SURE SHOULDN'T BE TELLING HER ANY OF THEIR BUSINESS!!!! OMG.. PLEASE FIX THIS MADNESS! MICHAEL SAVE YOUR WOMAN NOW, WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU? JERMAINE IS A SICK BASTARD!
Date: Dec 21, 2010 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 30
Awwwe mane Tins. I hope Jermaine don't do nothing to her she pergp for Christ sakes.
Date: Dec 21, 2010 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 30
Yay updates :)
Love it. Update sooon :) xx
Date: Dec 09, 2010 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
Love the story, yes MJ in bed in the Beat It scence he was sexy as hell! He was so cute. Look at him there. Goodness! I miss hime , nice story here!
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2010 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 29
This is a great story girl. Keep it coming.
Date: Dec 06, 2010 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 29
AHHHHH!!! I love the ending...so sexy and so wondeful of Michael to do that. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2010 12:58 am Title: Chapter 29
Pffiieew, is it hot in here or what xD
that scene in Mike's dressingroom made me gasp for AIR!
And that kiss in the end, so adorable!
I can't believe their going public with their relationship.. that's so awesome!
But Tinsley's friends - NOT so awesome! I hate them now xD
Update sooooon x