[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2012 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 33
I love your story. Jared is an asshole lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2011 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 36
Awesome please more
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2011 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 36
Yayyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Michael is backkkkkk!!!!
Sweet adorable sexy funny michaelllllllllll
The smile on my face is too hard to hide. :D
And look at you Sam, poking fun at the king of pop. Haha
Her excitement of them being happy again is so obvious!
I love that feeling!! When life feels perfect again because love is back in your heart!
I honestly died of laughter when she pulled those moves. Belittling them. Haha is that how you spell it? Belittle? Too funny that girl.
Man's oh my G-d. Michael. That man is perfection.
Gah!! Okay so that katy scene. What an evil fucking bitch! That smile. It would drive me up a wall too! How dare she!!!!!!! And again. She better get fired. Fucking evil smile.
And then saying that MICHAEL initiated it? Is she dumb?
Fuck that slut.
Oh wait. The word slut. WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG with michael!!
But that's for later.
Im SO GLAD Sam got to beat the shit out of that bitch. When I first met Katy (yes. As if we actually met. I'm retarded) I liked her! She was inviting! Never thought this bitch would pull THIS off!!
Its so rewarding that she got to hurt her. An that stupid bitch DARED punch Sam in the eye???? Does she not realize the paparazzi craziness involved? She'd probably like that wouldn't she.
Okay. Back to Michael and the pain he causes all the readers to feel. I love how I'm blaming michaels meaness on Michael and not at YOU. Hahahaha
Either way. The "maybe that was a mistake" almost killed me. And when he said that it was obvious he liked HER at the beginning it brought me back to when he was mean at the beginning to be able to hide his feelings. :( I still don't understand the difference from then and after the first show.
Eithet way. He's so mean in fights. "it makes me want to cry" (in Martha's voice in the sound of music when theres thunder)
And I died of laughter when Sam was like.. " it feels like someone punched me in the eye" hahahaha oh Sam. What a funny little character you are.
Okay. Obvious I'm avoiding to comment on the main event? How do you review while gushing on a sex scene without making yourself look like a perv even though everyone else is thinking the exact same thing. Hahaha
So in case you guys haven't noticed my writing style yet. (haha) I helped with him going down on Sam. Haha I felt like it. :)
Gah! But you turn it into is crazy!!!!!!!!!!
and when Sam gave in. I literally almost fell off the chair and off the balcony and landed on parked cars. It was that perfect.
And Michael and Sam's intensity. Gahhhh so perfect. And his sweat. And his eye brows crunching and him biting his lip........... Is it possible to have an orgasm while doing nothing but imagining something? Hahahaha
Okay. Out of perv mode *backs away shyly*.
But that scene where Sam is all hyper and excited REALLY makes me excited!!!!!
I LOVE that top of the world feeling!!!!! And making fun of Michael is the best. Haha
Gahhhhh!!!!!! Overall an amazing chapter worth the 12 hours of sleep you had for. :)
Love you!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2011 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 35.
No seriously. I would DIE if a girl did that to my boyfriend. Yes. I had to reread that last part to make sure it was true and to make sure exactly what happened. So yes. Another rant from me.
WHAT THE FUCK. k no seriously. If that happened to me. Which I was imagining last week because of this skank whore who hangs out around my boyfriend.
My heart would drop. I feel like he would be like..... Tainted. I can't explain it exactly. It's hard. But like if another girl tried to touch him I'd feel like he was ruined. His touch would be ruined. Ah!! I can't explain!! I totally get michaels anger from before. I really do. I get his irrationality even though he took it out on the wrong people and Robert and Xavier should DEFINATELY go and kill him and make it look like an accident.
But like. Ahhhh. My heart is broken for both Sam and Michael. :(
Really. It is. It's so sad when other people touch YOUR girl/man
Seirously I'm sad. They're tarnished. And they need to go cleanse themselves.
Maybe another shower scene? Haha. That's not what I mean but maybe they need a little vacation. Which is impossible when touring. But maybe a romantic date at let's say... His favourite restaurant or something that I memorized. Even the bathroom. And the ceiling. And the menu. And the table cloth. And napkins in the bathroom. And the seating area. AND I snuck into the private seating area to check it out. SO FUCKING COOL.
okay. Enough on that.
I just hope their hearts and bodies recover from this.
I wish them the best.
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2011 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 35.
I feel bad for Daniel. He didn't do anything wrong. :(
I like him already. Bring Robert back. Throw out xavier and keep Daniel.
By the way.. The new bodyguards name is Daniel in case you haven't noticed.
You really like the word venue. Haha
Fucking bitch! I forgot about Katy and her devious ways with all the other drama going on. Not only that. But what kind of rude question is that?!?!!
No your boundaries woman!!!!!
Ooh. Good job naming a character by yourself. Haha I like Ashley. Mean hairdresser lady. Haha
Aww!! The hickey!! Totally forgot about it. :) Gahhh!! What an effing plane ride. Haha realized my tiny pun there.
Ahh!! Michael describing that touch was so perfect. I felt like electric pulses go up my arm thinking about how he must have felt when his girlfriend touched him seducively on stage after a fight where they haven't spoken all day! Gahhh!! Your writing it gold.
Ahhhh!! Okay Michael is killing me!!!!!!!!!!!! I want him to touch me and want me like that. Defitely get your pov now about what I thought wasnt write earlier. :)
Gah!! He makes me so excited I want to scream!!!!!!! He keeps me satisfied just by thinking about him!!!! Lucky Sam.
Okay what the fuck!! I just jumped. Literally. My mouth open and my pupils dialated like mother fuckers.
WHAT THE FUCK YOU STUPID FUCKING BITCH!!!!! IM GOING TO FUCKING BREAK YOUR STUPID FUCKING NECK YOU FAKE CHARACTER PIECE OF SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!
Is she FUCKING crazy!/@@.&2!;728!;!!!!3!719$;$3!!!!!!!!!:$:$:&/@!!!!!
Who the fuck pins michael to a wall and fucking
WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!
Im actually going crazy!!!!!!!!!!
So glad I decided I comment on this chapter piece by piece this time. Or else you wouldn't have read anything above.
NOW I KNOW WHAT THAT FUCKING DEVIOUS SMILE WAS ABOUT.
THAT BITCH IS FIRED DONALD TRUMP STYLE NOW!! Common frank Dileo. Fire that bitch now!! Or does Michael do that.
How does she even think that this is possible?
How does she even think her life could get better because of her stupid action.
PLEASE LET SAM PULL HER FUCKING HAIR OUT NOW!!
Yeah. Moment of shock. But I would rip a girl apart if she touched my man. Fucking RIP HER A FUCKING PART!!!!!!!!!!!
And what sucks is that they were just fighting and I bet she had a millisecond moment of fear where she thought he went to cheat on her after the fight. Even though it would never be true. It would for sure cross her mind fora millisecond.
FUCK THAT FUCKING BITCH!!!!
I wish that she was real so that I could hunt her down and beat her fucking ass.
FUCKING FUCKEN FUCK FULL OF FUCKERY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please kill her off. Please. In a gruesome style.
Thanks autocorrect for teaching me how to spell gruesome.
After she gets fired will she run to the tabloids with some stupid bullshit story to further ruin their relationship and try to get Michael like Jared did for Sam?
What the hell!!!! You're so mean to Sam!! Poor girl!!!!!!
This is the worst thing you've ever done to her. EVER.
Even worse than the thing you almost posted. Even worse!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2011 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 35.
Well ok...I was kind of just creeping on this story and about died when I saw it was updated. It hadn't even shown up on the most recent yet. I was that quick.
SO. THAT SAID. GAH! I'm glad michael got over his hussy fit because he was being an idiot. as for this little hooker that is throwing herself at him...BAH. That girl has issues and just needs to back off. OMG I hope Sam doesnt overreact like Michael did.
Great chapter! LOVE IT!!
Author's Response:
Hahaha, sorry I'm just now replying! :O "Hooker" lmao, that's exactly what she is! Thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2011 10:53 am Title: Chapter 34
Ahhh!!!!!!!
Okay that last scene made me really sad. :( (besides all the drama before) when you see your boyfriend in pain after a fight... Your immediate reaction is to throw away all the fight and make him feel better. :( Oysh. I hate fighting!!
I know the feeling. Hoping that the fight would end but not wanting to appologize or talk about it again. Just wanting things to be better. Forgetting everything ever happened.
But what the fuck!! Now Jared gets MY Robert fired???!!!!?!??!!!?? (oh yeah... Xavier too. No one cares about him though. Haha)
Ive honestly been thinking about this chapter for DAYS!! And I needed to talk about it so bad I almost told my boyfriend about it. Hahaha
Im FINALLY reviewing though!!
But crazy fricken irrational childish Michael. Crazy kid. I love him but seriously?????
Firing Robert? I understand you want to do damage after hearing news like that.... But do it to JARED!!!!!!! (which should happen soon by the way. Wtf. Grow some balls Michael. Haha or rehire Robert to do it for you)
That idiot needs to suffer. He's done ALL THIS and NOTHING has happened to him?? Doesn't make sense. Fix that please. You can only go on so long after messing with Michael fucking Jackson.
Oysh. I would have made Michael feel comfortable on the couch too. I would hate to see him in pain. NOT BECAUSE OF IT BEING ANNOYING TO ME SAM..... But because I dont want to see him in pain. Oy.
First blow up fight!!!!!!!! :D
I am not normal for being happy over that. Haha
But my heart DROPPED when he said for her to go. I could so picture it!! And it hurts!!!!
Dont get me wrong. I cried when I originally read the chapter and my heart hurt. :(
Now I'm ready for more though!! I'll be better with updating me reviews!!
Date: Dec 27, 2011 10:18 am Title: Chapter 34
Thanks, I was looking forward to latest chapter! Wow, such a big fight, it's hard to imagine Michael being that angry, yet I assume that in real life, he really can be very unreasonable at times. I hope everything will work out fine between them, for now it feels like a real cliffhanger lol! He has to work hard to make it up I suppose!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2011 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 34
What the?! HE SAID...AND THEN SHE SAID......
...AND WHEN SHE DID HE.....WHICH IN TURN MADE HER....AND I AM......
OMG!!!!!!!!
Okay, I'm going to require an update....now. Right now. I don't even care that its Christmas...because that can wait.
THIS?! Cannot wait.
BAH!!! This chapter seriously has the potential to drive me insane. I mean...they aren't going to, like, break up....RIGHT?!
OK. Now that I've gotten all that out....
This was...another...amazing chapter. =)
Date: Dec 23, 2011 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 33
OoooOooo, I wander how he'll take the news.
P.S. I think Michael should get Sam Preggers.
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2011 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
lol I was really digging that scene...they always seem to get distracted...Michael needs to quit frontin he knows that he can're resist her
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2011 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay. I HAVE TO BE YOUR 100th review. :)
Congratulations on 100!!!!!!!
We love you so much! You make the best fanfic ever written!!
Your capabilities to really care about these characters and to really make us feel like we're there is spectacular!
Love you so much!
Nathalie.
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2011 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 33
Okay. Woah. So much to swallow.
What the FUCK is wrong with that kid????!!!?!?!,!!!!!!!!?$:73828284&$2!,838&/&;&.&££{*~^|!]£
He deserves a big punch in the face with a broken jaw.
And to think. He started going out with Jess JUST to be closer to Sam? What a fucking ass!!
Jess and Sam are going to be friends in a month or something. I feel it
And I still hate her step mom. What a bitch and a half.
NAND oh my G-d. I wish Robert HURT Jared! I WISH!!
Okay. Onto the cute part. :)
What a devious girl Sam is. Haha after the pic I thought she was going to bing him to babes and nobles or something!
By the way.. I need that pic.
Ugh. Her position is so hard. :( I hope Michael doesn't react harshly. He will though. He'll go nuts. Jared will get his jaw broken. But he wouldn't want to hurt a fly. No matter how horrible they are or how much he hates them.
Oh my G-d. Poor Sam. She never seems to catch a break. :(
And those lucky VS workers! Haha
Boy... I want Michael to whisper something dirty to me. Haha
Im so sad for how Michael is going to feel soon. I'm scared of his pain. I don't want him to feel it. :( but Sam has to say it. :( but ugh!!!!!!!!! She's so strong.
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2011 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 33
Ahh! Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2011 11:58 am Title: Chapter 33
Holy HELL.
Shit is getting ready to fly.
Gaaaaah!!!!!
I about came unglued when Sam opened the door to see Jared....
JARED!
Staring back at her.
....I mean seriously. Get a clue jackass.
And then when he KISSED her?!
I was so glad the body guards were there and saw it all because the whole time I am like
Msfkjsdakfhasdkjfajskff WHAT IS MICHAEL GOING TO THINK??!?!
And her looking through pictures of her and Jess...her only family up until this point...was so heartbreaking.
and then...I'm rambling aren't I? Oh well.
AND THEN! The whole Victoria's Secret thing?? Genius! I loved how shy and unassuming Michael was..
...until she and him were alone and he got all mdsnf.
Gah. Ok. I need to breathe.
Another amazing amazing chapter. And I don't even care that I sound like a raving lunatic. Because it's THAT. GOOD.
Love it! :)
Leah
Author's Response:
Hahahaha, not a raving lunatic at all xD I love this review. "Until she and him were alone and he got all mdsnf." That's how I talk. Lol, not joking, you can ask boozie703, she would know. xD Haha but thanks for reading! And thanks for reviewing too! And well, just thanks! lol Much Love<3