[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2012 11:43 am Title: Chapter 42
Cute chapter :-)
Date: Jan 23, 2012 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yep! Weird al is awesome! Love all his songz, espetially that star warz one and white and nerdy, and amish paridice!
Date: Jan 23, 2012 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 42
I love this story! Its crazy how I'm just now reading it. Keep it up, girl!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! :)
Date: Jan 23, 2012 09:36 am Title: Chapter 41
Get yourself an egg and beat it! Hahaha loved thsi chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! and haha! Gotta love Weird Al! <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2012 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 41
Just eat it! Eat it. Eat it! Eat it. Get yourself an egg and beat it!!
Haha
Yayyyyyy!!!!!!!!
Happy hyper mood!!!!
I could smell the fresh air and the sunlight and feel the freedom and happiness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Gahhhh!!!!!!
Thank you!!!
I'm happy happy happy happy. :)
I'm hyper. But not what hyper is supposed to represent. Just hyper hyper!
And ew. I hate the smell of freshly cut grass.
But Michael was talking to meeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! I'm the one who basically never tried French toast. Yay!!!! My fantasy of Michael making French toast for me is somewhat complete. :) I now know his cute adorable reaction.
I love that he kept smiling during the whole chapter!! He's so happy to be home!! His beautiful wonderful perfect neverland. :D
Is it weird that I'm understanding Michael and his attachment to neverland even MORE through this story?
Like why everything he bought was so expensive and luxurious. It's because he really wanted to make HIS home PERFECT. And how he must feel when he's home. :)
Excited about finally able to be free and do everything he's ever wanted!!
And GRRRR. I CAN'T BELIEVE MICHAEL IS THE TYPE TO LEAVE THE BATHROOM WET. Pet peeve.
And I. Oops. Sam. Must have looked hot in his shirt. :)
I love how Michael looks her up and down and jut can't get enough of her. How perfect she looks to him. Gah! Best feeling EVER!! It makes me feel like the most perfect beautiful girl in the world when Michael does that to me.
And yes. Readers. MICHAEL. TO ME. You read that right. Haha :)
But yay! They're so cute cooking together. I would have thought Sam new a few things in her kitchen given her background.
And what's happening to her apartment in the mean time?
Wow. The rehearsals seems like FOREVER ago. Sneaking around... The jacket.
Speaking of which......
And why did Michael leave the bed in the morning? :(
But GAH! I love this chapter!! Can't wait till part two!!
I was about to write a spoiler. Haha
GAH! French toast!
Michaels smile!!!!!!!!!
That smile I kept picturing and it was making me melt and die and hyper (sexy way) and hyper (happy way) and GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love happy chapters!!!!
I can't wait till..... Saturday?
Love you!!
Nat. Secretly known as Sam in this story. It's clearly about me.
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2012 07:15 am Title: Chapter 40
Ahhhh!!!!!
Amaaaaaziiiiiinggggg
I'm so excited that they're in neverland!!
And mmmmmm :) so perfect.
GAH! I wish I was Sam!
I laughed at the no underwear thing. Hahaha oh Michael... You want easy access don't you.
And you made a mistake somewhere. :) I'll let you figure it out. My only clue is that it's not a spelling or grammar mistake. :)
But GAH! They're in neverland! The magical world of neverland. Where everything is beautiful and perfect! :)
Michael wouldn't skimp out on anything on his sanctuary of a home.
I wish it never got ruined in the raid where they didn't even have a warrant and stole things!
Okay. Back to happy thoughts. Sorry. But mmmmm the moooooon. :)
Now I'm thinking of the song scared of the moon. Now I'm in heaven. Hehe
I wonder how Sam will fit in at neverland. This is a point of curiosity for me hehe
Now. About the writing style. It makes me really sad. :(
It's as if we're not apart of their lives any more. Before we were in their head and they were telling us their story. But now... Now it feels like they've moved on from us and we're just prying. :(
I want to be in their head again. Please switch back soon. :(
And pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaassssseeeeee I don't want to miss ANYTHING of this magical place! I don't want to miss a second of their lives! So no more cutting off places unless they went to bed or you continue off exactly where you left off!!
Make this week last a month!
But yeah... Amaaaaaaaazzziiiiingggg first night at neverland. It was magical and special and I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!
I love love love it.
So no more skipping.
Muah! (I hope this was as good as my original review that is lost forever.)
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2012 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 40
I just joined and read your story over the past few days. I am really enjoying it. Thank you for keeping me so entertained. I love the characters you've created and especially how well Michael and Sam get along. Most writers add fights to add drama, but I like your approach of a beautiful healthy relationship! It is what I hoped he experienced with some lucky lady in his life. I'll be checking back often for updates. Again, thank you for this lovely story.
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2012 03:00 am Title: Chapter 39
that was beautiful chapter girl. im so sorry amelia i hadn't review in a while. cant wait for the next chapter. i enjoy ur story as usual.
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2012 02:46 am Title: Chapter 39
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Ok, so....AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry, realized i had to get another one out before I reviewed.
This chapter was soooooooooooooooo descriptive...and SO MUCH happened.
Like, HOLD THE PHONES...my head is spinning.
Jess, and Sam...are recoinciling?! I mean, I know they are best friends blah blah blah but geez...Jess does nothing but continually let Sam down and Sam just comes eventually crawling back to her.
Which, at some point is being the bigger person and at another point is.
SAM WHAT ARE YOU THINKING?!?!?!?!
UGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH I've seriously about had it with Jess. She better not act like a damn ass again if Sam is going to give her another chance because then i'm going to be seriously p'oed.
In my mind? Jess is as bad as Jared.
stupid, lying, cheating bas.... dot dot dot.
Michael....breaks my heart. I mean, that would have destroyed him an accusation like that. I love how tender and understanding Sam is with her,,,major props to Sam that she is letting him bypass the interview and...
Rofl...Michael's face turning unamused as she went to pack. AHAHAHAHA that was a nice touch.
and now they are on their way to neverland...the place of dreams.
Love it, super psyched for the next chapter.
!KLJQWKLEJKLJUDEWDJKLSDJKLSD :)
Leah <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2012 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 39
GAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm so freakin excited!!!!!!!!!!!
Sp glad I made you realize they could go to the magical world of neverland. :)
Ahh!! Ahh!! Ahh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And she's off her "girl time" as she put it. Which I will steal for future discussions. Haha
And ahh!! Merry I rounds! And ferris wheel! And candy! And train! And wilderness! And ahhhhh!!!!
Wait. I just realized something really sad. :(
Her childhood not being the best thing in the world.
Here she can experience it!
Ah! The movie theater!! And Michael's giant ass king style bedroom :)
They can finally breathe air outside for more than 0.5 seconds from door to car door and car door to door. Haha
And they can escape from ALL the drama!!!!!!!!
Wait... Does it have to be ruined by Sam seeing Jess? Not this week. PLEASE not this week. Not during their mini vacation.
And what an AWESOME surprise!!
I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay. Instead of discussing the future. Let's discuss the chapter haha
So that pre-phone call with jess. I mean I knew it kept being interrupted because I could see the next break coming in the writing. But I laughed so hard - in public again -_- - when she kept interrupting herself. Haha
Especially when she started talking about Michael I was like MY G-D WOMAN! PRESS SEND! And then she did. By mistake. And then I honestly got panicked. As of -I- was calling Jess! It was insane! Your writing makes me go crazy!!!!!!!!!!
Then the whole convo happen. That was a perfect convo. You're right!! It was just flowing out! Honesty one of the best chapters!
Then Michael coming home. I hope Jess didn't think that Sam needs to hide things from michael. And I'm curious about her thoughts on Sam's black eye. Cause if she thinks. For ONE seocnd. That Michael would do that to her? I'll shoot her in the head 5 time, dic a ditch and dump her in it then light her on fire.
Okay. That was a bit insane. I'm just angry about how tired I am. Haha
But Oysh! Michael and his sadness made me so sad!! I felt so bad for him. :( that he's forced into these things and Oysh! :( I know he hates interviews.
But Sam did. PERFECT job at calming him down. Seriously! No woman can make Michael feel the way she makes him feel. No one. She knows exactly what to say and how to say it and oh my G-d!! They're so perfect!!!!!!
And how Michael knew how she'd react to neverland? THEY'RE SO PERFECTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wonder what annoying habbit that Michael has bothers her. Haha
But either way. You built that suspense like crazy!
And you're so right! Sam was so mean to Michael about the off her period thing. Haha
I hope Michael doesn't get in trouble for canceling he interview. Like I hope the network doesn't sue him or frank doesn't yell at him or anything.
But I love how Sam refuses for him to defend himself over something so stupid!
I love it sooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!
And that she would do the interview for him. That girl had balls! .... Yeah. Haha
I hate when women talk like they're men. It's just weird and sounds stupid. Either way.
Youre suspense is sooooooo perfect!
Honesty. If I didn't know ahead of time I'd be DYINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!
And I'm happy Robert made it into the chapter. :) but not my jacket. :(
But either way!
This was gahhhhh!!!!!!
So amazinggggg!!!!!!!
And it's may! So te flowers are blooming! I wonder if they're going to go for a walk in the wilderness and.......... You know. Haha
But miagical! Keep the whole week magical!!
And I love michaels reaction to being home. :)
His home. :)
Ah! Michael's HOME.
What a sanctuary.
I can't wait to read the next chapter you have noooooo idea!
Will I be helping? :) haha
Love youuuuuuuuuuuuu
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2012 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 39
Neverland!! Woot Woot! lol I'm glad that she finally called Jess.
Date: Jan 11, 2012 10:52 am Title: Chapter 38
lol I can't get over Katherine asking her if she was on the pill. I'm glad that Katy is getting fired though and that waitress was a bitch!
Author's Response:
Hahaha, and ugh, I'm sorry I haven't reviewed your story yet! :( I've been writing two fanfics and school is keeping me busy, so I'll try and catch up this week! <3 Love you!
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2012 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 38
Bah. That last part made me sad. How she spoke about parents approval. And then Jess.
But yayyyyyy!!!!!! Katherine and Jo (we think) like Sam and things are happy and just yayyyy!!! I love it when they're happy!
And Im starting to really feel bad for Michael... I mean the whole shutting down everyplace he went to. :( I heard he shut down part of the Vatican when he went!! The fricken vatican!!!!
But :D I love these two. Katy is getting fired. Robert is back. Michael has thought about marrying Sam before. His parents love her.
Life is perfect! :)
Except the never seeing regular people thing.
And that dumb bimbo. Yes. Michael is going to fall for you because you smiled at him and not anyone else. Sit the fuck down and shut up. (I miss Kingsley)
I like Sam's name for the bitch. And I wonder what would happen if they saw each other tomorrow!!
And Katy saw her with a black eye!!! Gahhh
I love them! I want them to get married on the tour while they're in Italy. It's decided.
No! Paris!!
I could help with te French once they get to France.
Can they have friends? I mean.. They're always alone. I want them to hang out with people.
Like maybe Elizabeth Taylor and her husband in '88 can hang out. Go for dinner and I don't know.
Shes on her period.. She has to do SOMETHING.
And ahh!!! Robert is lactose intolerant. :(. I actually have a song I made up in middle school about lactose intolerant people. It was a sympathetic song.
I'm hyper! I love it whn they're happy!!
What else happens in life?
And how does Michael have all this free time?
And where's bubbles.
And..... For everyone thats reading this....... REVIEW!!!!!!!
Let her know where you want this story to go! Let her know how much you love it!! It's a crime not to!
Where are they on tour? How many months left?
Bahhhhh move international already!!
Go site seeing!
Visit children and buy presents!!
Is it Christmas soon?
I want to meet them.
Im hyper.
Good bye.
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2012 10:44 am Title: Chapter 37
Sneaky little devious Michael. Hahaha what a mean surprise at the restaurant haha
But YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY ROBERTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh. And Xavier. Haha
But yay!!
And bah. So I guess this period will mean less sexy time. :) haha
But GAH! You make me feel right THERE with your writing! I want Michael to kiss my neckkkkkk.......
Maybe he will later. :) haha (and yes. I mean real life)
Girls. They wanna have fu-un. Haha yay!! I wanna dance and party!!
Okay. This review is lame.
But what the hell Michael. What the hell. Pulling the whole meet the parents thing.
But Gahhh.. He's too sexy. I forgive him. I want his body NOW!
And what a horny little bastard. Haha
I swear. It's the WORST THING when you want someone so bad. And they want you so bad also... And you're alone..... And you CAN'T! Grr.
And I officially decided that the show they watched was step by step.
And now that song is in my head. Good job me.
And how dare same touch michaels clothes with greasy fingers.
Oh my G-d!! I just realized!!!!!! She's meeting his parents with a black eye!!!?????
Michael you are MEAN!!
And if Michael caught her reading that trash I bet he would have gotten mad at her. :(
Bur yay! Katy fired! Katy fired!
I can't wait to see what happens at this restaurant.
A black freaking eye! GAH. He's mean. But oh so sexy.
Gotta go! Boyfriends here