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Date: Feb 23, 2012 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 9

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Date: Feb 23, 2012 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 5

:D I can't with the cuteness!

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Date: Feb 23, 2012 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 3

It's getting better and better!

 

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Date: Feb 23, 2012 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story so far. It's looking to be very cute :)

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Date: Feb 18, 2012 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 45

Oh. my. G-d.

That was hot.

*deep breath*

okay. so GAH!

You should have seen me reading this.You would have laughed.

The second Sam pulled out the french maid outfit I literally hopped on my bed on my knees and waved my fists excitedly. hahaha

I was like Oh my G-d! I forgot! and I was like finallyyyyy at the same time. haha it was funny.

My G-d.. Michael.... FUCK! Oh my G-d.

That man. That sexy ass man.

How he needed to touch her, to fuck her, to.. oh my G-d.

That was too amazing.

Nice touch with the handcuffs. :)

But when she took them off... oh my G-d.

and the neck, the lips... the "spread your legs"

How do you.

just... how do you write this. I don't get it. I still don't. Even after my three scenes.

 

*long pause with closed eyes reimagining that scene*

 

I want him.

I'm typing with my eyes closed. let's see where this goes.

but oh my G-dddddddddd........ I need him all over me... wanting me. Needing me..

 

ooh! no spelling mistakes!

but gah! not just that! but the "endless love" scene!!!!!!!

That was so magical. Him singing in her ear... I almost fainted than died because it was so romantic.

Just. .... gah!... pause. for a second. close your eyes. and imagine Michael holding you and whispering the lyrics to "endless love" in your ear.

wow.

really. wow.

and I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEEEEEE how they were reminising about when they first met. and how it all happened and just. OH MY G-d!!! That was so amazing! 

"do you remember the time...." hahahaha

He's too amazing. Cancelling auditions for a major part in his tour... all because he had a crush on a girl.

those poor other girls. :(

but who the fuck cares about them. haha

I just know I'd be crushed.

but GAHH!!!

and I keep forgetting that Sam is a dancer. I can't picture it. but I guess she is. haha

She just doesn't have a dancer personality. She's only good for strutting. She can't actually dance dance. Not like... artistically or anything.

but either way..

I got sooooooooo excited when you mentioned that they were going to the dance studio! I was like NO WAYYYY!!!!!!!!!

SHE REMEMBERED HOW I WANTED A SCENE IN MICHAEL'S SANCTUARY!!!!!!!

.... but then THAT didn't happen. but the love, the romance, the beauty of the whole scene made up for it. :)

and I love the maid! I'll call her Helena. I don't even know if that's a real name. but it just came into my head.

Hello helena. You are swedish with your blonde hair. except you don't have a strong accent because you moved to the states when you were young. around 10. You still have fond memories of all the chocolate you used to eat because your father owned a swedish chocolate company. but then when you moved to the states (because the chocalate company had to close because of the corproate chocolate companies), your family had to start over with not much. your mom continued her work as a masseuse while your father worked jobs here and there. You eventually worked for the jacksons family to help your parents out with money. You knew a cleaning job couldn't be hard and that wealthy families like the jacksons would pay well.

....

yeahhhhhh......

back to it.

So Helena, she was so sweet!! I loved how she told Sam that she's never seen Michael happier. :) She was so sweet. :)

I wonder what happens to the staff while Michael is gone. 

 

My... endless loooooveee....

Thanks for putting another song in my head. :)

"My love... there's only you in my life...."

gahhh.. that song is so amazing. so romantic.

Lionel and Diana. What a pair.

Hey!! I WANT A MICHAEL AND DIANA SONG! WTF!

That man loved her so much.

"What I didn't know.... what I didn't know... was that you were going to be so sexy."

GAH! Then they both blush!! :D

I LOVE it when she said that.

"and IIIIIII.... I want to share all my love with youuuuuu"

I need more dying romantic scenes. I rather that over mindnubbing sex scenes. Even if it even numbs the mind of the reader!!!!

or. instead. more story lines. more... stuff. more ..

oh shit.

She never saw Jess. :)

haha

bitch. :)

but gahhh.. I'm sad their vacation is over.

mmm... I want to dance in Michael's arms. I bet it feels warm. and he's such an old school gentlemen... I bet you feel courted and loved and respected and just... a purely romantic feeling.

mmmmmmm.... him singing in my ear........ :) *heaven*

.... that means I died.

I love that he was listening to Janet. :)

What year was this again?

cause Rhythm Nation came out in 89.

either way.

LOVED this chapter. :)

I can't wait for them to go over seas!

 

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

7 hour plane ride.

and oversea plane rides by the way... are always at night.

gah!

that meanss they'll have to sleep too. :(

but !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

will that be broken up in three/four chapters?

every part of what's happening has enough words to fill an entire chapter?

... oh G-d.

That'd be amazing.

and even while they sleep!

You have SOOOO many dreams while you sleep.

gah!

I CAN'T WAIT FOR THIS TO CONTINUEEEE!!!!

LOVED IT!

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2012 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 44

Awwwwww!!!!!!!

That girl is the sweetest cutest girl ever!!!!!

Its like Michael got the kids stamp of approval for Sam. :D

Yay yay yay

What an adorable girl!!!! :)

 

Oh. Her name is Isabelle. What a pretty name. :)

What a sweetheart Michael is. See. THATS a way to motivate kids to stay in school. :)

 

Alone. In neverland. At night. With Michael. On a ferris wheel. What heaven have you created?

Haha it's true. It is HIS ferris wheel. Haha

Oyshhhhhh. "I'm glad I have someone to sit up here with me now"

That was such a romantic line. I love it. He's so happy to be with Sam. It's so evident. I love it. I love love love it. 

Gah! I'm in love with their love. I'm getting the whole dizzy love feeling now. <3

Awwwwww

I totally get them. I get him missing her. And I get their love. I just. Gahhhh

This is so romantic I could die happy right now. 

 

Emotions turning into a physical expression of their love. :)

I love how Sam is like. Not here! We're on a ferris wheel. Hahaha

Gah. What a fucking sexy man. 

Hahahahaha he magically pitched a tent.

 

Oh my G-d. Twin moment. Haha you wrote tent too!!

 

Yay!! They're doin what I wanted them to do for so long! Haha

Haha what a dumb ass. Oh Sam. 

 

Okay mr and mrs Jackson. Get to the fricken event and stop talking in unnecessary language. 

 

Gah! Somewhere between torture and crazy is perfect. 

And I love how Michael is doing everything. :)

GAH. His chuckle is so sexy. I'm actually dying. 

Holy hell is right. 

Yes he did win. He was driving ME crazy!

This scene will reply in my mind for months!!!!!!!

Oh my........

:D

Sam's turn. GAH *hoping you go in detail on his body now*

Fuck. 

Turned on Michael is the fucking sexiest G-Ddam thing on the planet. 

*devilish smile*

Michael swore. :D

Okay now SAM is being sexy. Haha "i want you"

G-d I love him. 

Oh I know that Michael face. I know it well. 

Oh wow. 

Michael. King of sex. 

Mmmmm I love that he was kissing her neck without really realizing. :)

Gahhhhhhhhh

Hes fucking perfect. 

Thank you for that perfection of a chapter. 

Thank. The fuck. You. 

 

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2012 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 43

My G-d!!!!!

I can't stop grinning!!

Not only was that the best morning wake up ever. But Michael with the kids!! And the sneaking off like teenagers 

Aww. I'm not a teenager anymore. :(

But ahh!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay. So the morning wake up. 

That was so hot. I'd love to wake up next to Michael looking gorgeous and him being playfully horny for me and then GAH!

And then him driving me crazy for a whole hour+ with his...

Gahhhh

And I love how Sam let her hair air dry. :)

Relaxed Sam. :)

And then when she was nervous. I'd be nervous too!!!!!

And Michael being the perfect most understanding boyfriend. What a sweet heart. 

 

I would imagine it being a turnoff for him that his girlfriend isn't a kids person. But I guess he just sees that she's nervous and that she would for sure love kids and have a whole bunch of fun!! :)

 

The train ride is SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!

I remember when I was younger I went on one and when I saw that Michael had one it reminded me of my childhood. :) and I remember the ferris wheel I went on and everything. 

I want to go to neverland so bad!!!!!!!!!!

Reopen neverland please!!!!! I'll work there for free to help with the crazy payments. 

 

Okay. This is what I'm imagining. The second part is probably already perfectly complete but I imagine Sam having a bonding moment with one of the girls who's sad about something. :( and Sam making her feel better. 

And those kids hugging Michael is just too adorable!!

 

I've never understood what the zipper is. Explain please. 

I want to go!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

And them sneaking off is so hot. Haha

G-d that morning was perfect. I want to wake up like that every morning. 

 

Gah! I love seeing Michael with kids!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He becomes like "captain kid" who just has a bunch loads of fun!!!!!!!!! :D

I can't wait for part 2. You have no idea. 

Tomorrow please! During my big break so that I can read and review!!

Gah! I'm so obsessed!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: MJsMagic Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2012 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 43

Sounds like so much fun! Thanks for the great updates, really enjoyed reading them.

Author's Response:

Haha I wish I could be Sam! And thank you! <3