[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2011 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 15
Mmmmmmm :)
I love that happy feeling. :D best ever!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2011 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 14
He's perfect. He's the perfect man. Just.... Perfect.
Jess and Sam on the other hand? Both acting immature.
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2011 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
So again... Kiss on the cheek is so romantically adorable!
I love the changes to the chapter! So perfect!!
And I could picture Michael smiling and tilting his chin up like a little kid when Mary kissed him on the cheek! Haha
I love their connection.
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2011 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh!! And when he kissed her on te cheek.... Most romantic thing ever!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2011 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
Love the choreography excuse!!
I love how Michael just KNOWS everything. Like how she came just for a kiss.
And is she stupid? If it was morning and I had 2 hours of nothing in front of me.. I would pass out on the nearest flat surface!! Haha
I loooooooove Michael!! That smile is making me weak in the knees. And not to mention that laugh when he leans into a kiss! Ahhhhhh
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2011 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 11
THE JACKET!!!!!!!! With all this craziness I forgot about my favourite part of the story!! That famous jacket!!!!!!
This seen drives me wild (no Michael song pun attended... Beeeeep beep beeeeep)
Every second of that seen ran through my brain and I felt every second of it!!
Your writing is GOLD!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2011 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
You're welcome. :)
Ill never get sick of reading that seen. The "I've wanted to do that... Everyday.. Or the last... Month" drives me crazy every time!!!!
Oddly enough this time reading through everything.. I don't feel the month that passed. :(
I wish I did. Maybe it's because everything was posted at once. Dunno.
Love it either way!! This story is still perfection!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2011 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
Changed it up I see. Haha
Love it so much more this way! I didn't think I could love it more. But I do!
It takes some of the pain of Michael being different -away. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2011 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
Silly Jared. After a girls been kissed by Michael Jackson.... She has higher standards. No matter how cute you are. Haha
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2011 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
Cutiepie. Opening the door for her.
I love the low irritated sound. I could soooo hear and picture it perfectly.
Love love love!
Author's Response:
Thank you <33
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2011 10:12 am Title: Chapter 7
Ahhhhhh!!!!!
One. I LOVE the added part! So secretive and sexy.
Two. What the hell!! I want to continuation of he enddddd!!!!!!!
Ahh!!!!
Upload RIGHT NOW please. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2011 12:07 am Title: Chapter 6
I'll get you back in the mood of writing with this comment!!!!
Ahh! I forgot about this rehearsal! My memory is mean.
Hut ah!! He for sure used the excuse of a rehearsal JUST to see her. :)
I loooooooovvveeeeee him!!!!!!!
His cute face and his perfect dancers body and ahhhhh!!!!!
If you need help with the next chapter let me know!! Cause THAT'S when I started memorizing the chapters. Hahaha
I can't wait for more!!
Love! Love! Love!
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2011 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
HOW IN G-D'S NAME COULD I HAVE FORGOTTEN THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!
Its now forever imprinted in my brain.
Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cutiepie!! He's so shy!!!!! I want to bight his face he'a so cute!
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2011 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ahhhhhh!!!!! I've missed this story so much!
I love every minute of it. Michael is the sweetest.
Now I feel like crying. But I'm trying to pretend he's still here.
Loveeeee the storyyyyyyyyyyyy.
Date: Nov 06, 2011 07:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Find a way to delete this chapter without deleting the whole story? And how do they have different word counts???