[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2011 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 20
that was entertaining to see that michael is the jealous type too. this chapter is spectular and magical. i see that u block out the steaming. is it something that u dont enjoy writing. im sorry im curious.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) And yeah... It's not my favorite thing to write. :/ I don't want my story to just be about sex. So I tend to write it like... you know it happened but I don't want it to be horribly detailed.
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2011 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 20
Ah! I wondered when Jared would stir things up lol. Love it!
Author's Response:
Let the stirring begin! xD lol Thanks!
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2011 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 19
*PITTY!! PITTY PARTIES!! Not potty parties. Haha
Imagine even worse. Michael getting walked in on while he's peeing. Oh jeez. Jess has to do that eventually. I would die.
And where's my favourite jacket!! Bring my favourite character back!! I need more info for my "jacket stalking blog".
Oh. And Jared is still annoying. Clingy kid. And I KNEW I wouldnt like Jess on this tour. Breaking up mj+sr time.
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2011 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 19
Just reread cause I knew I had comments that I forgot to say.
1) I guess when it comes to the fight or flight response... Michael is flight. Haha
2) I also do that sometimes!! When I text I love you and type it slowly cause I really mean every word I say. Even though they won't read it as slow and meaningfully (haha) like I meant it.
I don't like how Sam's bringing herself down. She's gotta stand up for herself! No more I don't feel worthy enough!
She's gotta start watching oprah. Haha Oprah says: you are worthy because you are here.
No more potty parties!
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2011 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 19
Damn that was alot to digest. That was amazing chapter amelia. If michael was ur man would u be jealous like samantha or would u trust him. I loove reading your story. I commented on ur story before my otha account is keepitinthecloset. Like i said before u have true talent. When i said this i really mean it. :) have a wonderful day L.O.V.E
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2011 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 19
First off, you find the most amazing pictures of Michael lol. This story keeps getting better. Love the quick updates cause I am addicted!
Author's Response:
Awe, every picture of Michael is an amazing picture ;) And thanks!!! <33
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2011 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 19
:) love it. :D
He's the bestttttttttttttttttttttttt. The sweetest! Te most caring and compassionate and ahh! I love him!!!!!!
Date: Nov 14, 2011 12:49 am Title: Chapter 2
Oooo the second number is HIS number isn't it? Mikey is askin' for a BOOTY CALL! GEEETTTT ITTTT MIKE!
Date: Nov 14, 2011 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1
What a fun start to the story! What I'd give to be in Samantha's shoes! So many times living in LA had I wish I'd come across a chance meeting with Michael Jackson! Go SAM!
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2011 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 18
Damn jess came in the wrong place wrong time. Lol anyways theres too many interruptions. Oh well i guess its call life. Another beautiful chapter. I kinda laugh when jess said holy shit. If that happen to me i would feel awkward. Cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks love <3 Working on it right now! You can expect it tomorrow night :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2011 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 17
Its cute how michael is shy. But when michael licks his lips or how he bite his lip thats sexy. Beautiful chapter by the way. The stuff i write about in a chapter its embarrassing for me to write too. But dont worry how embarrassing it is just pour ur heart out sweetie. :) m.u.c.h l.o.v.e
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2011 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 18
Love this!
Ahhhh... Michael is so mortified....
I can't wait to see what he does next about it!
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I know :( I felt bad for doing it. Working on the next chapter now! :) Thanks for reading <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2011 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 18
next part ASAP!!!! pleaseeeee!!! :D
Author's Response:
Working on it right ;) Thanks!
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2011 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
Lol the end of this chapter was an awesome twist. Another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2011 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm goin to kill her. I'm ACTUALLY going to kill this fake character.
I don't want Michael to be embarrassed like thatttttttttt!!!!!!!!
He's for sure freaking out and mad and embarrassed and noooooooooooooooo
I'm maddddd. :(
Author's Response:
LOL, I might kill my own fake character xD
Poor Michael... :( Just wait for next chapter :)) It'll get better.