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Reviewer: boozie703 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2011 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 25

If you could only see my face right now. Michael makes my heart melt every seconddddddddddd From that "love you" text to him saying he wants to take we out to dinners. This man is my heart!! And woah! That sexual tension on stage almost killed me! I noticed the cues were changed. Tsk tsk. But I like these cues better. Haha K.. I'm not normal for noticing that. Usually she steps out on the growl and leaves I think at the end of the second chorus. <- I'm crazy. Either way. They're getting dangerous on stage. Some tatiana stuff is about to happen on that stage. Or even some akon!! (if you heard that story) I pictures it do perfectly!! Loved every second of it. :) I wish I was Sam. :( Either way.... The main event. The semi exposure. How did people find out he had a girlfriend????? Please don't tell me Jess and idiot. But I'm happy Michael's happy about it. :) Except Sam has NOOOOOOO idea what she's in for. I suspect death threats, crazy mean tabloids and more crazyness her way. Gah! Can't wait to hear how it all turns out!! Where's my jacket!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I missed Katy. Oh! That's what I forgot to say.... Sam is VERY bad at playing dumb. Ever since they first suspected her.. She could have been like. "really?!?!?!! Who?????" And this time she could have been like.. " I know!!!! I'm so lucky!!" Bad job Sam. Bad job. I should take over your life. I'd do better. :)

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2011 12:36 am Title: Chapter 24

Oh my G-d. Michael put me in such an in love mood!!!!!!!! Perfect words. "Sam if you only knew how many of my smiles were caused by you"
Ahh.
And what the fuck is wrong with Jess!! All Sam has to do is SHOW her te messages.
I wonder what jared told her.
And how could she not believe Michael when he confronted Jared? Like Michael would lie.
Oh my G-d. Moreeeeeeeee. It's needed!
And I love how sam wants Michael I beat Jared up. Hahahahaha
I had more to sayyyyy. But I forget.
I want my jacket!
And I have a crush on that security guard. I shall call him Robert. It suits him. I wonder if he's the one who stayed with Sam or left with Michael.. Where Michael closed the elevator door on his face. Haha
And whether or not it's the same security guard that picked up Sam and was quick with opening the door. Hmmmmm. So many questions.
You could tell im tired right? Won't be able to sleep anyway!!
Cause Michael sang smile to herrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Sweety pie. He made me smile like a loon for a good 5 minutes.
So. Who's this unknown number. Scaryyyy. Cause unknown number means different cell phone!! Meaning... Somebody else's phone.., meaning somebody else knows? It's prob Jess/Jared from someone else's phone. But still. It's someone ekse's phone!!

K.. I'll try to sleep with that image of michael with those adorable worried eyes.

Reviewer: Lexi87 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2011 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 24

Awww! The scene between Michael and Sam was amazing.



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Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: Leahluv21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2011 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 24

*hyperventilates* AHHH!

How dare Jess blame her for Jared's stupidity?

I'm dying to know who wrote the text message.

Loved the tender scene between Michael and Jess.  Beautifully written!



Author's Response:

Thank you! <3 I'll try and post the next chapter ASAP. 

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2011 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 23

By the way... Best picture of Michael EVERRRRRRRRRRRR

Reviewer: Meganjackson Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2011 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 23

damn girl your story is better than mine. O_o i love reading this its beautiful breathtaking and entertaining. maybe jared leave samantha im glad michael put him in his place ^.^

Author's Response:

Awe, thank you!!! <3 

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2011 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 23

Okay.. I couldn't stop myself from reading. I'm currently under a towel breaking in steam with eucalyptus oil. So sick. :(
Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!
So amazing!!
I got so excited when it was michaels point of view that I switched positions with a smile on my face eager to read!!
So perfect!!
And if this is the way people find out... Then it's even more perfect. Cause any other way wouldnt have been as dramatic as this!!!!!
Loveeeeee!!!!
I feel really bad for Jess. But who wouldn't. :(
I'm glad that idiot got what he deserved. His idol YELLING at him. And finding out his ex that he has a crush on is going out with HIM. :D
Justice has been served on this case. :)
Love love love!!!!!!
Can't wait for more!!!!
Once you leave I'll have to reread everything to keep me busy!! Haha
How long are you leaving for?????
Love you!!

Reviewer: meggie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2011 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 22

this is wonderful chapter i dont like jared. waiting for the next chapter

Reviewer: sonflin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2011 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 22

LOL!!! :D

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2011 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oy. :(
Michael insecure about Sam leaving him?? That's so heartbreaking. :( and I could never imagine Michael writing jackass!!!! Woah!! Jared is one though. What the fuck.
I hate that kid.
But ahhhh!!!!!! Bubbles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If I met bubbles I would have played with him for HOURS!!
And Sam didn't relay the message from the fan. Not cool. Haha
Love it!!
What will happen if or when Jared finds out who Sam is dating. Haha Michael and him yelling at each other would be the most rewarding thing ever. After all this shit Jared has done. Haha

Reviewer: Lexi87 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2011 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 22

.....agggh! Jared has some nerve doesn't he? I really love the friction between him and Michael. Also loved the last chapter when they were opening the fan mail lol. That was the cutest scene ever.

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Thanks!! :) <3 

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2011 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 21

i couldnt but laugh when samantha was reading the letters. i love when michael blushes it was cute. i enjoy reading this story.

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Thank you! :) 

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2011 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 21

:D
Perfect. It had just the right amount of everything. :)
Annoying Jared, heartbreak, anger, fun, sexyness, cuteness.
I really DON'T think Michael knows how much bighting his lip drove everyone! Men and women. Crazy. Haha

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2011 12:58 am Title: Chapter 20

Is it bad that I kinda want Michael to still be mad?? Haha I want to explore this Michael madness haha

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2011 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 20

K.. I almost had a heart attack. Totally forgot about that kiss and ahh!! Okay. Calm down and think about the other things you were going to comment on. But ahh!! Michael or mad!! I got really scared. Haha I mean it would take a LOT to get Michael mad. And ahh. If Michael's mad than you KNOW something is wrong. Oh boy. I don't know how they made up that quickly. He's for sure still really angry. Okay. Relax. Okay. The other things I was going to comment on..
Well.. I don't understand why it was a big deal in the first place that Jared mentioned a boyfriend. I mean, Michael could have assumed that she said she had a boyfriend that meant him but he never told her it was him.. But the "you have another boyfriend?!" thing could have I guess slipped into his mind.
Woah. Okay. Still have to relax.
The other things that I wanted to comment on.
Well the shower scene. Funny you should add that in when I was JUST thinking yesterday that they should have a shower scene. Haha
I'm a bit confused by the whole Jess+Sam convo in the beginning with Sam being oddes out about Jared knowing something.
G-d I hate Jared. I HATE that kid. Jess and him are perfect for each other. They're mj and sr shit disturbers.
And cuuuuute!!!! About Michael falling asleep with his fedora on his face. I can totally picture that adorable scene.
And I love how they tease each other and drive each other crazy. It's the cutest thing. Oysh! I love them!!
I forget what else I wanted to say. In still all hung up on what I imagine Michael looking like when he's mad and it scares me. :(
PERFECT chapter though!! I don't know how you come up with these story lines. So crazy. So good! So ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Lol, omg you're crazy. This has got to be the best review I've ever recieved. And when you said "I don't understand why it was a big deal... etc." If you think about it, Sharyl flirting wasn't that big of a deal either. They're just a bit insecure because it's still kind of the beginning of their relationship. *Jealousy*

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