Reviewer: Loveformichael Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2011 05:24 am Title: Chapter 28

jess is a true bitch i cant stand her for making sam cry. michael always there to confort her thats sweet of him. this is a beautiful story. i cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! <3 ((And yes, Jess is a horrible bitch.)) lol

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2011 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 28

"always"

My eyes are getting watery again. 

Boy this chapter loved to make me cry. 

At first I was tearing cause of Jess and I felt bad because she was in a relationship that was controlling her. Using her. Hurting her. Basically an abusive relationship. 

 I was sad cause I realized that things could NEVER EVER EVER go back to normal for Sam. Jess can't fix it. No one can. Her relationship is out in public. It's Jared and Jess' fault and NOTHING could take it back. That's it! It's exposed! And for what reason? Still not clear. 

Ugh!!!!!!!!! Hate Jared!! What a fucking immature piece of shit. 

 

But then when Jess got upstairs and Robert and Xavier were not letting her in and her life really looked like SHIT.I then could picture her hearing Sam and Michael laughing in controllably. 

 

G-d!!! That was adorable!!!!!! I loved that there fight was over Peter pan and cincerella. Hahahahha they're the bestest couple ever!!!!

(still never seen Cinderella. Don't hate me)

Aww!! Now Michael singing is in my head!! "Cinderella stay a while... Blah blah blah blah Michael sing clearer."

And steamy scene! :) but in your true style.. It was interrupted. Haha :) love that. 

I don't understand how Jess got trough to Robert and Xavier. 

And WHAT THE FUCK JESS! What the fucking fuck! My mouth literally ( :) spelling) DROPPED when I heard her say that about we father and my eyes tested up!!!! Yes. They did. Your story has that affect on me. 

And yes. :) I love Robert. <3 caring for her. What a cutie!

And I love Michael. I really do. He knows exactly how to comfort a girl when she's crying. Then again... He was written by a woman. Haha

Ow Michael singing "always" is in my head. That song makes me cry. When you hear him sniffle. And you could tell he's crying cause its a wet sniffle. Like in she's out of my life. 

Okay. Emotionally charged chapter. I want Jess to disappear!!

Go away evil couple. Go awayyyyyyy. 

I want Sam to be happy again. And I know the feeling about a man hatttiiiiiing to see someone hurt you. It's comforting. <3

 

This is still tugging at my heart:

"always"

Author's Response:

First of all... I love you. lol now... moving on, This review was so nice ^_^ (Your reviews are always nice, but you know. lol) "Then again... he was written by a woman." Lmfaoooo! xD I love autocorrect... I really do. lol Robert is adorable <3 lol LOVE YOU :DDD Omg, I seriously do. xD (((((P.S. GO WATCH CINDERELLA RIGHT NOW.)))) 

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2011 11:13 am Title: Chapter 27

okay.. let's try this again. Won't be as good.. but I'll try!!

 

Yay!! You used the pic I sent you of Michael :)
I love him in a purple shirt... with that blazerrrrr...... oh G-d.
oh!! THAT'S where you got the peace sign from!!

okay YES! for starting with Michael's point of view!! What a GREAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT start!!!!!! :D
I'm so excited!! Love my little ideas floating around the story. :)

I love his anticipation for Sam to come on stage!! and his smiiiiiiiiiileeee waiting for herrrrrrr GAH! perfection! and then her grinning back. :) hahaha
They're so cute how they play on stage. :)
The fact that Sam makes michael forget to SING!... haha she's got him rapped around her little finger. haha
OYSH!! I love how Sam is really affecting Michael..
She's really changing him. Making him become more comfortable off the stage. They're relationship is really growing. <3 I love it.

haha LOVE how he's like "I only have one more song to sing"... he can't WAIT! haha

THE JACKET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FINALLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and it's a leather jacket too! Nice touch. :) haha
My jacket is pleased with being a leather jacket. Is said so in its tweet that I copy pasted onto my blog. (haha... retardedddd)

and awww!! I LOVE how Sam was saying that "if there was ever life on another planet, he'd be the best there too." So adorable! I love how she's making SURE That he's considered the best EVER! on ANY planet! EVER!
hahaha.. I know the feeling. :)

hahahaha... katy saying congratulations on the baby. hahahahha
what a joke.
and Sam said preggers?? How Kardashian of her. So not something Sam would say. She's probably just acting different around Katy cause ... you know.. you act different around different people.
AHH!!! I'm TOTALLY ONTO YOU KATY!! She's totally trying to get close to Sam JUST to get close to Michael to SNATCH HIM AWAY FROM HER!
grrrrrrrrrrrrr. STAY AWAY FROM SAM AND MICHAEL!! THEY'RE PERFECT!!! STAY AWAY YOU EVIL BIATCH! (did I just say biatch? hahaha)

hahahaha SO FUNNY how she just decided that they're friends! SO AWKWARD! NO ONE DOES THAT IN REAL LIFE! hahaha... you're so transparent Katy. The only reason why you "want to be friends" with Sam is cause of Michael you boyfriend stealer!!
BITCH. BITCH comment on not being easy to be Michael's girlfriend. are you trying so put doubt in Sam? You trying to freak her out? Sneaky little...
ugh!! Stop trying to sabotage them!
I'M ONTO YOU KATY!

:(.... to the Jess monologue (sp?). I wish Jess wasn't being a bitch. It must be SO painful that your friend is possibly one of the people behind huge rumours and oysh! This is just so sad!
I hate Jess!! 
*litterally making a sad face with my lips sticking out in public*
LOVE how Sam is being protective of Michael. How she doesn't care that Jess is hurting her... but DON'T HURT MICHAEL. So cute. Oysh. Their relatinoship is really strengthning. I love it. <3

ROBERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) haha He's so cute!! :) ......... ma'am hahaha
HAHAHAHHA to the security guard making her feel safe. 
"litterally laughed in public - people must think I'm nuts... I should never read this story in public again*
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh shittttt... Robert's comment about camera's being for her. oh Sam, you are no longer a simple girl.

XAVIER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHH!!!! 
I love that my comments have such an impact on this story. hahaha

HAHAHAHA LOVE her comments on the questions asked by the paparazzi. Very Sam like of her. The sarcasm is the best. hahaha

oh boy........ hahaha... pervert Michael. :)
She JUST got out of the shower!!!!!!!!!!!................. except that was still really sexy. :)
G-d... that SMIRK! It kills me. ahh! It litterally makes me..... oh G-d. I love him.
:P "Long enough" wicked grin.
Evil Michael is the BEST.... He's seriously driving me crazy! I could just jump on him RIGHT NOW and AHH! I LOVE HIMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh my G-d.... I could picture the way he whispered rescedule............................................. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....................
This perfection is KILLING ME. Seriously.. that whisper..... I couldn't breathe.

I TOTALLY GET THE NERVOUSNESS of seeing yourself naked in the mirror!! haha
IT's SO AWKWARD!!!!!! Whenever you see yourself naked in the mirror you're always like... eh. you know? and then seeing Michael... all over you... WANTING you...
It like doesn't fit. It's weird. I get it. TOTALLY get it.
Can I please be Sam??.... really? please? I want to just jump into the scene like Mary Poppins and just steal Sam's spot.
So perfecttttttttttt

Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he's TOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "please?"
I could NEVER say no to that.
Oh my G-d... what an effing teaseeeeeee... It's so sexy. He's driving me crazy.

litterally bit my lip at the thought of Michael's clothes on the floor. That means he's.........................
*Mary Poppins please show up*

People around me at Starbucks must think I'm nuts! They FOR SURE know what I'm reading! With all the bighting of the lip and the look in my eyes as I'm reading this!!....
so awkwardddd..... haha

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm :) I know that feeling of knowing they were thinking about you all day!! So perfectttt.

GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

soooooooo not Something I should be reading at Starbucks....
oh my G-d.. I can't control myself!! THIS IS TOOOOO AMAZINGGGGG!!

EVERY. WORD. IS. PERFECTION.

.... those eyes....... :)

okay..... I'm dead.
Perfection. really.

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"I'm not stubborn, you're just impatient"
PERFECT hahaha Michael you're so clever! :)
"Am not" haha what a kidddddddddddd

k... LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and this is just too funny. :) haha
I'm dying of laughter!

I'm going to marry Michael. :) ...... (probably am. haha :D )
He's killing me! haha He's too funny!!
WHERE ARE YOU TAKING HERRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.... oh wait. I KNOW! I PICKED THE G-DDAM PLACE! haha 
(yes fellow readers... I'm special and you're not because I post good comments. haha)

............... I'M GOING TO MURDER SAM.
SHUT THE HELL UP! HE'S NOT TELLING YOU!!!!!!!!! GET OVER IT!!!!!!
hahaha

oy! What a child!! (in a good way) (about her face being pressed at the window)
It's like she's 6 going to Disney World.

oh Robert! I LOVE YOU! :D
BAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA to the "You were my favorite"

EPIC! haha.. about falling on him when she said they were comfortable. haha

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww "Sam, you always look beautiful." ............ replaces with "Nathalie, you always look beautiful."

PEACE! :D perfect MJ moment.

YES! JACKASS!! ASSHOLE!!! MOTHER EFFER!!!! SHE HAS NO BABY BUMP!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

awwwwwwwwwwwww... single table and two chairs... the spot light..
so romanticcccccc... too sweeettt!! I would die... then and there. The romance of it all is just too much.

JACKETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

:(..... so romantic I could cry. My heart is littereally aching.
awwww!!! *grinning  ear to ear*... "special occasions"

eeeeeeeee................... WAY TO MENTION JARED AT A PERFECT MOMENT LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ugh. NOW I'm annoyed.
I'm sure Sam was annoyed too at that memory flashing in front of her..

:D..... Michael's smile always cheers me up!!! :D

Oysh! the kiss is the best! It's so sweet and innocent.
YES!!!!!!!!! GOOD SIGN ABOUT THE GOOSEBUMPS!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha

hand on thigh................... G-d I want himmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......................

very polite waiter about "not noticing" seat change. :)
I shall call him Alexandre because this reminds me of a french restaurant I went to a few months back. so... AlexandRE.. not er. He's french. haha

HAHA on the only special occasion my ass.
I actually tasted wine like that for the first time a few months ago at that restaurant. haha :) .... I did it wrong though. :( and my boyfriend made fun of me. :( so embarassing.

HAHAHAHA ON BABY QUESTIONS!!!!!! It's so funnnyyyyyy

awwwwwwwwwwww........ the media is starting to affect Sam. :(
OYSH!!! DON'T LET THEM RUIN YOUR NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :(
*face pout again*

I love how sweetly it ended. :)

I wonder what's going to happen with Jess though.. how is she going to re-enter the picture..
villain or hurt?... ahh!! I just don't know!!!!!

I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTERRRR!!!!!!!!!!

THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER WRITTEN IN THE HISTORY OF CHAPTERS ON THIS WHOLE ENTIRE PLANET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (or if there are chapters written on other planets... those too. ;)   ) haha

ahh!!! THIS WAS TOO AMAZINGG!!!!
ONE WEEK's WORTH DEFINATELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sooooo amazinggggg.......
still thinking about those clothes on the floor.....
I love thinking of Michael being a mess too. haha
I actually know what his clothes look like bunched up on the floor in the bathroom. (  :(   )... which is why I could picture it so well!!.. and it made it all positive when I think about that now!! YAY!!
so MJ's clothes on the floor = sex now. yes. haha

 

 

TOO ANYONE ELSE WHO BOTHERED READING THIS HUGE ASS COMMENT........................
beat THAT!
SERIOUSLY!!... comment better!! They're a joke compared to mine. :) haha
I would LOVE to read your interpretations of everything tooooooo!!!!!

GAH!!
LOVE THIS STORYYYYY. PERFECTTTTTT
Seriously girl.................. perfect.

No more embarassement when writing those scenes anymore!! Perfect amount of detail to not make it hootchie. haha... just ... PERFECT.
GAH!
The word perfect = this chapter.

LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUU

 

Nathalieeeeeee :)

Author's Response:

Lmfao, You. Are. Amazing. You're going to scare away all of my other commenters with your amazing comments. LOL "Oh Sam, You are no longer a simple girl." Lmao I'm dying. I swear... I think I look forward to your review just as much as you look forward to the new chapter xD "Perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect." Awe, now I feel special. And I love the fact that you were reading this at Starbucks, I bet people were like O____________o Hey, at least no one will ask you use your phone charger if they think you're nuts! :D Lmao, This review is the best. And why are you mocking my other readers eh? LOL "Hootchie" < I haven't heard that word in a while. lol and FINEEEEE I guess now since I have written one sexy scene with detail, you will be expecting more. Lol, and to anyone who is reading my re-comment, Me and Nathalie actually "Met" through this website, I'm not paying her to leave me long reviews or anything xD lmfao. Dude, I love you more<3 Like seriously. lol. "Alexandre, because he's french." xD And the whole "Fighting like children" Scene was like my favorite to write, ever. lol LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUU<3333333

Reviewer: Leahluv21 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2011 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 27

Gah! This. Was. Amazing.

Author's Response:

Thank. You. So. Much. <3

Reviewer: Eminemprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2011 11:24 am Title: Chapter 26

WHOOOOHOOO! Loved this and I hope you update soon! I'd be like..

"Well, It looks like I have to suddenly get ( Air quats) 'Unexpectedly' pregnant." And wink at Michael. LOL! Loved this.

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2011 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 26

Had to read. Haha
Oh my G-d. I would totally just fall on the floor dying of laughter if that was said about me. Hahahaha
Katy was sweet about it to Sam. :) so glad she was. Those other girls are so annoying. I wouldn't be surprised if that reliable source came from them. Haha but they wouldn't do that to michael.. Would they? Gotta be Jess and Jared. But Jess would NEVER do that to her. :( never never never. She still loves her deep down. Unless Jared pulled some abusive power over her like what happened to LaToya. Who knows! Oh right..... You. Unless you don't know either. Hahaha
I love how Michael was like scratching the back of his neck when he told Katy. I could so picture it. Haha
An I love how Sam is being so understanding and sweet with Michael. I bet he really appreciates it and its what makes him love her even more. :)
I want a point of view of michael during the concert!! That would be fun. :)
Then when Sam steps out his mind could get all racy. :) Michael's sexy thoughts. Ahh!!
Have fun on your vacation!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Lmao, I freaking love your reviews... "Michael's sexy thoughts" Now I must do this! LOL and "Who knows! Oh right... you." Haha! And I knew you couldn't stay away ;) lmao and thank you!!<3

Reviewer: Meganjackson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2011 06:50 am Title: Chapter 24

michael never cease to amaze me. beautiful chapter by the way. i cant believe jess forgave that unfaithful asshole and she got the nerve to blame sam for her relationship problems. cant wait for the next chapter. i enjoy reading ur story as usual