Reviewer: Hannah Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2011 05:22 am Title: Chapter 32

I'm sorry, again, for submitting my review on chapter 1 instead of chapter 32, still don't know how it works here exactly. It won't happen again, I swear!

Reviewer: Hannah Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2011 05:13 am Title: Chapter 32

Just.....Wow!

Fortunately I didn't have to wait that long for your new chapter! Thanks, thanks and thanks! Great job, both on the storyline and the steamy part!!! To answer your question, I agree with boozie703 on those parts, a mix of both would be just great! I still love to feel some of his shyness and humility reflecting once in a while! Hope you're already busy with the next chapter lol!

hug, hannah

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2011 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 32

Oh my G-d. My eyes are stinging. I was not expecting that ending at all. Oh my G-d. 

Silly me I should have clicked when you asked about the dad. But his wife? What a complete utter bitch!! Can't she understand what his daughter must be going through?

Horrible woman. Horrible. 

Ugh. I HATE HER!!!!!! 

And the fact that Sam actually finally called. And THAT happened?

And now the dad is never going to know that she called. Oh boy. I feel like crying for him too. 

That woman is horrible!! And just the sound of the little girl answering the phone would have made me break down and cry. 

Ugh! I can't get over that woman!

 

Okay. Forget about the horrible part. The amazing part that I slaved away cringing and closing my eyes for. Hahaha

You turned it into something so good!! :)

As for the style which you'll write in from now on.. It doesn't matter. A mix of both or one and the other alternating. Which ever. :) they're both good. :)

Now that I officially helped you break the ice. Oh wait. There's still ONE MORE THING THAT YOU AREN'T CAPABLE OF BREAKING THE ICE FROM. haha. The thing that made us die of laughter? Yes. That. Haha

Love you! Had so much fun helping you write the hardest thing I ever had to write in my life. Haha

The second hardest thing? Their first time. 

And maybe mention at some point that she's on the pill. Haha that way no one thinks they're not being careful. Haha

Love youuu!!!!!

Wondering about the next chapter...

Depressing? Or dramatic? Or happy? Or sexy?

Who knows!

Author's Response:

Lol, I love you<3 and Thanks for the help! Couldn't have done it without you (or, if I had, it wouldn't have been this detailed), lol like you said, I made you do my dirty work xD And you'll see. No spoilers :D 

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2011 12:16 am Title: Chapter 31

Okay first of all.. THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!

I finally entered the story!! :) and Sam and most importantly Michael loves me. :) if there was a calling period thing I would definitely be tempted to call and say EXACTLY THAT even though the shyness takes over that's EXACTLY what I would have wanted to say. Yay!!

The stupid media people can't edit me out. :) I stand up for my man! Haha

Best way to enter the story everrrrrr. Must better than the horrible thing I suggested last time with being deranged and attacking Sam. Hahahaha 

And now I'm sceptical about all the questions you ask me. Haha including my flight information!! Haha

And I LOVE how I put them in good moods so that they can... Uh hum. You know. :)

I turned them on I guess. ;)

Okay enough about wonderful me :)

I loooooooooooove Michael!!!!!!!! He is the sweetest boyfriend everrrrrrrrrr. 

The way he truly listens to every word. The way he takes care of her and is sensitive to her needs. He just MMPH!!!!! He's the best!!!!

I liked his advice. I agree. :) but I do think that refusing to call him is doing to him what she disliked. But I understand. Thing is is that that one phone call doesnt mean "oh! I have a dad again who would buy me ice cream and take care of me" or whatever. Calling him doesn't mean allowing him to re-enter your life. It's a way for her to understand exactly what happened to be able to let go of the anger and accept what has happened so that she can truly heal and move on. 

That would be my advice to her. 

I couldn't help but think of this story all day! When I heard the song give into me and how fans would say gladly, :), I think about how some people have criticized LMP and stuff saying that they would have been better for him. Which then made me think of THIS! Haha 

What I don't get is why for some reason EVERYTIME they turn on the tv. At that EXACT moment they talk about them. :) hahaha and furthermore, why they would listen. I mean if it was me I'd naturally be curious too. But when they start criticizing me and my relationship? I'm not sure I'd keep it on. Maybe I would because I'm the most curious person ever. As you may already know. :) 

And when Michael says "G-d I want you" I literally go crazy!! What I would DO to be in her shoes!!  And when he smiles and chuckles is the sexiest thing everrrrrrrrrrrr. 

Gahhhh!!!

Cant wait till the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

When you'll be reading this ill probably be on the plane. GAH! I need sleep! Love you!!

Word count! :) haha

Reviewer: Leahluv21 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2011 03:05 am Title: Chapter 30

This...was...heart wrenching!!

I can't believe he tried to show up and be a part of her life right now. 

Poor Sam she has had so much to deal with recently.  Losing Jazz, the press, now her dad...my heart ACHES for her!!

As far as this chapter goes...once again it was amazingly written.  You have a wonderful ability to capture the audience's attention and to evoke emotion and you also are wonderful at detail.  It is like i am visualizing the scene.


This is the first story I ever read on the site :) AND the reason I signed up! Your story continues to be one of the only ones I read on a constant basis and I LOVE IT.  I cannot wait to see where you take this story and I also can't wait to see what you write in the future!!!

Leah <3

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2011 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 30

The tears are running down my c

Woah what a blow up. You were right. This IS an emotional chapter. It's not normal that I feel bad for him is it? I kind of picture him being short with like an oversized suit. Like. Okay. Like pheobe's boyfriend on friends. The scientist guy. That's how I picture him. And I don't know. I'm crying. Woah. Okay. 

So definitely a year jerker this one. Either way. Sam better not have left that paper in her dressing room!!!! What the hell could it be!! I'm trying to figure it out and I can't. I really can't. Proof of something. 

Ugh okay. Trying to focus on explaining my thoughts throughout this whole thing. 

So first of all how the hell does Michael have time to leave during his show and see Sam. Not only that. But why THIS time for the first time. 

And the face on her dad's face is too funny. I would be stunned too! Common Sam. Michael Jackson is in front of his face and he's his daughters boyfriend. The does get rewarded with a stunned face. But either way. I could see why she wouldn't think that way. Besides the fact that she's completely mad at him and how he should be focused on his daughter since its the first time since he basically DESTROYED HER years ago. But not only that. Sam is used to Michael so she doesn't understand the significance of his presence to other people. 

Man's I love Robert!!!!!!!! What a cutie pieeeeee. Poor guy has no life but to tend to these two. Haha

And I literally cracked up when Michael was like "I couldn't imagine what it would do to Katy" hahahahhahahahaha 

And Michael is the sweeeeeetest human being in the world. He wants nothing more than to comfort her. <3 Oysh. I love him. 

Okay. Now onto the main focus in all this.

That blow up was far too necessary. I'm sad that it didn't make her feel the was she wanted it to. Wow was that so perfectly written. When you wrote that she said that he only came because she was finally worth something. That hit the nail on the head!!

And then how you wrote that after all that came out all she was left with was the pain that she was feeling. :( that hurt. That's when I started crying. And then didn't stop till the end of the chapter. 

When she was describing the scene when her parents were fighting. Woah. I could totally picture my little self witnessing a fight and instantly gravitatin towards the person being yelled at to comfort them. It's just so natura! Such a kid thing to do. Not because they don't know the situation. But because children hate seeing pain. And they know the pain of being yield at and don't see how a person yelling has pain. 

It made me so sad to think of how her mother must have felt to see her daughter cling to the man who broke her heart. GAH. Its hurting me. I can't explain what im thinking/feeling. But it's like a reminder that thi man is human. That he's the father to your daughter. And then seeing your daughter cry for him. Protecting HIM. not only that but how your daughter is choosing to protect your cheating ass husband over you. Even though you know she doesn't no better. The look on Sam's face must have instantly made her feel like she had to stop. And then how he brought her upstairs. That must have been hard for him. My heart hurts. Even though he's a cheating fucking ass. 

Gah!! What does that paper say!! And if Sam didn't take it with her then what the fuck! What if someone else took it! And ahhhhhhh!!

And when she was describing how she was sobbing so sleep every night it reminded me of how she cries herself to sleep in the bookstore. :( and how the next day she was late for rehearsals and how Michael was like "don't do that again". Haha thinking back on it that part makes me laugh. Haha strict Michael. ;)

But yeah. Oysh. I hope everything's okay. I know exactly how her dad must have felt when he decided he should leave. Maybe he came with good intentions and he knew the blow up was going to happen but when it actually does happen. You realize you can't deal with that pain and you have to go. :(

I hope everything becomes clear soon. 

Reviewer: boozie703 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2011 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 29

Oysh. So I just read michaels point of you part 1. I want to hug HIM and make him feel better. He's been spending so much time comforting Sam that no one was really there for him. He relationship has been more directional towards Sam lately. The relationship needs to be more balance. I love him. Oysh. I want to be there for him. :( Sam pov. Just read the beginning for now. I'm scaredddddd. Okay. Just read the before 2 hour break. I was soooo sad. I could feel both their pain. And when Sam was holding his hand.. I could for some reason feeeel his hand. I felt like I was holding it trying to convince him that he is the most important thing in my life. I HONESTY felt his hand. His rough unpolished manly hands. I felt them. Oysh I want to hug these two right now. But THEN! When Michael said "have I ever told you that you're impossible?" a HUGEEEEE smile broke on my face!!!!! :D People must think I'm crazy at Starbucks. Okay. Onto the next part. K so I'm laughing at the tabloids. Hahaha too funny. I love that Sam's humorous sarcastic side is back!! Hahaha Oysh. I love robert! Okay.. Continuing on with my curiosity.. Okay. You're right!!!!! I didn't expect THAT!!!!! What annoys me is that while reviewing I spotted it. :( But oh my G-d!!!!! What does this asshole want!!!!!!! Money? To meet Michael? To get to know Sam because shes finally famous? Grrrr. Or maybe... He's worried about her? How she's handling everything? I doubt it. He skipped out on his dying wife and teenage daughter. Fuck this shit. Things are going to get crazy!! And Sam needs to get dressed! Uh oh.. She's going to miss her cue. Next chapter, I hope you're planning on starting from this exact moment. Oh my G-d. She finally got over what Jess said to her and about what she said on her dad. Fuck. I hate Jess. I still dont understand how she said that. Grrrrrrrrr. Okay. Calm down on the hate. Think about the positive! SAM AND MICHAEL ARE TOGETHER. readers... You have NOOOOOOO IDEA how greatful you should be for that!!!!!!!!!! The love between the two is so strong. I love them. They're going to live happily ever after in a magical place called neverland. :) I wonder who's there at this time. Must be pretty dead. :( and wheres bubbles!! I thought he was here!! :) Off to go study now! Looooveeee!!!!!!! Can't wait to read more!! :) I'm sorry this review isn't as long.

Reviewer: Leahluv21 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2011 11:11 am Title: Chapter 29

(I am resubmitting this.  I was in such a state that I didn't even submit it under the right chapter!)

HOLY MOTHER.

I think....my heart stopping at LEAST three times during this chapter.

GAH!

First off, you do an incredible job capturing emotion.  Seriously. My heart cracks every time Samantha is thinking about Jess.

Secondly, the conversation Sam had with Michael?

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Please tell me this isn't going to result in anything? Right? RIGHT?!

BAH!!!!

And then...when I read the cliff hanger...and saw that Sam's dad had returned...and you ENDED IT THERE...Well...i'm pretty sure I may die if this isn't updated ASAP :)

Seriously...i'm just..gah. I'm sitting here...trying to update my own story...and i am so emotional and freaked out that i'm  not even sure I can finish my own chapter lol.

AMAZING! You are just simply AMAZING.


FOUR HUNDRED STARS.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It's reviews like these that make me want to keep writing. :) It seriously means a lot. And haha! I'll try and update ASAP :) once again, thank you so much<3