Date: Feb 24, 2012 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
What an amazing ending! It really makes you think about going against society's thinking that celebrities can only mingle with their own kind. To be honest, I'd do almost anything to be in Emily's position.
Date: Feb 24, 2012 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww, Michael's love is evident here. In reality he seems to be quite affectionate and you effectively portray his personality here.
Date: Feb 24, 2012 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
What a breathtaking climax. Not to mention, the ending is oh so adorable.
Date: Feb 24, 2012 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ah yes:surrealism galore! I'm loving this with every sentence I read.
Date: Feb 24, 2012 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Emily the comforter--that should be her nickname. Emily is similar to me in the sense that my heart always went out to Michael.
Date: Feb 24, 2012 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooh la la, I'm sensing some romance coming on!
Date: Feb 24, 2012 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Whoa--I'm wondering what happened to Emily. Oh well, chapter three shall pave te way for me to obtain the answer
Date: Feb 24, 2012 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
My word! Even though as you admitted in you summary there are some grammatical errors, the plot is excellent. Emily's one lucky bird to have dinner with Michael.
Date: Oct 28, 2011 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
i really like your story please continue!! :D