Date: Aug 16, 2015 06:43 pm Title: EWW! Dirty Boy Roger
hahahahaa!!!
I remember that little ryme from when I was in grade school!!!
It's actualy really cute!!
Date: Jun 30, 2015 09:32 am Title: A Final Goodbye
Wow so he knew about jess being Hayden & Rayden's,? She should at least explain how it happened and not keep secrets but what's done is done .But still as good a chapter as all the others
Date: Jun 12, 2015 02:52 am Title: Puzzle Pieces
OMFGG I HATE HIM I HATE HIM I HATE HIM!!
Date: Jun 12, 2015 12:05 am Title: Au Revoir
omfg nooooo.. Mike.. I can't... BEst damn story ever though
Date: Jun 11, 2015 11:42 pm Title: An Orange Crayon
LOVE IT!! SO IN LOVE WITH THIS FUCKING STORY!!
Date: Feb 09, 2015 06:32 pm Title: Michael
Wow! This was refreshing!!! You wrote Michael's POV so well!!! Michael and Puvve have such a cute family. I still can't believe there's one more chapter left! I can't believe this story will be over soon. I can't wait for the next chapter!Q
Author's Response:
I can't believe it either! But, it's here...
Date: Jan 25, 2015 07:07 pm Title: How To Mend A Broken Heart
Gosh, your writing is soo good!! This chapter was very emotional and so well written. And those pictures were beautiful and went with the story so well. I'm glad that Michael and Puvve are back on good terms. I was almost wishing for the days when they fought their feelings for one another for a moment. I can't wait to see what the gender of their baby will be. Two more chapters?? This makes me a little sad. Can't wait for the net update!!
Author's Response:
Oh honey, I won't pretend to be the best. I just like to write. I'm glad you felt the emotion I was attempting to convey. It's kind of hard--as a writer, to convey exactly what you want the readers to feel. And as for the pictures, I have been saving and editing those for over a year. I'm happy you liked th em. Ha. "I was almost wishing for the days when they fought their feelings for one another." As I recall, you absolutely HATED those days. HATED every second of it to be exact. Sad? Sad? Don't be sad that it's ending. Be happy it happened.Honey, I don't know what I'll do without this story when it is all said and done. It's been a loooong ride. Stay tuned. I'll finish this story quickly. Much L.O.V.E
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2015 06:25 pm Title: How To Mend A Broken Heart
Well done! Well written! The emotion - wow.
Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: Nov 29, 2014 11:43 am Title: A Final Goodbye
Wow!! This was such an emotional and intense chapter!! You're such a great writer and your creativity is AMAZING! Wow, I had no idea that Haye was pregnant. I didn't catch any of the hints in the last chapter. Well she is kind of right. It's not particularly the best time to be having a baby but she'll make it through. I know it. I really can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for this! It warms my heart. I think you're a pretty amazing writer too. Ha. Maybe when this is all said and done, I'll let you know about the hints.
Date: Nov 22, 2014 12:21 pm Title: For Her
I'm so glad to see this story back!!!! Wow!!!! This was an intense chapter!!! Even though Ray was very sick in the head, I actually kind of feel bad that he died. But at least Hayden can live now. Wow! Four more chapters left?? It seems like yesterday when this story began. I still love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Lol. In essence, you're Selfish Michael. I tried to get the readers to understand Ray's view. He can't help but love her. Yes. It really does seem like yesterday. I was excited. Stay tuned.
Date: Aug 13, 2014 02:57 pm Title: Too Late To Change The Time
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Hayden can't die!! I can't wait to read more! Brittney is completely off her rocker and Ray is just sick. I really don't know how to feel about him right now. I really hope Hae is okay. As always, I'll be paitentley waiting for more!!
Date: Jul 25, 2014 08:58 pm Title: I'm Working On It
Oooh! What a teaser!! I can't until the full chapter comes out! Trust me, I'll be waiting patiently for all of your updates. And I can't wait to get started back on "When Push Comes To Shove"!
Author's Response:
Me too! I really want to work on it. Like, so many ideas are eating away at me. However, I don't want to have to juggle two stories. I'm obviously not good at that. Lol. Thank you for always being the ever patient reviewer I have come to love.
Date: Jun 01, 2014 03:09 pm Title: A Night Full of Surprises
Wow! Just when I thought things were going to be all rainbows and sunshine. I must say, that was probably the most sophisticated sex scene I've ever read. That's a huge complement. Trust me, I've read some stuff that was so sick it wasn't even funny. My guess for the mystery man is Donny. The mystery woman, Tatum maybe?? That's just a wild guess. Well I'm glad that your back and I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
I guess my last comment to you didn't send. I was attempting to thank you for being my ever faithful reader. Lol. Believe it or not, I've been working on that scene for quite some time. Like Michael, I am a perfectionist. This story has had far too much hppiness. It's time for drama!
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2014 03:09 pm Title: A Night Full of Surprises
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!! this is intense!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Keep those eyes posted. :)
Date: May 30, 2014 02:23 pm Title: Prologue
Going to be reading this also. Just from the summary I can see it already being a good story. So I am definitely going to read girl!
Author's Response:
Welcome to the family!