[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2023 01:59 pm Title: Who's Loving You
awww:( Michael should've still went after her but I understand he feels like he should let her go. Donny is a little player I hope he atleast treats her right. Great Chapter!
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2023 01:50 pm Title: Normie
Oh no ! I dont know if i missed something but I thought that Michael did stand up for her. And I mean she didn;t seem that excited to see him in class if was more akward. But I see the game that Donny is playing. He ain't slick.
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2023 01:41 pm Title: Reverse Psychology
This was most definitly not a rushed job AT ALL! There hasn't been a chapter that I haven't enjoyed so far lol. Im truly obsessed. I kinda got weird vibes from Haydens brother idk if its like incestual idk something weird there. and about Donny's smile its pretty but michaels is show stopping Hayden is trippin lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2023 01:32 pm Title: James William Patrick
oh wow! thats good she moved to cali! That picture is so beuatiful of the family. I'm going to miss Edna. I wouldn't want to leave my mother to die slowly. I'd wanna be by her side. My mom passed and I wish that I could've had one more moment or one more conversation with her.
Date: Jan 31, 2023 01:25 pm Title: Au Revoir
Oh no it almost ended well. Why would their dad want to step in now that's not right. aww i feel so bad for them
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2023 01:09 pm Title: Donny
Why is she so afraid to take things further with michael? He's so cute lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2023 01:01 pm Title: Growing Up
Ok this was a major tear jerker ! That last line especially. "we didn't have to hate each other for getting older. We just had to forgive ourselves for growing up" that's so beautiful
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2023 12:53 pm Title: Gone
Oh no I could only imagine haydens feelings and how hurt she is. Like i fell hurt right now ! great chapter I love your sense of humour! Rae and Hayden have such an adorable relationship I wish i had with my brothers
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2023 12:45 pm Title: The Shooting Star
omg i wonder what she wished. this story is perfect so far
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2023 12:38 pm Title: An Orange Crayon
I'm obsessed. The way I literally feel so apart of this story is crazy
Date: Jan 31, 2023 11:38 am Title: Prologue
I'm back to read this again idc omg! i dont even remeber what happens lol
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2022 01:33 am Title: Epilogue
To the author,
Sort of a reply for your authors note, I don't know if you'll read it, but if you do happen to find this. Sorry for not commenting earlier to other chapters. The story was gripped me hard and I couldn't put it down. It was a beautifully written story, I wish his real life had this kind of beautiful end; where he had found someone who could truly seen him for who he is, and had been his lover and friend. Maybe if we think about parallel universe theory by Stephen Hawkins, somewhere out there other Michael is happy and healthy.
But none the less I was honored to know him and love him is this. And what you say is true the hole never fills up, I think we learn to live with it over time.
Thanks for sharing this with us though, I really loved reading Michael & Hayden's story, I. Loved seeing this cheeky side of Michael and the when he had her kidnapped so he could finally see her again, defiantly feels like something that real life michale could do lol.
Author's Response:
I have always enjoyed a good review from my readers. I started writing this story when I was 14, so I find it extremely corny now. And you are right. In an alternate world, the world has finally left him alone. And he is loved. Truly. Truly loved. Thank you for your kind words. -MJlegacy14
Date: Dec 02, 2018 09:53 am Title: Epilogue
So, for some reason I found myself coming back to this story to laugh at Donny's horrible jokes and ended up rereading the whole entire thing! What a thrill to relive every moment of this fic! Still remains one of my absolute favorites(sratch that- all time favorite) in Mjfanfiction history!
Author's Response:
Ah. The Maniac. It’s always a joy to hear from you, lady. You have been on this train with me since the beginning and I will never forget you for it. I take pride in the face that my work makes you smile. Thank you. Thank you.
Date: Jul 06, 2018 01:47 am Title: An Orange Crayon
I really liked your story) he is very nice
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2018 07:30 am Title: Epilogue
Most writers, especially the younger ones, wrote stories for ratings and reviews. They wanted to be popular. They did not write because they liked or because of Michael. Some stories were abandoned for this reason. But there are other stories that are in Hiatus for other reasons. The most important thing is you write because you like it and because of Michael. You are very talented and I would be immensely happy if you shared your stories here again. Thanks again! :)