[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2012 04:34 pm Title: Tell Him.
Why do I get the feeling that their timing is not going to coincide? Anyways, keep up the good work and the worry about the pic. OTW is my favorite era too.
If I had been alive then and he approached me, I still probably would have said "no" because I am not that type of girl. But I probably would have been kicking myself all the way home. LOL!
Author's Response: Get outta' my head! Lol, Jk. I guess we're gonna' have to wait, and see. ;D Oh, yes. Off The Wall is like the.."drools era" for me. All my fangirling comes from this era. Lol. Thanks for the review. :D
Date: Jun 07, 2012 04:39 pm Title: Ghost
Yay Off the wall era!!!! It's like my favorite!!!!!!!!!! I love that picture of Michael it's so random and cute. Poor Michaedl he was probably thiking: "Can't a man have a waffle in peace?????" LOL! I wonder why Ray came back just to say congrats??? I'm glad she's going back to Cali with Michael. Great chapter.
Ps: I was thinking you could co- write with me on a story I was thinking of. If you can let me know.
Author's Response: I would tell you 'why' he came back, but I don't want to spoil the story Aha. And, he was just so scrumptious during OTW---well every era, but OTW cuts the cake.
Ps. Where do I sign up at? Aha. Jk.
But seriously, my email is MJlegacy15@yahoo.com Let's do this. :D
Date: May 20, 2012 06:22 am Title: Love Bug
Aww that was sweet! Hayden and Michael can't deny that they were bitten by the love bug a long time ago!
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Maniac! Hi! This chapter was inspired from that old Jonas Brother song. Haha. (My little sister was listening to it) Thanks for reviewing.
-MJlegacy14
Date: May 15, 2012 07:36 pm Title: You Are Everything, And Everything Is You
OMJ, OMJ, OMJ!!!! You updated!!! That seemed like the longest update of my life!!! You did great with the chapter! It was by far the best!!!Shavonda is hilarious!:“Aye, doctor. Listen, bitch. She going in there with o’ boy with the terminator shades on. M’Kay. He ain’t doing no harm---so shut the fuck up, and get her into whatever room she needa’ be in ‘fore I shank yo’ ass.
I laughed so hard!!! This chapter was beautiful and it fits perfectly with the song. Aww that's sad, why doesn't Hayden just keep the baby and go live with Michael???? Anyway, Awesome update!
10 stars!
Author's Response:
I'm slacking on my comments on your reviews. Sorry about that. Can you do me a favor, and go back and read the chapter. I kinda' messed up on my update, and I fixed it. Haha, I guess she's just super stubborn. I would have gone with him in a heartbeat!
Date: May 15, 2012 06:18 pm Title: You Are Everything, And Everything Is You
Oh thats so sad but in some ways understandable. Update soon
Author's Response: Sorty for the late reply. I never really log in. However, I WILL eventually reply. Thanks for the review.
-MJlegacy14
Date: Apr 27, 2012 09:49 pm Title: Prologue
Hey, another fan here. This story is awesome and so very good. I hope you post the nxt chappie soon, I really want to see whats going to happen. Is Hae gonna keep the baby or what?
also whats up with rae? Why did he do what he did? I mean I got that vibe from him ever since they left their mama and he was telling hae about this girl he was in love with but couldnt be with cos of her parents..so no I really wasnt suprised when he raped her. Anyways, update soon hon. this is easily one of the best stories on here. Dont get discouraged, some ppl read but dnt like to comment.
Author's Response: Oh, well I guess you saw. I usually reply to all my reviews, so sorry about that. I only login long enough to update. Thanks for the review.:D
-MJLegacy14
Date: Apr 27, 2012 06:40 pm Title: Lies
Come on Hayden tell Mike the truth!! And Michael, don't be like that! I know I'm addicted to a story when I start talking to the characters! LOL! Funny when she said Diana calling Michael Darling was "Donny Like". Could you pretty please update really soon?? I'm eager to read more!
As usual great chapter!
Date: Apr 13, 2012 03:05 pm Title: Uh-Oh!
Aww poor Hayden!! I feel like the walls of my life just crashed down. Her roomate is super ghetto but hilarious!! Her and Michael are really made for each other. Fate always seems to have it's way of bringing them together. And your welcome, you deserve all the reviews!
Great chapter!
Date: Apr 09, 2012 07:40 pm Title: There's Nothing We Can Do
Poor Hayden, I can't imagine her grief. She finally realizes she needs Michael. And yes, Michael was beautiful at 17 and always! He was such a handsome young man, I really wish he knew it. Anyway, great chapter!
Author's Response:
Yass, everyone needs Michael!
Thanks for the review :D
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2012 09:20 pm Title: Accusations
WTF?! This came out of left field. What the Hell is wrong with Ray? Where is Peyton? Not much is seen or heard from her. I don't know what to say about this. Just keep writing.
Author's Response: Hmmm, I've never seen you in my part of the woods.8) Aha, I welcome new readers. And, I can't tell you what's wrong with Ray wthout giving away EVERYTHING. But in short, ALOT is wrong with Ray. As for Payton, I'm guessing she was out partying, or something.(After Prom) Aha, she IS the partying type. ANNNYYWAAYS, thanks for the review. I hope to se you again;D
L.O.V.E
Date: Apr 05, 2012 07:31 pm Title: Accusations
WHAT?!?!?!?! OMJ!!!!! I am in a total state of shock right now. I actually had hope for Ray!! He reminded me of my big brother whom I'm very, very close to but now he goes and does this?!?!? I mean, shamone!! I was so waiting on Hayden to be d-flowered by Michael but her own brother??!? I would have been more okay with it if it was Donny, though I still would be mad. I have lost all respect for Ray. But anyway, please update soon.
Author's Response: Would you believe me if I said it all comes together (no pun intended) in the end? Probably not. *sigh* It's very hard to explain things without giving away juicy details. BUT, let's just say, everything is NOT what it seems. Well, it is,but it isn't. Aha, um, yeah I kind of figured Ray would become an antagonist after this:/ I was originally going to choose Donny, but then the whole entire story would be messed up, seeing as I had to get him out of the picture, so Michael could get back into the picture. And, stay tuned. An update is coming much sooner than I expected.:D(We all know I update much less frequently than I should)
L.O.V.E
Date: Mar 21, 2012 02:16 pm Title: Booty Call
Yay!! Michael's back in the picture!! I knew Donny meant no good. I love how you incorporated some of Michael's lines from the skit he did with Diana Ross in Donny's phone call! I love how he says:Well, for one thing, you’ve lost your je ne sais quoi. ‘What’s that, you say ?’ I actually don’t know, but you’ll find it missing.
Michael was so cute in that skit!! Loved the chapter!
Date: Feb 24, 2012 02:35 pm Title: Who's Loving You
Aww poor Michael! I knew Donny was up to no good. I hope Hayden doesn't get heart broken. Great chapter!!!
Author's Response:
My ever faithful reader. (sigh) Much love. And we'll just have to wait and see. *Nudge, Nudge*
Date: Feb 14, 2012 05:04 am Title: Normie
I had a feeling she was falling for Donny! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
You have good instincts.:D
Date: Feb 06, 2012 04:50 pm Title: Reverse Psychology
Donny is still a trip!!! Yay!! She going to be going to school with Michael!
Author's Response:
Yes, yes he is. Imagine going to school with him?! OMJ, that would be awesome.