Date: Sep 18, 2012 05:37 pm Title: It Must Have Been The Mistletoe
This is not at all crappy!!! This kiss should have happened a long time ago!! And multiple times at that!!! I hope this is a wake up call for you Puvve!! Oh and I love how Maria was trying to play it cool!
Love the chapter, Love the story!!
Author's Response:
Lol, Maria kills me! And you say ALL of my chapters aren't crappy. Hah. And, don't we all.-_- Lol. Thanks for the review.
Date: Sep 11, 2012 04:39 pm Title: Trouble
i love the story so far a little crazy at sometimes but it captures me
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. <3
Date: Sep 01, 2012 08:00 pm Title: Trouble
This was not a crapy chapter!! I read it when you updated but didn't have time to review. I love how you incorporated "Baby Be Mine" in the chapter. That's like my all time favorite song of his from his adult solo era. Now that I got a phone it's my ringtone!!It's so underated. I love how Michael was affaird of the dog!! I hope that Hayden makes up her mind and decides to adpot Jess with Michael before anyone else does!! I bet Donny and Joseph are up to this!!!! Great chapter as always!!
Author's Response:
Author's Response: "Baby Be Mine" used to play on repeat for entire weeks, on my ipod! I was so addicted to it. That and "The Girl Is Mine". As we enter the Thriller era, I find myself yearning for the old days of them as kids. Lol, writing their relationship was easier. I always found it funny that he was afraid of little dogs, but he owned animals that could eat him. "They're little but they bite". Lmao. Yeah, she would have, but Maria needs to find those missing files of his. Otherwise, those strange people have dibs. And of course Papa Joe is behind it! Nobody is as evil as him. What she needs to do, is see Donny for what he is...before it's too late. I won't say anymore, but things are to come. BIG things. As always, thanks for the review. ^___^
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2012 09:25 pm Title: Looking Through The Window
LOL, praise the lord there is no Brooke !!! Fantastic chapter and as always it's drama-filled !! Love it ! Can't wait for more :) ♥
Author's Response: Yes, thank the fanfiction gods that there is no Brooke. (Though, I have nothing against her)
Date: Aug 09, 2012 07:07 pm Title: Looking Through The Window
UGGGGGGGGHH!!!!!! PUVVE!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!? THAT WAS YOUR CHANCE!!! I really don't understand why she won't give into Michael!!! I mean who gives a flyin fig about Donnny???? Let the smuck go!!!! Why settle for Donny when you can start a family with a fine young man *cough* cough* MICHAEL JOSEPH JACKSON!!! I really want to go into this story and stick my size 10 foot up so far Donny and Joseph but that they both have toes for teeth!!! But anyway, I'm glad Tatum is gone now can you pretty please find a way to get rid of Donny????
Anyhoo, Great chapter!!
Author's Response: ROTFLMAO!!!! "Flying Fig".u92; I'm dead. xD I'm officially dead. Lmfao about the size 10 shoe. Even after he put his heart on the line for her, she still said no!-.- I would have taken him quick, fast, and in a hurry. As always, thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2012 10:44 pm Title: Just Like Old Times
Hi I'm a new reader and I just finished the story, so far ! It's AMAZING !!!! You have MAJOR skills !!! When I first started reading it, it sounded like an actual book and I totally forgot it was supposed to be about MJ too hahaha you have written an AMAZING, INCREDIBLE story and you have true gifts for writing !!! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next updates !!! Best of luck !!!♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
And girl I just gotta say that "he's a big boy now" part had me laughin hahahaha
Author's Response: Hello. 8-) Nice to finally meet you. Lol. Jk. I welcome all readers. I'm glad you enjoy this story. Your compliments make me very happy. I don't think I'm THAT good. Your reviews are always welcomed. You'll see quite a bit of those insiders throughout the story. Thank you for the review. From the bottom of my heart. I truly appreciate it.
Date: Aug 06, 2012 05:05 pm Title: Just Like Old Times
Awww! I'm glad Jess makes her happy! I hope she will get to adopt him and maybe her and Michael could become a family? cough*cough*
Anyway, great chapter, great story!
Author's Response: He makes ME emotional. Lols. We shall see.8) I'll tell you this, though. Donny will cause some mayhem in the near future. I like you're making implications. about the two.
Date: Aug 04, 2012 06:11 pm Title: Jess
Yay!!!You're back!!! Icouldn't wait for the next update. I'm beginng to think that maybe jess is Hayden's son maybe but his name was Joey. But I love the connection Hayden has with him. Oh, and by the way; I love how you noticed Michael says "sometime" istead of "sometimes" not a lot of people notice this about Mikey and his Gary accent!
Anyway, I'm glad you're back to writing and I hope to see another chapter soon.
GREAT story!
Author's Response: Yup, I was going through withdrawal!. Hmmm, that's....interesting insight, but like you said his name was Joey.I guess we shall see. ;D Yes, I analyze my hubby's voice. Haha, like when his accent comes out in "Moonwalker". "Do it and your dead". *_____* I love it. I wish to thank you from the bottom of my heart for staying with this story.
Date: Jul 30, 2012 03:08 pm Title: Depression
Well I have finally recovered from your departure and read the chapter. Poor Hayden. I definately understand what is feels like to be depressed but she shouldn't give up (And she shouldn't have given it up to Donny either. That was supposed to be reserved for Michael!) You had me so excited though becuase I thought the dream was real!!! When I found out it was just a dream I facepalmed!!!
But over all this was a great chapter and this is a GREAT story! I hope you will continue soon.
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2012 07:47 pm Title: Coming Home
I just started reading this. How could I not have noticed this story before?!? It's a Very good story. :)
Date: Jun 29, 2012 07:31 pm Title: Coming Home
Aww! I just love this story! And Edna is right, Michael and Hayden are messing with faith. they belong together.
Great chapter, Great story!
Date: Jun 25, 2012 03:58 pm Title: Goin' Back To Indiana
I just knew her mother was alive! I wonder will Michael go back with her to Indiana?
Oh, and nice shorts Michael!!
Great chapter as always!!!
Author's Response: You think too much like me! Lol, and he has legs for daaays. *___*
Date: Jun 17, 2012 11:29 am Title: Phlegm
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Ugh! Why does Tantum have to get in the way! Why doesn't she go on about her bussiness and continue using her drugs!!
Oh BTW, I'm sorry about the chapter. I've been pretty busy but I't almost finished. I'll email it to you when I'm finished.
Great Chapter disite the rifraf. Love the pictures!!
Author's Response:
LMFAO, "Why doesn't she go on about her business, and continue using her drugs". Lol, that just had me rolfmao! Bahaha. tatum is a little cock blocker! Lmao, and I love the person IN the pictures.:D
Date: Jun 12, 2012 04:58 pm Title: Tell Him.
Oh by the way I emailed you with the idea.
Author's Response: I replied.:D
Date: Jun 10, 2012 04:47 pm Title: Tell Him.
FINALLY!!!!!! Finally Hayden gets in into that hard head of hers she's in love with Michael!!!! Oh, and I don't mind the pictures, that's my era too!
Author's Response: Lol, I knew you were going to react like this! I said the same thing in my head, when I finished writing this chapter. Haha, I've "Finally" ended everyone's pain, and suffering. I won't say too much more, because then I'll ruin it for you.
Thanks For The Review