[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2011 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 5: Denial
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Date: Nov 04, 2011 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1:Cheater
I love it yet again and i hope Michael gets caught and Meliana leaves him maybe then he will realize that he loves Meliana...great job..im always on Mjfiction..so im looking forward 2 more chapters
Date: Nov 02, 2011 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1:Cheater
u have 2 put up more chapters love this.....love it.....u have to put up at LEAST 2 MORE....NO OFFENCE BUT DIS STORY IS 2 GOOD 2 BE SHORT...LOVE IT GIRL..KEEP IT UP..IM OFFICALLY IN LOVE WITH DIS STORY
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much!! I'm so glad you love it:) I'll try to post two more chapters but usually it takes me awhile to post just one. I've given myself a deadline of posting a chapter every Wednesday and possibly on Fridays. I know a lot of people like this story so I'm trying my best not to make them wait so long. Thank you so much:) Please remember to rate. Thanks for the review!!:)
Date: Nov 02, 2011 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 4:Suspicious mind
u have to keep goin i need more chaptyers this a great fantasies..
Date: Oct 29, 2011 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1:Cheater
love it...u have to update more....
Date: Oct 29, 2011 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 3: Giving you the best that I've got
I like this story please continue
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2011 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 3: Giving you the best that I've got
Nice story, I hope she finds out what her husband is doing, also
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2011 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 3: Giving you the best that I've got
Awww poor baby. I just feel like giving her a hug. (after she gets out the shower of course xD LMAO)
Michael's startin to frustrate me cuz like she is trying so hard but he just won't let up (-_-) ....
Also so is Meli. She needs to say some. Michael is coming home late, ignoring her, brushing her off. I mean if it's bothering her, say some. Dang.
She has to have some kind of feeling that there's something going amiss here. They was naked in the shower and Michael didn't advance toward her.... Girl must be head over heels smh.
Anyhoo....Love it Hun ^_^
Author's Response: LOL!! This review has made my day. I love it when my readers get into my story!
Michael is frustrating me too. When I posted the first chapter I was mad at him. But don't worry, we probably won't be upset much longer. Who can stay mad at that beautiful mad forever?? Anyway, Meli does need to speak up and say something. She may seem weak now but trust me, her strengths are going to come later on in the story. As for her suspecting something, you'll see. I might post another chapter tonight.
Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2011 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 3: Giving you the best that I've got
Awwwh, i feel so bad for Meliana, she is trying so hard but Mikes not having it. I think Michaels guilt may be contributing to his actions towards her! Great story hun, please update soon! <3
Author's Response: I know:( Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! I might post another chapter tonight. Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2011 05:57 am Title: Chapter 2: Love or lust???
oh....God.........
This is INTERESTING darling!
looooooooooooooove it SO MUUUUUUUUUCH!
seriously!
pleaseeeeeeeeeeee UPDATE fast!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm uploading another chapter today so stay tuned!! Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2011 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 2: Love or lust???
Aww. I feel so sorry for Meli :( Its all fun and games until someone starts feeling something more than someone else. :/ gee wiz...
Love the story, keep up the good work
Author's Response: I feel so sorry for Meli too. It's funny because when I uploaded the first chapter I got sort of mad at Michael:/ Yep, that's how it happens. I'm uploading another chapter today!!
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2011 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1:Cheater
Aww Michael! o.o whyyyy??? Poor Meli, she seems like she is gonna be one of those girls who crys when she finds out about the affair not one who would be all mad and stuff and get a gun lol. Great start Hun ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I hated to make Michael a cheater but I wanted to try a different approach. Yes, Meli is not ghetto fabulous. She's very mild mannered. LoL! I made an update to Never. You should read it it's sort of intense.
Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2011 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1:Cheater
OMG! I love it. Defiantly another favorite. Please update soooooonn. :)
Author's Response: Thanks!! I've uploaded two new chapters! You should check them out!! Thanks for the review!!
Date: Oct 19, 2011 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1:Cheater
i luv it u have to put out more chapters soon as possible..i would say taday if you have time cuz this is to good...love it
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm glad you love it!! Please rate. I'll try to get some more chapters! Thanks for the review!!