[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2012 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 31: Need you in my life
Omg what a great chapter (as always) ;) like I fo real thought Anthony was there again I was like scared for Meli D:!! But then it was Michael and my heart rate went down a few notches ;D.
When thangs started getting hot and frisky and Michael saw them bruises, I was like man she's gonna tell him. But she didn't :(... At least Michael told her to get some sleep and he stayed with her <3 that was sweet ^_^ they do need each other and Meli's plan of finalizing the divorce and giving Michael all the custody is just not good cuz Marli need her mama. But I do see Meli's point but if she tell the police they can find Anthony and they all be safe :-/ but I know the situation isn't that easy...
Again! Wonderful chapter hun ^_^ can't wait for the next chapter :D<333 much love<33
Author's Response: Lol! I don't think there's anyway of Anthony getting into Neverland anytime soon. I was thinking:"She's drunk, she should tell him." But some people do have some awareness when drunk. ^_^ It seemed like something Michael would so. He's always been a sweetie pie. Eventually Anthony is going to get it. Just keep reading. Thanks for always reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2012 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 30: I Want You Back
Awe Poor Melina :(... It is totally not cool what Anthony is making her do D: but she's only doing it because she loves Michael :-/ But seriously she needs to tell someone what's going on. Cuz things are like out of hand :-/
I can't wait to read more ^_^ this is so wonderful and the drama is very good :D!!!
Much love <333
Author's Response: Yep, all for the love of Michael. Wow, thanks! I thought some of the drama was too much but I guess It's just enough. I can't thank you enough for all your support. Every time I think I'm loosing my touch you're always there to encourage me. You're a great friend! Thanks for always reviewing!
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2012 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 29: All because I love you
Wow, this dude is crazy! Maybe she'll make herself get help. Great writing!
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2012 03:28 am Title: Chapter 28:Threatened
Great chapter. Lots of love. Oh and no biggie, but, if you get time will you check out my story Rumor has it? I would really appreciate it.
Author's Response: Thank you! Sure It'll read your story!! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2012 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 26: Run to you
Lovin' it! Hope you get better soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm feeling a lot better. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Feb 20, 2012 10:24 am Title: Chapter 25: Long way to go
Poor Mel. It certaintly is gonna take him a while to gain that trust back.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!
Date: Feb 20, 2012 06:27 am Title: Chapter 25: Long way to go
I can understand where Meli is coming from but maybe she should try and talk to Michael for Marli's sake. So the 2 of them can have a good realtionship
Author's Response: She is really hurting but she should try talking to him. I could work things out for her and Marli.
Thanks for taking the time to read and review! I really appreciate it:)
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2012 02:23 am Title: Chapter 25: Long way to go
michael has a long way to go to get her back i hope they can work past this! pleas update soon i want to read more
Author's Response: He sure does! Thanks for the review!!
Date: Feb 19, 2012 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 24: Try a little tenderness
Poor Meli! Its devastating losing a baby. I remember when my aunts baby was born then the baby died 3 mintues later. She was depressed for 2 months.
Author's Response: I'm sure it really is. Even if my baby were a product of force I'd still love it. Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2012 09:56 am Title: Chapter 24: Try a little tenderness
Aww I hope she forgives him, but how do add youtube videos on here?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! What you do to add youtube videos is after the video is over go to share this video and press embed and copy and paste the code. It should show up. I hope this helps you and if it doesn't just let me know. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2012 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1:Cheater
awww man... Michael must be devastated.....i hope Mel forgives him..
good luck mikey..
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2012 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 23: Open you heart to me
:( Melina at least hear him out.... yeah but like she is right though, you can't just forgive someone that fast when they cheated on you. It do take a while :(
Michael needs to like really fight for his woman like for real!!!
He needs to hold her, please her, never leave her, SHOW A LITTLE TENDANESS D:
LOL
anyway :D great chapter and like Meli needs to stop being subborn and at least hear him out :D
Much Love <3 :)
Author's Response: Yeah she has legitimate argument. But yeah Michael does need to fight for cause if he doesn't he might not ever find another. And yeah, try a little tenderness! LOL! I love it when Michael sings it on the Jackson's variety show!!! Thanks for the review!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2012 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 22:" I love Meli"
YAYYYYYY :D I totally knew like the kid wasn't his :D :D :D But damn, shit got serious o_o lol xD All the truth done came out right durr hehe... :P
Hah he called her a hoe! Haha :D cuz she is haha :)
Yeah Michael, that's what's up. Go get yo woman and beg for forgivness cuz like fo reals mane, what him and Meli had/got is real love ....real talk!
lol I'm trollin "real talk" i don't say that... anyway....
I love the word Cheshire :D Alice in Wonderland :)
Great chapter can't wait to read the next one :D
Much Love <3 :)
Author's Response: I know!! You can't trust Tatiana, anybody could be the father!! That was a huge moment of truth! And yeah she is! Yep they've got real love. It might be slightly screwed up but it's real:) I love Alice and wonderland too! Such a wonderful story! Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2012 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 21: Crossing the line
Aww sookie sookie nah D: Tatiana done crossed dat line mm mm mm smdh
Michael angry now, he should totally like break up wit her and go and beg to Meli to take his cheatin' butt back...mmhmmm :) and pay his child support like a good daddy would haha :D Great Chapter hun :D
Much Love <3 :)
Author's Response: Yep she's crossed the line alright!! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2012 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1:Cheater
Yeeeeeeeeeesssssss!!! Finally...He loves Meli...gosh this is such a great storie.....<3
Author's Response: Yay!!! Thanks so much!!!