Date: Jan 02, 2013 12:33 am Title: Chapter 37: 420 Willow Ave
You go get her Michael!
Author's Response: Yeah!! Thanks for reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2012 02:09 am Title: Chapter 36: I'm So Blue
please,help michael to gets meli. and i don't want Tatiana again in this story..dunno why i hate her. and please continued this story as soon as possible. cause i excited bout the next chapter.
Author's Response: He will find her!!! I understand I hate Tatiana to. I make her so evil? Lol!! Thank you for reading!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2012 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 36: I'm So Blue
I LOVE that song! His vocals are phenomenal, they always are, but in that song aw man; absolutely incredible. Lol, anyway my favorite character is probably their daughter to be honest. She keeps them both grounded and sane. Congrats on it being a year!
Author's Response: I know!!! His voice is sooo soothing.I could fall asleep to everynight. Your absolutely right. If Marli didn't exist they'd probably be a big mess!!Thank you for your reviews and support!!
Date: Oct 19, 2012 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 36: I'm So Blue
I hope Michael gets to Meli. He loves that woman and I hope he gets to her!
Author's Response: I hope so too! Thank for the review!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 11:30 am Title: Chapter 1:Cheater
OK :D I've just completed your banner and put it up XD
Check it out and let me know what you think hun. :)) , <33
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2012 09:16 am Title: Chapter 35: Home: WhereThe Heart Is
Continue!!!!!!! Please (:
Author's Response: Thank you!! I will try!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2012 06:39 am Title: Chapter 1:Cheater
Heey :)) You requested a banner for the story Hold My Hand, where you asked me to make them look poor in the picture.
I tried to find a picture where Michael and Paula Patton are wearing clothes which remotely match the description but it's difficult, especially with Paula! So I was wondering, what if I did a close up of their faces beside each other and tried to put an image of a couple holding hands in the background... Would that work?
I'm so sorry that I can't do it as you wish! Once you reply back I will try to get on it asap. Much LOVE , <33
Author's Response: Oh yes that's perfectly fine!!! I understand completely but I kind of always planned for the banner to look the way you described. Sorry for the inconvence and thank you so much!!!
Date: Oct 05, 2012 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 35: Home: WhereThe Heart Is
I think you should do a sequel and then the prequel. I'd like to see Meli's life before her parent's death, after, and meeting Michael.
Author's Response: A new reader!!! Welcome!!! I'm so sorry you became a ndew reader on such a terrible chapter!! But thank you so much for your imput!! I will gladly take it into consideration.
[Report This]Date: Sep 09, 2012 02:53 am Title: Chapter 34: Can't Let her Get Away
Omg!!! :O Michael is mad yo!!!! I can't believe Pam D:< what kind of friend is she talkin bout "and?" gurl please -_-
Theres bout to be some action ^_^ anthony don't know what he got himself into cuz michael is gonna bring that can of WHOOP ASS! ;D hahaha! But I foreal tho hope that jack donkey Anthony hasn't hurt Meli again >:(...
Wonderful chapter as always ;D dear! Can't wait for the next chapter :D ^_^
Much love <33333
Author's Response: I know right!!! Michael's about to give Anthony a good old fashioned mid-west butt kickin!! Maqn, Michael is so sexy when he's mad and his Indianan accent comes out!! (i.e, Moonwalker:"Do it and your dead") Sigh! But yeah, the real action starts here!! Thanks for always reading!!!
Author's Response: I know right!!! Michael's about to give Anthony a good old fashioned mid-west butt kickin!! Maqn, Michael is so sexy when he's mad and his Indianan accent comes out!! (i.e, Moonwalker:"Do it and your dead") Sigh! But yeah, the real action starts here!! Thanks for always reading!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2012 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 34: Can't Let her Get Away
Finally, finally he knows! Aww, it was Marli's b-day and her mother wasn't there :( So sad. I hope they get to her soon. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yay!!! After many, many, many chapters he knows!!!!! Yeah, poor "Boo" :( Thanks for always reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2012 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 33: Taken
Omg!! I wonder where Anthony is taking her. Dude i am like so scared for Melina right now D:!!! Anthony is such a freaking jerk D:<!! Hopefully Pam or Michael comes and finds that note cuz Meli is in serious trouble right now :(
Great chapter hun ^_^!!!!
Much love and I Deff can't wait to read the next chapter ;D!!!!<3333
Author's Response: I know! They have some major jerks in the world. Thanks!! I'll be working on it. Thanks for always reviewing!! >3
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2012 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 32: Everybody's somebody's fool
Daggone it!! I really thought Meli would tell Michael what's going on like fo real >_<!!
This chapter was really emotional :'( I was like on the verge of tears cuz like Michael really wants to work things out and now Melina is the one closing down. They are like total opposite from the beginning :- but like I know she's going thru what she has to because she loves Michael but like he's begging her to tell him and she just can't... It's just so much to handle D':
Wonderful chapter dear <333 can't wait to read the next chapter :D
Much Love <3333^_^
Author's Response: Did I trick you?? ;) Don't worry, she going to pour her heart and soul out to Michael one day. But at least they're not so cold toward each other. I'm really glad you enjoy my story. Thanks for always reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2012 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 32: Everybody's somebody's fool
:( She should've told him the truth, he probably could've helped more than she thinks. Great chapter!
Author's Response: She should have. What will it take to make her learn?? Thanks for the review!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2012 12:25 am Title: Chapter 31: Need you in my life
Can't believe she asked him if they really had a child; drinkin will do that to you lol! I hope she tells him the truth soon. Her leaving will only make Anthony want to get to her family more... He'd be able to use them to make her come back. Oh and kudos to Mike for being a gentleman when he could have easily taken advantage of her. Great chapter!
Author's Response: lol! Drinking has that affect on your brain. You'll forget your own name! Michael is always a gentelman. It's just a part of his wonderful being.
Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2012 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 31: Need you in my life
Oh yeah! When you said California King Bed, it reminded me of the song California King Bed by Rihanna :D! And the title of the chapter made me think of Everytime We Touch by Cascada. :P I meant to write that in the last review but I forgot :P lol
Still great chapter ;D<33
Author's Response: Lol! One of my friends helps me with ideas sometimes and she said I shouldn't describe their bed as a King bed, It should be a California King Bed. I'm gonna have to youtube that song. Thanks for being a faithful reader!