[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2011 03:53 am Title: Chapter 6
that was interseting continue please :)
Author's Response:
thank you for the comment and thanks for reading^_^
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2011 01:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Dude brother and sister thats shocking. I was thinking that he was going to say her boyfriend. Great update by the way. Waiting for the next chapter. Continue.
Author's Response:
thank you for leaving a comment
he was her
half brother
and she was his half sister
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2011 09:36 am Title: Chapter 2
Random commet :) hah i write stories on youtube and the girl you have as your girl is the girl in my stories to hahaha :)
Author's Response:
as thesame huh i have been just used my name
<3
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2011 03:07 am Title: Chapter 4
Cant wait for the next chapter enjoy reading it continue
Author's Response:
sorry if icant made the next the next chapter in fast period of time
well im on my long weekend vacation im sorry for a small interruption for my readers
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2011 02:57 am Title: Chapter 3
Dude you killing me. For a author your funny XD
Author's Response:
thank you
i like your comment
couz im the type of human that have a lots of sense of humor than bieng serious
i really love funny thins thankyou for reading
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2011 02:45 am Title: Chapter 2
Nice second chapter
Author's Response:
thankyou for that comment im glad that many was still reviewing my stories eventhough im on vacation
love all of ya'h!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Oct 21, 2011 03:27 am Title: Chapter 3
thanks for the comment and im thankfull to you that you had leaved a comment it helps me to persue to continue writting this story and i need also to inspired by my readers
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2011 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
ahaha, he is also a gentleman and innocent to see divine half nude.... Even with the undies on meaning the bra... Hahhahaha
Author's Response:
nice mc love k uhng the coursed king mo
more stories to do
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2011 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahah, thanks to the review butvI love that MIchael seems to be bossy in here... Love ya.
Author's Response:
ahum hes been bossy in the following chapters
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2011 03:50 am Title: Chapter 2
Nice. Omg She slapped him maybe he deserved it lol cant wait for the next chapter make it longer continue :P
Author's Response:
hahah
can you imagine he just pushed her bestfriend down to the floor
who on earth can let that happen just like that into its dearest friend???
bye the way thanks for the nice comment
love all the readers
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2011 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow michael is always up to something. Cant wait for the next chapter continue
Author's Response:
thank you. well then as fast as i can i will upload the next chapter. its al for mj lovers