[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2024 09:47 am Title: Prologue #2
But why didn't you continue this story? It's cruel T_T
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2024 09:43 am Title: Chapter 2: An Unexpected Encounter.
It's an interesting chapter. This shows that Diana is a fragile and weak young woman. I really like the interpretation of the character, it's cool. The message with false happiness! I really like the idea and the way it is written :)
It's funny that Diana and Michael both dress strangely (half dangerous woman, half comfortable clothes). Another common point is that they feel alone, abandoned and sad with crying attacks.
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2024 09:21 am Title: Prologue #1
I know this fanfiction is dated but I absolutely wanted to comment on it, I would like there to be a sequel :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2017 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 5: He Tried.
You haven't updated this story in forever, but I need to comment just in case you see it. This story is SO good! Your writing style is amazing, the plotline is on point, it's truly amazing. You're a great writer!
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2013 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 5: He Tried.
really good! can't wait to see an update!
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2012 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 5: He Tried.
I love this ...please write more :)
Author's Response:
I already have the next chapter planned in my head... I just need to write it down, now! xD
I'll do my best to write it soon, though.
Much love, Annie <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2012 11:01 am Title: Chapter 5: He Tried.
Another amazing story by one of my favorute authors and I mean that sincerely, Im extremely picky when it comes to the stories I read, but yours are just too good to pass up!
And I loveeee the lady who plays Diana. I see her all over tumblr and she's freakin' gorgeous!! She's great for this role.
Haahaa! Anywho, hope you update soon :)
Author's Response:
thank you so much!! it makes me so happy that I'm one of your favorites!!! *hugs*
oh, and the girl (Sky Ferreira) is absolutely perfect, I have to admit. I don't even remember how I came up with her for the part, but I already knew her for a while and I just knew she was the one.
I'll do my best to update ASAP! ;D
Date: Aug 16, 2012 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 5: He Tried.
Woohoo, I just found this story. Really captivating.
Your writing is good, I enjoyed all the chapters.
Don't make us wait too much for the next chapter!! I'm curious to know what will happen, there's so much tension between those two :)...!
Author's Response:
thank you so much, dear! I'll try to update soon! ;D
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2012 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 5: He Tried.
I love this story. :) I hope you continue with it.
Author's Response:
thank you, bb!
I'll do my best! :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2011 10:16 pm Title: Prologue #1
Amazing! I love it!
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2011 09:17 am Title: Chapter 4: The Subtle Invitation.
jepp sounds good .... really good - like your story
<3 it
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2011 07:57 am Title: Chapter 4: The Subtle Invitation.
Loved it!!! Please update ASAP And can you pleaseupdate my favorite story "Just Put Your Trust In My Heart"plzzzzz I abosolutley adore both of these stories:)
Author's Response:
I've been with a kind of a writer's block with that one... but I'm writing the next chapter little by little and I hope to have it up soon.
Thanks for the review, it means so much to me that you love my stories! :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2011 07:45 am Title: Prologue #1
Omg....I love it! it captured my attention from fisrt glance! God bless :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2011 01:14 pm Title: Prologue #1
I put this story in my Ipod yesterday... today we were with school an a trip and I read the whole time your story !!!!
I just cant stop reading this !!!
And yes, like "ilovemike18 " i truly belive that this story can be very popular here on mjfiction !!!!!!!
< 3< 3 < 3 < 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¨¨
OMG i think the whole time about how it goes on !!!Today my teacher said about books " we have to pai attention that we dont belive the fiction... " and I immediately thought on THIS story, because I think so much about this story, it just amazes me.... ok i'm 15 and just a huuuuge michael jackson fan... i <3 him and this story's perfect !!!
Can I ask you how old you are ?
Thank you for enternaining me during school
Author's Response:
Haha, I'm glad that I was able to entertain you during boring ole' school! :D
And thank you so much for the great feedback, I love that you love my story!
By the way, I'm 16. Technically, 16 years, 4 months and 7 days old xD
And... you're welcome! <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2011 11:59 am Title: Prologue #1
i loooooooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOO ve your story !!!!!!!!!! pleas add new chapter <3 <3 OMG can't belive thats just that kind of story I searched !!!!
Author's Response:
I'll update the next chapter as soon as I can :)
I'l glad you like the story :D