[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2011 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 3- California Dreamin'
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Thanks :)
Date: Oct 17, 2011 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 3- California Dreamin'
Please continue! I really like the setting of this story! I want to see where it goes from here!
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Thanks for the review
Date: Oct 17, 2011 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 3- California Dreamin'
please keep updating on this website!!!!! i love this story. :)
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Thanks for the review :)
Date: Oct 17, 2011 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 3- California Dreamin'
Omg ! Omg ! Omg !
I Freaakinn LOVE This DO NOT STOP (:
Youre An Amazinggg Writerr !
Continue ASAP (As Soon As Possible)
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Thanks so much for your kind words :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2011 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 3- California Dreamin'
hey girl !!! I've red your another story 'You cant have everything' too. I just want to you to tell that I love this story, I just started reading this and I love this! Dont try to delete it for some one else, do it for yourself girl :) There are lots of good stories in this website with lack of reviews!!! Just Becuase it doesnt have more reviews it doesnt mean that Its a worst story... BTW update your another story soooon!!! ;)
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Thanks im currently wokring on it now :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 30, 2011 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 2-Beauty is her name
Great Chapter!!! That was so nice of Michael to give her that money. Oh and Lisa is out of her mind for not having Michaels children. lol. Poor Michael, all he wants to be is a father and Lisa wont let him. Hopefully he will soon become a father. Update soon(:
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2011 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 2-Beauty is her name
Great Chapter :D Please update soon.
Date: Sep 23, 2011 03:47 am Title: Chapter 1-Bem-vindo ao Brasil (Welcome to Brazil)
Oh, finish please, are you Brazlian? Im anxious to know how this story conitnues. How cruel and inhumane can the police be, Loving the images and th story so far.
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Thanks. Nope im American. Thanks is for the review
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2011 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1-Bem-vindo ao Brasil (Welcome to Brazil)
Fucking hell, that was a amazing first chapter. Really, be proud of yourself. I can't wait till you update, sweetie. You're so talented.
LOVEEE
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Date: Sep 18, 2011 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1-Bem-vindo ao Brasil (Welcome to Brazil)
i like it... please, keep going
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[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2011 07:46 am Title: Chapter 1-Bem-vindo ao Brasil (Welcome to Brazil)
WOAHHHHHH the irony. LOL she says he's the most beautiful man she has ever seen but doesnt even know who michael Jackson is. But i would have said the same thing. I really cant wait for the next chapter :)
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LOL i know. Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2011 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1-Bem-vindo ao Brasil (Welcome to Brazil)
OOOOHHH!!!! PLZ CONTINUE! i love it allready. :) cant wait for the next chapter! hope its asap. hahaha. :)
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Thanks :)
Date: Sep 17, 2011 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1-Bem-vindo ao Brasil (Welcome to Brazil)
I LOOOOOOOOOOVED IT!!WOW!
Are u Brazilian?I'm from Brasil!I was born in Rio de Janeiro!I'm so happy with this story!Thank you!Post more ASAP!Please!*_*
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Aww thank you. Nope in actually from the U.S. ive never been to brazil or even out of the country. So im basically just guessing of how it should be. I cant believe you are from brazil, now the pressure is really on lol.
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2011 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1-Bem-vindo ao Brasil (Welcome to Brazil)
Such a wonderful first chapter. I loved all the colorful pictures. Update soon :)
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Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2011 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1-Bem-vindo ao Brasil (Welcome to Brazil)
:) Tu historia es muy interesante! Me encanta el video de "They Don't Care About Us"! Lo siento, I speak 4 other languages so my espanol isn't as sharp as it used to be! Keep it up dear heart <3
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