Reviews For The Invitation
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Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2013 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 3:Dinner's at Eight

Update soon

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment,it's appreciated.Uploading chapter 4 soon.Much Love

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2013 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 3:Dinner's at Eight

She's doing better than I would have. I'd have been passed out on the floor by now!



Author's Response:

IKR!!!!! If I'd been her I would've melted all over him as soon as the elevator doors opened and I saw his gorgeous mega-watt smile to me.Thank you for reading and commenting.I'll upload chapter 4 soon.Hope you'll take the time to read it as well.~Much Love

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2013 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 2:My lifelong Crush

Whew! That was a HOT chapter!! She better change her mind about dinner! Can't wait for them to meet!!

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2013 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1:Going Home

Dang, Michael...talk to your employees about being slightly less creepy! LOL

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2013 04:04 am Title: Chapter 3:Dinner's at Eight

omg i love this story please please continue please



Author's Response:

Thank you,I'm so pleased you like this story.I'll upload chapter 4 soon.I do hope you'll give feedback to it.Much love

Reviewer: reafu Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2013 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 3:Dinner's at Eight

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.I'll upload the next chapter 4 soon.Hope you'll enjoy it.Much love 

Reviewer: ladydee Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2011 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1:Going Home

I agree with mrsmjjbarbie on spacing out the Paragraphs. It was a little hard to read but it's still an interesting story.
Hope u continue. **smile**

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a commit.I do appreciate the advice and will space out the paragraphs.Hope to add chapter three soon.~Peace,Angel  

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2011 07:28 am Title: Chapter 1:Going Home

Can't wait !!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking time to leave a commit.Sorry for the wait,I've added chapter two.Hope you'll read it.~Peace,Angel

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2011 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1:Going Home

Absolutely interesting but it becomes hard to read when you don't space things out. Makes my eyes cross!



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read and your helpful imput,I did take this into consideration.Hope you'll be able to read chapter two,which is now up.~Peace,Angel  

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