Date: Jan 03, 2021 03:09 am Title: Ch. 22
Damn... but she deserves it
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2017 07:07 pm Title: Ch. 22
Whoo HOO...finally Miss Crazy Horse gets what's coming to her...she sure was STUPID to think she could traumatize Amber and have there not be reprucutions
Wow...Chris sure was blinded by family loyalty, but that's typical...family members usually can't see people for who they really are
Wow...Michael handled Angelina with CLASS...perfectly
No, I think Miss Crazy Horse will be back, people like her are just too stupid to get it, their egos are too big...
I have no idea which song it is...though i would probably go 'Oh yeah' if i read the title lol
Author's Response:
she really is crazy and yes michael finished her with class doing his thing without violence. I do agree Chris was blinded by her fake sweetnessa needing something to get her way somehow. maybe she'll be back who knows smh lol. the song was just a little bit of you by mj lol.
Date: Feb 10, 2016 02:07 pm Title: Ch. 22
I enjoyed reading it. I can't think of what the song is. What was it? Please let us know.
Author's Response:
the song i sampled was J5 - almost there..i hope i've cured the mystery :)
Author's Response:
the song i sampled was J5 - almost there..i hope i've cured the mystery :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2016 04:36 pm Title: Ch. 22
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continueπππππππππππππππππππππi think Angelina is gonna lie to Chris about amber Michael and Marlon
Author's Response:
Thanks again for your support as always hun! Who knows you might be right or wrong? Lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2016 11:08 pm Title: Ch. 22
Wow! Well I can honestly say that I don't think Angelina is going to be a problem anymore but I am a little about her welfare. She needs to be locked away somewhere, definitely.
But I'm glad MJ finally took a stand.
I didn't really like how he and Marlon kept referring to Amber as their property though. Makes her sound like an object that belongs to them. But I know they meant well. Perhaps they could have use a less demeaning term.
But overall, this was a very entertaining chapter, Lorry! Great job.
Author's Response:
you stil care for her even after the crap she's done? you have a heart ebony don't worry they don't roughen her up too much, lol and yes I am as well on mj doing it at last and yea they could have used more of a less demeaning term for her but it was maybe just to get their point across to Angelina in that moment to back off for good? and thanks as always Ebony glad you enjoyed it <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2016 05:20 pm Title: Ch. 22
Damn, mafia Michael is HOT. The only thing that could make him sexier is tattoos. Lord. Please continue soon!!!!
Author's Response:
I agree well not on the tattoos part lol and yes there is more to come Louie thanks as always <3
Date: Jan 04, 2016 12:09 pm Title: Ch. 22
Love this side of Michael, he fights for who he loves
If she's smart she stays away from them for good
Author's Response:
yes the badass mj we all have been waiting for at last, and yes if she truly is smart she would but we shall see eh? lol