




Date: May 13, 2017 03:21 pm Title: Ch.8
Wowwwwww....no wonder Michael is trying to hide his family from Amber
Joseph is acting like some sort of mob boss or other...
Maybe it's time for Michael to warn Amber, secrecy is not always a good thing, impo
Look forward to more :)
Author's Response:
I cannot blame him one bit. Joseph is crazy and obsessed with moment. It could be time to tell her about it but we won't know how she will react when she finally finds out the truth...lol.
Date: Apr 29, 2016 05:52 pm Title: Ch.8
Marlon needs his ass whoop for that! He knows Joe's only aim
Author's Response:
Smh Ikr but Marlon sometimes only does it to keep his own ass out of line with Joe's view which isn't fair on Michael who only trusted him but we shall see 😖
Date: Feb 09, 2016 04:44 pm Title: Ch.8
Are they loansharks?





Date: Nov 16, 2015 08:20 pm Title: Ch.8
Yikes! Things got really deep and intense here. Great job! That Joseph is creul, as are the rest of Michael's brothers. And Marlon was sooo wrong for what he did.
Something tells me that this situation is going to put a big strain on his relationship with Amber.
Nice chapter Lorry!
Author's Response:
yes they indeed are, marlon was just wrong for doin that poor michael! and your hunch might be right
and thanks for reading as always darling <3





Date: Nov 16, 2015 02:10 pm Title: Ch.8
I think Michael's family business being in a Mafia. OHHHHHH I'M SO ON EDGE WITH THIS PLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE:):):):):):):):):)
Author's Response:
Date: Nov 16, 2015 01:41 pm Title: Ch.8
Oh men some dirty business Joseph does, yes if was Michael I'd also want to escape from that
Oh can't wait what he's going to say to Amber
Author's Response:
yes some dirty business indeed, what could it be tho?, and don't blame him i would too~
we will just have to just wait and see what he says eh?
thanks for reading hun <3