




Date: May 09, 2017 04:39 pm Title: Ch.7
Hm...maybe Michael thinks Marlon will spill a few 'beans' about what's going on in their family...
Look forward to finding out what's really going on :)
Author's Response:
Perhaps so he really doesn't want Amber to know his crazy life behind closed doors and she will find out eventually lol. Thanks Mary <3
Date: Jul 10, 2016 01:30 pm Title: Ch.7
I love this story! I know Amber is digging on Michael but I wouldn't blame her if she got caught up in Marlon. He's cute & charming. A lethal combination.
Author's Response:
Oh hello! Thank for your reading I do agree with you about her digging two of them that can be a terrible combination. She needs to be careful but you'll read on and see what happens! Enjoy the rest 😎
Date: Apr 29, 2016 05:50 pm Title: Ch.7
Man I was hoping Amber wouldnt fall for Marlon's charm and wittiness! This could be just a farce,a and she could be doing this to make Michael jealous. Creating sibling rivalry!
Author's Response:
Well who wouldn't fall for Marlon's charms but Amber she won't for long and we'll she might be doing it to make mj jealous or not who knows you'll just have to read on to find out 😏
Date: Feb 09, 2016 04:35 pm Title: Ch.7
She in love with Michael. Marlon is just a substitute.
Author's Response: Ouch! But you are right about that lol. Poor Marlon
Date: Nov 14, 2015 01:18 am Title: Ch.7
Not fair to stop now lol
Hmm Amber And Marlon? .poor Michael is heartbroken
Can't wait to see what he's going to answer
Author's Response:
i'm not sorry for leaving it there, hoho and yes maybe marlon/amber? who knows and don't remind me michael is heartbroken as it is..poor thing and yes my wondeful friend i wonder what he will say too~ 3
thanks for reading hun <3





Date: Nov 13, 2015 05:31 pm Title: Ch.7
Wow! Things are getting deep now. Michael is being all mysterious. What's up with that?! And Amber does seem to be crushing on Marlon a bit. However, Michael shouldn't have anything to worry about if he hurry up and come clean to her about his feeling.
Very nice chapter, Lorry!
I'm so proud of your improvements 😁
Author's Response:
yes indeed things are getting deep indeed, i wonder what he could be hiding? and i don't even know ebony it's too much of a mystery lol and yea she is, poor michael he should hurry up time's a wasting, tut tut, and aww thanks hun i try my best <3