




Date: Feb 19, 2023 10:42 am Title: Ch. 1
I really like the way you write. I am excited for what is to come next. (:





Date: Apr 17, 2017 11:26 am Title: Ch. 1
I always enjoy stories where Michael and the original girl are kids :)...those are my favorites :)
Very enjoyable...sweet interactions :).
Look forward to reading more :)
Author's Response:
heeey! i love them as much as you do lool, and they are indeed! enjoy the rest <3
Date: Oct 17, 2016 01:53 pm Title: Ch. 1
Just started reading this story and I'm loving it! Very cute :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story..see you in the sequel! Γ°ΕΈΛβ
Date: Jun 26, 2016 05:04 pm Title: Ch. 1
Awww this is cute. This is my first time reading any of your work. Pretty good. I don't know which one I want to read first. This or Liberian Girl! Good job
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to, there is plenty more for you to read lol. I can't help you with deciding but there is enough for you to enjoy for awhile π. Enjoy the rest!





Date: Apr 29, 2016 05:58 pm Title: Ch. 1
I wanted to read this before reading your most recent additon to your series...I have a feeling I'm going to like this :-)
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much for taking the time to read my stories I hope you enjoy this and the sequel because there is certainly going to more drama and so forth into the future π.
Date: Apr 10, 2016 12:08 pm Title: Ch. 1
Hey, Lorry! This story sounds very romantic! I cant wait to start reading it! THe first chapter already has me hooked! Got 31 more chapters to go! Also, love the banner! SPeaking of banners, I couldn't find your email so when you get a chance, send it to me through a private message :)
Author's Response: Hey Kara! Aww thanks for taming the time to read, haha and don't forget the sequel too Hoho! Lol.
Date: Mar 06, 2016 08:17 am Title: Ch. 1
Very sweet; you already have me hooked.
Author's Response:
hey a new reader! aw thank you so much~
hope you enjoy reading the rest of the story! <3
Date: Feb 09, 2016 11:04 am Title: Ch. 1
This is a very good introduction for a story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words π
Date: Oct 29, 2015 08:28 pm Title: Ch. 1
Glad to see these two friends again. And how cute is it for her to wake up with Michael and her mother chatting away. I would love to wake up and find him in my kitchen..lol
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Imao I agree who wouldn't mj in their kitchen? And yeah I wanted mj to be cool with her mama, makes the experience more hilarous. Aw thanks hun I'll try my best :)





Date: Oct 18, 2015 12:51 am Title: Ch. 1
Lorry, I'm so proud of you! I'm glad to see you got your new story up. And this is too cute! I can't wait to see how things turn out for these two.
Author's Response:
aww thanks alot Gabby darling <3, yes they are indeed cute, lol, lets hope it still turns out ok with them, we shall see ~





Date: Oct 13, 2015 12:21 pm Title: Ch. 1
This one is very cute too Lorry! Keep writing. I'm seeing so much improvement and potential here. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this adorable story.
Author's Response:
Aww thanks alot Dare!, i'm still writing indeed lol, don't you worry. more is sure to come :)
Date: Oct 13, 2015 09:43 am Title: Ch. 1
Aww it's a sweet story, love it
Author's Response:
heyoo!, aw thanks hun, stayed tuned, there's more to come :D





Date: Oct 12, 2015 01:13 pm Title: Ch. 1
I like it luv. It's so fluffy and sweet so far :)
Author's Response: hey darling, let's hope it says this way lol. thanks for reading <3





Date: Oct 12, 2015 09:18 am Title: Ch. 1
PLZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE:):):):):)
Author's Response: Hey mjlover!, thanks so much for reading, don't worry the next chapter is coming soon ;)