Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 08:49 am Title: Chapter 55

Larry is smarmy disgusting twit. Ugh. He did this to that little girl and she's probably scared because either made some kind of threat to harm her or Michael or she thinks Michael knows what Larry did and can't reconcile herself to not react to the mention of his name since he was supposed to be her protector. 

Can we fast forward to where the story is complete and I know everything. Lmaooo. I love this story so much!!!

Girrrllllll!!!! If you have read BEB any further you have an idea just how intense an imagination I have when it comes to Michael and sex(though he's quite crass in the begining) I know it will happen for Mal and Michael. It will have to be very tender and safe for her to let go of it all and appreciate it for what it should be when a man loves a woman. 

Now when I say more soon I mean it!!! I feel we're aquainted enough for me to threaten you for chapters. lol. <333

Author's Response:

Larry is a pin dick. I can't stand him. Haha. Isnt it funny how invested we become in stories. I think he isn't connecting it to Larry because he's not really thinking that anyone that close to him could be guilty. He would think that he is a decent judge of character, so he's totally overlooking Larry. And maybe from Diane's side, Larry has already come up, but she is thinking too close; in terms of Michael. 

Hahaha. I haven't gotten very far with BEB, yet. But I have to admit, I am really mild with sex scenes because I feel almost too embarrassed to write them. Maybe I'll have to read yours for some encouragement hahaha. 

I heard your threats, and I've updated! Don't hurt me! 

Now update your newbie, or else I'll hurt you.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2015 10:21 am Title: Chapter 55

Didn't Michael leave Casey alone with Larry at some point. I feel like I remember that happening in the period Diane was away. I'm so angered by that man and yet I know so little of his story yet. Ugh. I'm hoping with all I have that Greg pulls out all the stops and catches people lying through their teeth come Tuesday. 

I'm with Kaito on this. The evidence is so contrived that it almost seems like a set of some kind. 

I'm not really surprised that Mak feels she wants to have sex with Michael. I'm not entirely sure she is strong enough to go through it. Then I'll be showed if she does. I'm glad she has Raia as an outlet it seems to be helping her a great deal. 

Cant wait to see what goes down next. 

More soon <333

Author's Response:

Thanks for the thoughtful response, Tut. And yep, you're right... he has left Casey alone with Larry on a few occasions plus there's been situations where there's been clues that he's had access to Casey without either Diane and Mike knowing. (tip: earlier it was mentioned the last person to stay in the guest room beside Casey's was actually Larry) There's a lot of lies happening and moments that people aren't thinking about. Because Larry is a person who was very close to Michael at a moment in time, Michael is probably overlooking him massively because he thinks he knows him. 

If you think about 93 and 03, all the charges were based on was a single allegation without much "evidence"-- that's apparently all it takes!

Ummm as if you wouldnt want to have sex with Michael! Who knows if she'll get through it or when they're going to get the chance.