Date: Oct 29, 2015 09:43 pm Title: We Are Family
Very good. You are getting better at writing. The more you write, the better you will get at it.
Author's Response:
Aw thank you so much!!! I've been taking a break for awhile, just thinking of ways to improve my writing and stories :) I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far!!! Believe me, I need all the feedback/criticism I can get lol But seriously though, thanks <3
Date: Oct 28, 2015 08:04 pm Title: We Are Family
Very good sequence of events.
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2015 10:30 am Title: We Are Family
Really love that it showed Michael getting use to fatherhood
Author's Response:
Aw I agree!!! He's gonna be a great father :) glad u enjoyed this chap!!!!
Date: Aug 29, 2015 10:38 am Title: We Are Family
WE ARE FAMILY, I GOT ALL MY SISTERS WITH ME loll dats my song
This chapter almost had me in tears and I'm suppose to be a thug these stories rly get my emotions all in it lol Riley aka Danielle was so cuteeeeeee saying Michael was her father he is in a way aka stepfather and omgggg how come all the girls were up and the boys were knocked out lol
Anyway Good Update 😂😂👏👏
Author's Response:
Lol ikr?! The boys be gettin that beauty sleep while the girls stay up all night. I agree! It's adorable how Riley considers Michael to be her father because in a lot of ways he is. He loves Lisa's children like crazy lol glad you enjoyed this chap!!! Btw I apologize for trying to make u cry. I like writing little sentimental moments :) The moment I titled this chap I immediately started singing "we are familllllly" rofl