




Date: Aug 17, 2020 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 15
Malania is a true and good friend to Michael:) Yes, he was a bit of a jerk at the beginning of the chapter, but given his chaotic state of mind, and his fear that his secret has been discovered, it is forgivable (especially because he went back to "normal", caring Michael).
And something struck me in the previous chapter - it was present in the other chapters too: Michael had become too involved in the lives of Casey and Diane, I think it was not very healthy.
It would be very nice to see Michael and Malania's adventures in town in the next chapter. I am curious if Michael will go unnoticed:)



Date: Jun 13, 2017 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 15
Even though this story makes me squeemish with the self abuse its still good
Date: Feb 16, 2015 06:15 am Title: Chapter 15
Michael can be a jerk, but he sure knows how to make up for it. I look forward to their little adventure.





Date: Feb 15, 2015 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 15
This chapter was heart rending. :(((( I feel so bad for the both of them. The way you described Michael's appearance and Mal's reaction to him looking at her arm was so palpable. Sigh... I'm glad in the end that things brightened a bit.
'painting the town might be just the ticket'
I'm gripped!
More soon <333
Author's Response:
Thanks :) It'll all brighten up just a bit soon!
Date: Feb 15, 2015 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 15
Nah. He's not a dick. He had his reasons not to call. I get it...
I'm so squirmish about wrists and stuff that it was really hard for me to read the part describing Malania's scars. I honestly just had to skim. I guess that's a good thing for you though--means it's realistic enough to turn me off so completely!
I always look for your updates! Keep up the bomb work! I'm literally DYING to know more Diane/Michael backstory.
Author's Response:
The Michael and Diane story will show more as time progresses.
Sorry to make your tummy feel a bit funny! I'm the complete opposite!
Date: Feb 15, 2015 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
I haven't even read this yet, all I know is that the author's note at the top already has me tripping.