[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2020 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 13
i loved how Michael sensed there was something that was bothering Malania, that she was not herself. And it was nice to see her starting to open up to him about her past and about the relationship she has with her family. The understanding and connection between two hurt souls like Michael and Malania was done in a beautiful and realistic way.
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2015 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
I love the way their friendship is blossoming. Their sarcastic humor is easy to enjoy. I can't wait to see how Michael reacts to what's in the box. That was a seriously deep note.
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2015 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
This story is awesome. I've been stuck in bed with a cold for the past couple of days and I read this in one sitting. Well written and so sweet. It's so real! Can't wait to see how long it takes Michael to open the puzzle box. I googled what the box would look like just so I have a visual. Lol.
More soon!!! <333
Author's Response:
Thanks gorgeous :)
I love those puzzle boxes :) I have a few of them. Theyre beautiful! (And a giant pain in the ass)
Date: Feb 03, 2015 11:57 am Title: Chapter 13
I wonder how long it'll take him to work out the box! And what's inside ooo...
He needs to be more worried about her being beaten up...come on, Mike!
Love this story! Keep on updating !! <3
(p.s., i reread the last few chapters and I was definitely just sleep-deprived. they make total sense, lol)
Author's Response:
Haha I'm glad!! :) I had a reread this morning and I thought it was well-clear. Glad it is!
I'll update another chapter in a few days.
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2015 06:08 am Title: Chapter 13
I highly doubt that I'm the only one who gets excited each time I see this thread has been added to, let alone a chapter posted :)
Also, my own privacy was important. I was sick of having family turn up and trying to see me when I wasn’t in the mood. For whatever reason, my Mom could never say no to Jermaine and he was the one I wanted to see the very least.
You went there. Two names came to mind, and that was definitely one of them.
My Mama refused to make a statement. She’s lucky my love outweighs my anger and frustration with her.”
I'm stuck on that. That just...ugh. I imagine being a mom in that situation is especially hard. At the same time, I'm just...no. Nope. Not okay. Be Pollyanna-ish, but when safety is at risk?No.
I love how you had Malania's story gradually unravel. She's been through a lot and you conveyed the (partial?) revealing of it, beautifully. Actually, that whole conversation flowed incredibly naturally.
NO pain pills, Michael. Work on solving the puzzle box!!