Date: Dec 28, 2022 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wauw...such good writing!! I can see it all in front of me.
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2017 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story so far ! I can't wait to read the next chapters because i really like your style of written. Good work !
... and poor Michael ! 😠I want to give him a big hug lol
Keep it up ! 😉
Date: Feb 13, 2016 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh no :/
Author's Response:
Hey! I know you :)
Date: Aug 09, 2015 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've been waiting for an update all week, can't wait to read the new chapter! :)
Date: Jul 21, 2015 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yesss! Samuel is dead, i have never been happier to see such a vile, digusting man dead, good riddance!, now everyone can slowly move on with their lives without his vile posion in their lives, annnnd i love the little bond between her and mj! it's so cute. another awesome chapter! <3
Author's Response:
Hahaha.... Maybe they wont move on... maybe this will stagnate Malania's recovery... maybe maybe maybe!
I love Kaito's dude bro-isms.
Date: Jul 15, 2015 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww poor thing, I hope she gets out of it soon and Michael wouldn't leave her for the world!, u can see how much he loves her!. Another Great chapter! <3
Author's Response:
Michael is beautiful :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2015 11:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Great
Author's Response:
er...thanks?
Date: Jun 29, 2015 05:06 am Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the best stories on mjfiction in my opinion, keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you Salva! I appreciate that :)
Date: Jun 23, 2015 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you updated! it's pity i can't add this story to my favourites! I love everything about the story! the angst took awhile to get used to, your story is one of the stories i find here that should have 1k views and above!, i cant wait for her brother to meet michael that would be hilarous! keep writing awesome author! <3
Author's Response:
Thanks Lorry, thats a huge compliment :) you rock!
I think angst is normal, but we rarely see it reflected in fan fics, usually things are all butterflies and rainbows where the OG cant ever see flaws in MJ or the flaws of his life arent shown up..... or the alternative is that they are in the most extreme way. I wanted to try to find middle ground.
So glad you are enjoying this :)
x
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2015 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1
This sounds rather interesting. Definitely well written. I'm really busy right now, but maybe I'll read later :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2015 10:05 am Title: Chapter 1
This story has me 
Author's Response:
It has u looking like this fellow?! Unfortunate. Sorry about that!! Lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2015 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I got so excited when I saw that you updated 3 more chapters lol! Just finished chapter 20.
Seriously though, I'm so invested in this story. I love how you build everything up slowly. It's genius! And I applaud how much thought you've put into this, it really shows.
I thought for sure Malania was gonna tell Michael her secret when he mentioned what hurt him the most about his father abusing him was the fact that no one protected him. Even though Michael's a celebrity and Malania is just an ordinary person, they relate so much, and its beautiful.
Keep up the fantastic work! Can't wait for the next chapter! <3
:)
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2015 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it!!! I laughed out loud when Michael's first thought to this "serious" news is aliens... lol! I love your writing style. Chapter 1 and Im already sure this is going to be one of my favorites on the site.
To drop a bomb like that on him right before a show... geez. I'm glad Michael's being positive and hopeful about it.
Author's Response:
Hahaa, thanks for your comment. I love feed back, so thanks!
Can't you imagine that's where MJ's mind would go? Like, he couldn't grasp the concept of something happening within the realm of possibility but no problem imagining it could be something so far-fetched!
Thanks for the compliments on my writing style :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2015 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
This has easily become one of my favorite stories on here. I love the dialogue between Michael and Malania. Just spot on and in-character. This is excellent, and it's so different from anything I've ever read before! Please update soon! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much :) this is one of the loveliest compliments. I'm glad you're enjoying it so much!
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