Penname: FreedomisGreat [Contact] Real name: Kai
Member Since: Apr 12, 2018
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Hey, my name is Kai and I'm here to read some great stories! Maybe one Day I'll have the guts to upload something as well but until that day my goal is to write as many detailed reviews as I can. Because these great writers deserve them!
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Gender: Male
Age: 18-21
Real Name: Kai
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Summary:

Scarecrow watched the mystery girl in awe. Was this really Dorothy? No. It couldn’t be. She looked like her in some ways but not enough to convince him. She was a lovely sight but…she wasn’t his Dorothy. However, he couldn’t shake the pull he felt towards her. Had they met before? Who was this girl? And more importantly, why was she watching him in amazement as if she did know him but it had been years since they’d last crossed paths?

“Scarecrow,” she crooned his name with disbelief and bewilderment.

He quickly took a step back and widened his eyes in surprise. Maybe it was her after all. Just somewhat. . .different. “Dorothy?” he asked hopefully. Had she returned to him? Returned to Oz?

The girl slowly got on her feet without taking those hazel eyes off of him. She spoke as if she was lost in wonderment. “I’m not Dorothy. You don't know me."

That crushed him so badly he could not hide the despair on his face. Dorothy was never coming back to him. He lowered his head and let that first tear slide down his cheek. When the girl spoke again, Scarecrow bolted his eyes back up at her again and everything around him went still.

“My name is Beatrice. I’m her daughter.”

 

Disclaimer: All recognizable characters are property of their respective owners. No money is being made from this work of art and no copyright infringement is intended. So in other words, don't sue me! This has only been created for pure fun.

Alternate Ending: 9/18/15


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Adventure, Family, Fantasy, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60759 Read Count: 13335
[Report This] Published: Feb 26, 2015 Updated: Sep 18, 2015
Reviewer: FreedomisGreat Signed
Date: Apr 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey there!
I managed to make myself an account so I can finally write you a Review!
I was so amazed by this story I read it in two days, and I couldn't put it down despite not having much time at the moment. It made me so emotional and I was hooked from chapter 1 until the end.
A friend of mine recommended it to me and she knows her stuff! I watched The Wiz so I could enjoy the Fanfic, and I'm so so glad I did! The movie was amazing and your Sequel is nothing but a perfect successor, I really wish it could be an actual movie! I could picture every scene, fell in love with every character again and especially with Beatrice and Storm. There is so much creativity and the end (both of them!) made me tear up. I cried to my friends how perfect they were, not kidding :D
I will absolutely come back for many rereads, this is a Story that I will always treasure and remember!
Sending my biggest love your way DareToDream
-Love, FreedomIsGreat

Author's Response:

Hey! Your beautiful review made my heart swell. It feels good to know that my story has captivated you. And I really do appreciate you taking the time out to tell me how you feel. It means a lot. I appreciate my silent readers but I really enjoy knowing what ppl love about the story. Don't hesitate to read this fun adventure as many times as you like. And also feel free to check out my latest story which is called Set Me Free whenever you have some spare time. I look forward to getting more feedback from you. Thanks a million!

God Bless!

Summary:

 

 

"My world may be losing all sense, but everywhere I look, he's always there. I feel him, and he feels me, even in the deepest and darkest places of our souls. We share such an indescribable passion..."


Imagine living a life where you can't tell the difference between reality and fantasy. Where you feel your own body and spirit losing control and only feeling love, passion and lust. Where the man you are deeply in love with, the man that visits you and haunts you on dreams and incredible connections, doesn't even know about your existence in real life...

Until you realize he actually does.

Isabelle Mendes has a pretty normal (and boring) life working as a psychiatrist. Feeling trapped in her routine, and feeling like something is missing to her, but not knowing exactly why, she lives her life in company of her friends, her cousin Molly and her patients. But all of the sudden, she starts having incredibly lucid dreams about no other but the king of pop, Michael Jackson. These dreams seem to be more and more realistic with time, and every time she wakes up, it's like she never went to sleep. Feeling upset and frustrated, she tries her best to make these dreams stop. But what she doesn't know, is that she's not the only one having these dreams. What happens when over a completely unexpected situation, Michael and Isa meet each other?

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78104 Read Count: 4802
[Report This] Published: Nov 23, 2016 Updated: May 13, 2018
Reviewer: FreedomisGreat Signed
Date: May 16, 2018 Title: Chapter 23: XXIII: michael.

Oh my holy Macaroni
Now I have to tell you how happy and excited I was for this update!
I'm so glad I decided to check in this morning, the chapter was so perfect.

I really like how you gave Brooke this kind of opportunity for redemption so to say, because I always see these very...unkind comments about her in the fandom, which I can understand to some degree after what she did. I'm glad that you put her in a supportive, human position. But again, as I said that's what I love about your style, the realistic approach.

Epiphany sums Michael's decision up really well if you ask me, realizing that you made a mistake is complicated and it takes so much confidence to act on it.
Which only makes it harder now that Mike heard about Isa's decision. I swear to god I did not expect that she would give April a chance, even though I should have!

I'm so so so excited for what he will do now, if he will go to New York and see her or if this will crush his confidence. And more importantly what is Isa thinking right now? Is April even happy with how things are going? What do the others think about this whole situation?
I'll be here to read it for sure :D

I think we'll be both preoccupied with Netfilx tho, can't forget the 5 shows I'm binging atm
So my best wishes to you, and I'm glad that I could make you so happy with my last review by the way!
Sending lots of love!

-FreedomisGreat (Kai)

Reviewer: FreedomisGreat Signed
Date: May 02, 2018 Title: Chapter 22: XXII: isa.

My god I feel like I'm on a roller-coaster reading this amazing piece of literature.
I'm so sorry for only writing one now that I'm updated on all chapters! I wish I would've wrote something on every single one, but I was honestly too captivated to pause in between.
Anyway, I want to say that I am so intrigued by the idea of this story and how it got rolling, these shared dreams and the actual way how their meetings and interactions came to be... I absolutely love it!
I also love your attention to detail, the way you make everything come to life by giving spectacular characterization not only to Michael but also your own characters. I'm blown away with how believable and real the whole story feels to me.
Next thing, I particularly love how human Michael is. Every struggle and insecurity, his flaws and his perfections, I feel like you did an amazing job with how you portray him. (Even if I am the exact opposite of calm after this chapter but I'll get to that later)
I am in love with Isa, Molly, Susie....literally everyone here because the way all of them come to life with their banter and relationships, it's just so amazing. I can't stop saying amazing, sorry XD
Anyway! I don't know what to do with my life now that I am up to date. I am so damn curious with what Isa is going to do with Aprils confession and what the hell Michael is doing with Brooke again...
I am just really sad with all that's happening to these poor souls oh boy. I'll just keep hoping that things will get better. I don't know when but I'll just keep hoping XD
Take your time with the chapters and don't rush yourself, great art takes time and I will eagerly await when the time for the next chapter comes!
My best wishes, sending some love to you, Miss Miriel!
-FreedomisGreat (Kai)

Author's Response:

Oh... My... God.

First of all, Hello, there, Kai! Thank you a thousand times for taking the time to read the whole story from the start, plus, to leave such an amazing review. I have to say, I got so excited when I first read it that I literally woke up my boyfriend fangirling at 3 AM.

I felt relieved, also, because everything you're talking about is related to my goals when it comes to writing. My main goal was to portray Michael in the most realistic way possible, as a human being with flaws, with issues that he had to deal with and stuff that he had to fix about himself, just like any other person. I also wanted to keepin touch with details of all the characters and their lives, simply because every single one of them matters in the plot to me, and everyone's point of view needs to be portrayed in order for the story to develop more realistically, in my opinion. Every person matters, and every character is important, therefore, giving an insight through everyone's heads makes you feel like you can relate to them even more, you can get emotionally connected to them and it makes the reading experience 100 times better!

I'm also very glad that you're alright with me taking a long ass time updating the story, LMAO I can be very inconsistent sometimes, because if I don't have enough mental peace, and a song that inspires me enough, words just won't come out. And that really depends on multiple factors, so I can update within a few days to then just go without writing anything for more than a week. Thankfully, I'm back!

Again, Thank you so much. A new chapter has been posted and now, I will eagerly await for your thoughts on it!

Summary:

 

Blair Chambers yearns for a normal life. Unfortunately, her life has been anything but that since the death of her parents. Since then, Blair and her sister have been under the wings of a possessive devilish man known as Ethan Riley. He owns a billion dollar business called the Dream House where upper-class men can meet their dream girl in person. No man leaves there unsatisfied, but Blair just wants to leave altogether. And the feeling intensifies when she becomes involved with Michael, who is a breath of fresh air and shows her a new way of living. But there are two problems here. Michael has no clue about his woman's night job and Blair is a precious commodity to Ethan, who hates losing things that belong to him. What will happen once truths are revealed and Blair tries to leave the Dream House for good? Will she ever get set free?

 

(Loosely inspired by Michael Jackson's music video to Who Is It)

 

Banner done by the amazing Lorry!


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence
Trigger Warnings: Death, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 127944 Read Count: 2665
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2017 Updated: Sep 06, 2018
Reviewer: FreedomisGreat Signed
Date: May 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ahhhh I always get so excited for updates from you!
What a sweet chapter, Mrs. Jackson is such a lovely lady and I am so glad that they all like Blair so much and want to help protect her. I really liked the Story that Kathrine told Blair and Michael, it's sad that it could have actually happened a lot back then.
Blair talking to the girls while eating cookies was also such a cute image in my head, it would be so great for her to become a teacher should she ever get free from that Nightmare House.
And then Michael being an absolute sweetheart with his little hint! I was grinning like an idiot when I read that, he is so precious!
A sweet sweet chapter and I'll be excited for the next one as well!

Wishing you a great Day and sending some more Love :D
-FreedomisGreat

Author's Response:

You're so sweet. I love your reviews.

The Jackson clan are just what Blair needs in her life and Katherine's story was something she really needed to hear.

Blair seems like she would be good with kids if she ever became a teacher. Stacee and Yashi seem to like her.

Michael is definitely a charmer. Poor Blair can't get enough of him either. Much more to come soon

Happy Memorial Day! 

Reviewer: FreedomisGreat Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

OMG Hi!
I'm so excited oh boy! This chapter was so good and I was grinning the whole time, especially about the part with Janet and Blair growing so close!

I'm just so happy for Blair to have some real domestic family life for the first time in thirteen years, it can do wonders.
I really enjoy the church visits, they seem so very different from anything I experienced in church, I probably wouldn't mind having a visit at the Illuminated Kingdom :D

I got so nervous when there was someone at the door, I completely forgot about Randy after everything that happened with Dion and Blair running away. I'm worried on what's going to happen between Michael and Randy, I can't imagine a real fight breaking out, but since that Boy seems to be high, everything could happen.

I guess I'll just have to wait until I find out, but I'm more than patient!
As I said, a great chapter, I was so touched by Blairs new found happiness. I'll just hope it can last!

Sending some more love over!
-FreedomisGreat

Author's Response:

Hey there! Blair is so blessed. The Jackson family took her in without a second thought and they know exactly how to show love to others.

The church visits are new and very interesting to Blair too. I'm sorry that your past visits to church haven't been so exciting. Sometimes, you just have to seek out the right one. It's pretty awesome once you do though. 

Lol all my readers said they freaked out when someone knocked on the door. Blair's heart totally stopped working for a moment. Luckily, it was just Randy being stupid. Michael loves his brother, so just know whatever happens is for Randy's own good. 

Thank you for waiting patiently. There's much more to come soon! 

God Bless!

Reviewer: FreedomisGreat Signed
Date: May 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hey there!
I was so thrilled to see this update!
Poor Blair, I can't imagine how traumatizing this must be. She shouldn't have to feel responsible for what these beasts do with her life, I just hope that things will turn alright.
Michael is the biggest sweetheart ever and just the thought of him being so gentle and giving in this chapter makes me smile so hard. And I absolutely love Marlons reaction, because I, too, would want to find that Monster and beat him up.
I'm really curious what Mrs. Jackson will be able to do about it, hopefully she'll know what to do D:
A great chapter, can't wait to see what will be up next!

Sending Love your Way!
-FreedomisGreat

P.s Don't worry about the length of the chapters, it's perfect!

Author's Response:

Yes, I finally finished it! Blair is all over the place right now. She wants to hide out in Michael's arms, where she feels safe, all the while, she worries about getting him killed. She feels like her desire to be with Michael is what caused all this drama. But Michael is so loyal and it's not in his nature to abandon her. There must be a reason why Michael called his mother over. We'll find out soon enough.

Reviewer: FreedomisGreat Signed
Date: Apr 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OK hi again!
I am so deep into this Story it's not pretty anymore, wow.
I am so amazed by your way of story telling again, everything fits so well! I am so so hooked and I'm so excited for the new chapter because I have no idea if Blair will tell Michael what's going on or not D: I just know that he will ask questions! Guess I just have to wait and see, no pressure though, I'm patient :D
Also I wanted to say something about the religious theme, since usually it is not my cup of tea, being an atheist and all, but I am really enjoying it here! I feel like the way Michael is preaching his beliefs is so healthy and unproblematic, I really wish more people would practice their beliefs in this peaceful, no-pressure way. It's all about love after all. So yeah, that was just my little opinion on this part of the story :)
I'm curious where everything is headed and I'm totally going to start writing a review after every chapter, gotta keep the author motivated! :D
Hope you are having a great one!
-FreedomisGreat

Author's Response:

Yay! You'r all caught up. I'm thrilled you'v fallen in love with this story as well. I'm halfway done with the next chapter so it should be up soon. 

It means a lot that you can enjoy the story even while shaing a different belief. I'm honored! I believe all good stories should be done that way. 

Thank you again for the awesome support and I look forward to getting more comments from you as the story progresses. 

Take care and God Bless!

Reviewer: FreedomisGreat Signed
Date: Apr 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi again!
So I thought I would look into this story after you mentioned it and I feel like you actually got me hooked again!
I'm looking forward to what you have in store for Claudine and Blair, so I'm definitely going to keep reading.
I'm also growing really fond of your style and story building, so you can probably expect to see me a few times more around your works :D
Have a nice one!
-FreedomisGreat

Author's Response:

Welcome aboard! I'm so glad you decided to check it out. Poor Claudine & Blair have no idea what they've gotten in to. Can't wait for you to read how things turn out for them. I update this story pretty regularly so whenever you catch up, you shouldn't be waiting terribly long for an update.

Thanks again for the kind words! God Bless!

Summary:

AU/AR m/m erotica. 18+

 

Michael has a surprising eye on Sam and a suggestion for his New Year’s resolution.


Categories: Adult, Slash
Characters: Michael, Original Guy
General Warnings: Erotica, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2748 Read Count: 238
[Report This] Published: Dec 28, 2017 Updated: Dec 28, 2017
Reviewer: FreedomisGreat Signed
Date: Apr 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

First of: THANK YOU FOR PROVIDING FOR THE MALE COMMUNITY THAT BASICALLY LUSTS AFTER HIM TOO
secondly: A really really great scenario, kuddos for the idea and for your great writing!
-FreedomisGreat