Penname: Mjmoonwalkergirl [Contact] Real name: Emma
Member Since: Jan 25, 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I love me some MJ. I really appriciate what y'all do and you all have great writing abilities :D I am glad I can have a place to write and read wonderful MJ stories :D Much Love <3


 


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You choose by MJstories Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

First of all : This story's RATED : R .... but in my opinion RATED : R +++

 

I write storys about Michael songs. What happens in the song, the summary from the song, the text, that happens in my story.

Every story's just one chapter long. And YOU CHOOSE which song I'll take. Just write it in the review.

THESE CHAPTERS/STORIES ARE ALREADY UP : 

 

- IN THE CLOSET 

- GIRLFRIEND

- THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL

- SMOOTH CRIMINAL

- BREAK OF DAWN

- DIRTY DIANA

- REMEMBER THE TIME

- GIVE IN TO ME

- ROCK WITH YOU     

- JUST GOOD FRIENDS     

- SHE DRIVES ME WILD part 1

- SHE DRIVES ME WILD part 2

- WORKIN' DAY AND NIGHT

- DANGEROUS                  

- BAD

- BABY BE MINE   <--- NEW! 9.8. 12

 

WARNING : EACH CHAPTER/STORY INCLUDES STRONG SEXUAL CONTENTS

 


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42910 Read Count: 10282
[Report This] Published: Jul 25, 2011 Updated: Jun 07, 2018
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 GIRLFRIEND

I loved girlfriend :D so good ^_^ can't wait to read the next one :D



Author's Response:

HEeeey thank you... :D i'm so happy that you liked my story...

Have you a wish for the next story because nobody has a song for me :'(   ;DDDD

What to you wanna hear happen with Michael ? Which song ?

Thanxxxx soooo much for reviewing .... i cant write withozt your nice comments love you all :D

Summary:

Monica's world has taken a dive for the ocean. She can see it, feel it, taste it.

The rocky relationship she's endured with Andrew over the years appears to be coming to an end.

Her very best friend Michael is in her corner, as he always has been. Michael knows he has what it takes to fulfill her every desire; he knows he can touch her in places which Andrew never had. He deeply wanted to touch her heart and make her feel whole. He knew he could make her body scream and quiver under his sensitve touch.

Unfortunately for the two, Monica has been rather blind throughout their friendship.

Now seeing the true love of his life in pain, Michael is once more by her side. But the complications of the third party only seem to further blind Monica.....

 

WARNING: STRONG ADULT CONTENT. RATED R.

(SHORT STORY)


Categories: Romance, Suspense, Hurt/Comfort, Fantasy, Adult, Dangerous: 1991-1993
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8918 Read Count: 2570
[Report This] Published: Jul 30, 2011 Updated: Sep 01, 2011
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Peaceful Haven

Aww poor Michael xD He'll have his moment with Monica. I love this story, so funny and cute ^_^ 

 

Can't wait to read more <3 love it Hun :)



Author's Response:

lol thanks :)

Peace and Love!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Dial Tone

This story is great so far. I'm glad Monica has Andrew's lying self so in time, she'll know what a good man is supposed to do. In the words of

 R. Kelly: When a woman loves, she loves for real. 

 

Love your story hun <3



Author's Response:

Awww thanks :)

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Sweetheart

Aww sookie sookie nah. ^_^ Is it getting hot in here or is it just this story? I love your story ^_^ 

 

I can't wait to read more. :)

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Gems

Awwwwwwwwww snap! Some shit is bout to go down! 

 

Love it!!!! :) <3



Author's Response:

lol thanks! The next part will be up soon :)

Peace and Love!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Don't Be Afraid

Gurrl best stop trippin' she know for a fact that Michael is the man for her ^_^ 

 

Love the suspense !!!

 

<3 



Author's Response:

lol thanks :)

Peace and Love!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Hopeful Finality

Awww I knew she would choose Michael ~:)  great story hun

 

Love it ^_^ <3

Summary:

Camilla never understood how a sweet soul like his could shatter her world into pieces and put them back together in an instant.

I'm back to updating regualty x


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14946 Read Count: 3716
[Report This] Published: Aug 12, 2011 Updated: Mar 04, 2012
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The introduction

Damn. He just gonna play a sista like that? That's crazy xP

 

Love it Hun <3

Summary: Photobucket







Michael and Maila are young struggling parents. Michael works hard at two jobs and Maila stays at home and watches their two kids; one the youngest which they can't really afford. Debts begin to get higher, funds begin to get lower and almost anything else that can happen falls upon this couple. Soon they begin to fight for a home and the sanity of their family. When will they realize that things will get better if they just hold each other's hand?
Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Family, Song Fics, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5121 Read Count: 10607
[Report This] Published: Sep 27, 2011 Updated: Nov 19, 2012
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Didn't we almost have it all??

Love your story. ^_^ Did you get the title of the chapter from Whitney Houston's song? If you did, I love that song. I love anything Whitney :P
Anyway love the story, I'm excited to read more :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I love the song by Whitney and I love Whitney. The girl's got powerful vocals!!! Thanks so much and I love your story:)

Summary:

It's just a little story with the title's of all of Michael Jackson songs. I just felt that it would be fun and it was.

Enjoy and let me know what you think. Was it lame or cool? :)

http://userserve-ak.last.fm/serve/500/22087535/Michael+Jackson+michael.jpg

 


Categories: Adult, Slash, Song Fics
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1651 Read Count: 307
[Report This] Published: Oct 05, 2011 Updated: Oct 05, 2011
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One Unique Story

This story was cute, funny, and sexy. Also very creative :)

Love It

Author's Response:

Thanks!! <3 <3

Summary: With his marriage falling apart and his sex life going down the tubes, Michael Jackson trades in his 3 year old marriage to the loving, devoted Meliana Jackson for a passionate, steamy and thrilling affair with Tatiana Thumbtzen, the alluring and seducitve co-start of his latest short film "The Way You Make Me Feel". Torn between physical attraction for Tatiana and the strong love he's always had for Meliana; Michael must decide who he truley loves. What happens when Michael's secret life is exposed??? What happens when Tatiana plants seeds of wickedness?? What happens when lies, bitterness and hatred tears apart the love Michael & Meli once shared??? And what happens when a certain obstacle stands in the way of ever rekindeling that love??




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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Kidnapping, Physical Abuse, Rape
Series: No Ordinary Love
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44197 Read Count: 45785
[Report This] Published: Oct 19, 2011 Updated: Aug 23, 2013
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Everybody's somebody's fool

Daggone it!! I really thought Meli would tell Michael what's going on like fo real >_<!! 

This chapter was really emotional :'( I was like on the verge of tears cuz like Michael really wants to work things out and now Melina is the one closing down. They are like total opposite from the beginning :- but like I know she's going thru what she has to because she loves Michael but like he's begging her to tell him and she just can't... It's just so much to handle D':

Wonderful chapter dear <333 can't wait to read the next chapter :D

Much Love <3333^_^



Author's Response: Did I trick you?? ;) Don't worry, she going to pour her heart and soul out to Michael one day. But at least they're not so cold toward each other. I'm really glad you enjoy my story. Thanks for always reviewing!!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:Cheater

Aww Michael! o.o whyyyy??? Poor Meli, she seems like she is gonna be one of those girls who crys when she finds out about the affair not one who would be all mad and stuff and get a gun lol. Great start Hun ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I hated to make Michael a cheater but I wanted to try a different approach. Yes, Meli is not ghetto fabulous. She's very mild mannered. LoL! I made an update to Never. You should read it it's sort of intense. Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Love or lust???

Aww. I feel so sorry for Meli :( Its all fun and games until someone starts feeling something more than someone else. :/ gee wiz...

Love the story, keep up the good work

Author's Response: I feel so sorry for Meli too. It's funny because when I uploaded the first chapter I got sort of mad at Michael:/ Yep, that's how it happens. I'm uploading another chapter today!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Giving you the best that I've got

Awww poor baby. I just feel like giving her a hug. (after she gets out the shower of course xD LMAO)

Michael's startin to frustrate me cuz like she is trying so hard but he just won't let up (-_-) ....
Also so is Meli. She needs to say some. Michael is coming home late, ignoring her, brushing her off. I mean if it's bothering her, say some. Dang.
She has to have some kind of feeling that there's something going amiss here. They was naked in the shower and Michael didn't advance toward her.... Girl must be head over heels smh.


Anyhoo....Love it Hun ^_^

Author's Response: LOL!! This review has made my day. I love it when my readers get into my story! Michael is frustrating me too. When I posted the first chapter I was mad at him. But don't worry, we probably won't be upset much longer. Who can stay mad at that beautiful mad forever?? Anyway, Meli does need to speak up and say something. She may seem weak now but trust me, her strengths are going to come later on in the story. As for her suspecting something, you'll see. I might post another chapter tonight. Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Scandalous

Oh. My. Goodness! O_O no. She did-nt!!!! Wowowowow! Mane, Michael is gonna get it.... Meli is gonna be sooooooooo betrayed........ Hell, Michael will feel betrayed but not as much as Meli. Yo, this is very very scandalousssss!!! I'm on the edge of my seat for more ^_^ eeeek

Author's Response: Oh yes she did!!!! If I were Meli I would feel very much betrayed. Michael has definitely got himself caught up. I will post more chapters this weekend maybe today. I just love your reviews!! Thanks so much!!