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I love me some MJ. I really appriciate what y'all do and you all have great writing abilities :D I am glad I can have a place to write and read wonderful MJ stories :D Much Love <3
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2 years ago Michael and Alica were happily married newly-weds. Now they can't stand each other. It's always he said, she said with them. Alica suggest the go see a marriage counselor. Michael reluctantly agrees to go with her. Join them through their sessions and at home as they try to put their hearts on the line and make things right between them.
Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Song Fics, Lyrics, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14827 Read Count: 94472
Date: Jul 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Holiday
Ooo Virgin Islands <3 sounds like a treat. Also swim suit shopping xP
Wow I like Mrs. Harrison :D She's cool. I wonder if they can get along on their holiday cuz it would suck if something went wrong.
Can't wait.
Author's Response: I'm working on it now! Mrs. Harrison is a very cool marriage counselor. And I would be wonderful to go to the virgin islands. Thanks for the review!
Date: Jul 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:The Story of us.
I understand, school starts back up in a couple weeks for me. :-/ I have enjoyed reading the stories on here. Cuz usually once school starts, I don't get to read on here as often. And I made a new friend. We're friends right? It's okay if we're not xF. Anyway tho, still love your story.
Author's Response: Yeah were friends :) I've really enjoyed you reading my stories and actually liking them. Your comments are always so sweet. It's really made me fell good about my writing. Thanks for all the wonderful reviews! The net chapter has been posted!
Date: Jul 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: TLC for a PYT
Awww she's ticklish :D when I read this chapter I thought of the song 'Where Almost There' by the Jacksons... I think. But love your story. I'm so glad you update fast cuz I am in love with your story :P
Author's Response: I'm going to try and upload another story. I'm about to go back to school so I'm trying to make as many updates as I can. I've been on the website everyday all summer almost. LOL. And yes they're almost there! I'm so glad you love it:) Thanks for the review!!
Date: Jul 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Because I care about you
Aww so sweet.... except the part where she spills burning hot tea on herself. Ouch! X[ hehe...
Loved the update *_* can't wait fer more
Author's Response: The I'm working on the next chapter now. It should be posted soon. Thanks for the review!!!
Date: Jul 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Progress
I smell even BETTER progress. :P I see that Moonwalk has inspired you :). I loved the pillow fight. Too cute (•^_^•)
Lol Michael "Wasn't better than sex" xD dang Michael you funny. Love your story though, they are too adorable.
Cain't wait for next part :D
Author's Response: Yep they're getting better. Moonwalk has inspired me a lot. I really enjoyed it :) I'm really surprised you actually find it funny because I'm not a funny person at all! Thanks for the review.
Date: Jul 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Clueless no more
I knew she would say yes! Michael has that affect on people :P great update.
Author's Response: I know right! There's no saying no to Michael! The next chapter has already been posted. Thanks for the review!!
Date: Aug 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: This will be an everlasting love
Awww beautiful story hun :D Hate to see it end but I loved that it was such a great story ^_^ I grew so attached to Michael and Alica :) they were funny and lovable yet stubborn but cute :P
Loooooooooooooooooved It!!!!!!! D:
Author's Response: Aww thanks. That really means a lot to me:) I'm really sad the story ended too:( I was so attached to Michael and Alica. They where a super cute couple:) And I will definatly learn in school. You'll enjoy you're 8th grade year:) Enjoy it now because next year you'll be right back where you started from!! LOL!! Thanks for all the beautiful reviews!!!
Date: Aug 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Arrival day
Haha, Michael's like "Pardon?" I love it when he says that.
Aww the babies are born ^_^ two girls and a boy. Lol Michael and his new son are gonna be outnumbered... But not by much ~:P
Love it <3
Oh and have fun at school. Learn stuff :P. I have one more year until I go to high school. I'm happy to go back to school.
Date: Jul 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: It's obvious
That'd be awesome if she was pregnant! Lol she was like "next time it happens, someones getting stabbed." that was funny.
Great update. <3
Author's Response: Just wait and see!! Since I'm not really funny I get most of my humor for comedy shows I've watched. But you never know. Alica just might do it!! Another chapter has been posted!! Thanks for the review!!
Date: Jul 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:The Story of us.
Woah, your read count is 1958 ^_^ kool beans
Author's Response: Wow! That's Michael's birth year! It also happens to my dad's too. Cool! That was one of the best years ever!!
Date: Jul 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Wanna be staritn something
Ooh yay errthang is all nice and peachy. Lol that was funny when Alica and Tatiana was acting all cold to each other. Somebody is jealous ^_^ . Well it ain't gonna bother Alica no how cuz Michael and her done started on a new page, and I KNOW he don't want to mess that up.
:) Loved the chapter <3
Date: Jul 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: What I hate about you
It was funny cuz when I finished my last review a few minutes ago then come back, you got chapter 4 up ^_^
Anywho, Alicia wasn't listening cuz Mrs. Harrison said what you "dont like" not "HATE" ;P Hate has more of a passion. Hmmm hate is such a powerful word. Anyway loved the update :)
Author's Response: LOL! Yes Alica is doing that on purpose. Chapter 5 will be up in a few minuets. I'm updating while your writing.
Date: Jul 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Remembering the time
I have a feeling this one's gonna be a good one :D Pshh it already is. Love it :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. *Blush* I feel your the only person who appreciates my work. Thanks again!!
Date: Jul 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Things I do for you
Oh so now he want her help >:P they are funny. I hope she says yes. Maybe this could make good bonding time.
Great update. :)
Date: Jul 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Silly of me
Ooh why Michael bein so cold to her, gee wiz. She was just tryna be nice. Talkin bout he ain't in the mood for Mexican... D:<
Lol great update :)
Author's Response: Lol that made my day! Yeah Michael can be jerk sometimes with her. Thanks for the review
Author's Response: Lol that made my day! Yeah Michael can be jerk sometimes with her. Thanks for the review
Author's Response: Lol that made my day! Yeah Michael can be jerk sometimes with her. Thanks for the review