Penname: Mjmoonwalkergirl [Contact] Real name: Emma
Member Since: Jan 25, 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I love me some MJ. I really appriciate what y'all do and you all have great writing abilities :D I am glad I can have a place to write and read wonderful MJ stories :D Much Love <3


 


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Reviews by Mjmoonwalkergirl
Summary:

13 year old Michael going through puberty its based in todays time


Categories: Adult, Humor
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6418 Read Count: 1943
[Report This] Published: Jun 19, 2011 Updated: Oct 05, 2011
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love this story. It totally goes with what an adolescent boy goes thru life and "that change" but forreal somebodies azz is gonna get whipped. Arjay's grammy is gonna get a switch from the biggest tree xD LOL!

Love it hun, cain't wait to read more

Author's Response:

Thank u =)

730 Days by MichaelManiac Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Just a poem marking Michael's 2 year anniversary.
Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166 Read Count: 1101
[Report This] Published: Jun 25, 2011 Updated: Jun 25, 2011
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: 730 days

This is so beautiful and I loved the 19,345 days part . So symbolic. This made me shed a tear on the beauty. Thank you so much for sharing. :')

Summary:

What happens when Michael goes to a massage center? What you expect will happen


Categories: Adult
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1052 Read Count: 625
[Report This] Published: Jul 05, 2011 Updated: Jul 05, 2011
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was hot! Great story :)

Summary: Gotta put your heart on the line; if you wanna make it right.........................................


2 years ago Michael and Alica were happily married newly-weds. Now they can't stand each other. It's always he said, she said with them. Alica suggest the go see a marriage counselor. Michael reluctantly agrees to go with her. Join them through their sessions and at home as they try to put their hearts on the line and make things right between them.
Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Song Fics, Lyrics, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14827 Read Count: 94441
[Report This] Published: Jul 18, 2011 Updated: Aug 09, 2011
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Progress

I smell even BETTER progress. :P I see that Moonwalk has inspired you :). I loved the pillow fight. Too cute (•^_^•)

Lol Michael "Wasn't better than sex" xD dang Michael you funny. Love your story though, they are too adorable. 

 

Cain't wait for next part :D  




Author's Response: Yep they're getting better. Moonwalk has inspired me a lot. I really enjoyed it :) I'm really surprised you actually find it funny because I'm not a funny person at all! Thanks for the review.

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Date: Jul 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: You're a jerk. I know!!

Lol Michael flashed her. I give her respect though. Anybody who can resist Michael when he come out the shower has mad will power xD

 

Loved the update



Author's Response: Lol! I know right! Michael is simply irresistible. If I were Alica I would have been all over him. Problems or not! Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Because I care about you

Aww so sweet.... except the part where she spills burning hot tea on herself. Ouch!  X[ hehe...

Loved the update *_* can't wait fer more



Author's Response: The I'm working on the next chapter now. It should be posted soon. Thanks for the review!!!

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Date: Jul 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: TLC for a PYT

Awww she's ticklish :D  when I read this chapter I thought of the song 'Where Almost There' by the Jacksons... I think. But love your story. I'm so glad you update fast cuz I am in love with your story :P



Author's Response: I'm going to try and upload another story. I'm about to go back to school so I'm trying to make as many updates as I can. I've been on the website everyday all summer almost. LOL. And yes they're almost there! I'm so glad you love it:) Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:The Story of us.

I understand, school starts back up in a couple weeks for me. :-/ I have enjoyed reading the stories on here. Cuz usually once school starts, I don't get to read on here as often. And I made a new friend. We're friends right? It's okay if we're not xF. Anyway tho, still love your story. 



Author's Response: Yeah were friends :) I've really enjoyed you reading my stories and actually liking them. Your comments are always so sweet. It's really made me fell good about my writing. Thanks for all the wonderful reviews! The net chapter has been posted!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Holiday

Ooo Virgin Islands <3 sounds like a treat. Also swim suit shopping xP

 Wow I like Mrs. Harrison :D She's cool. I wonder if they can get along on their holiday cuz it would suck if something went wrong. 

Can't wait. 




Author's Response: I'm working on it now! Mrs. Harrison is a very cool marriage counselor. And I would be wonderful to go to the virgin islands. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Getting back to I love you

Yay we're friends!! =D I don't have many friends. 

Can't wait to see what Michael has planned. Whatever it is, it will be superb. :D

 

Superb was my word of the day =D



Author's Response: I don't have man friends either. :( It's good to make a new one! I love your words of the day! Thanks for the review!

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Date: Jul 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Crusin for a brusin

POW! Right in the kisser!  Dang he knocked her off. LoL. Jet skis sound fun but I'm afraid I'll lose control of one and drown. D:

 

Loved the update :)



Author's Response: LOL!! Me too. I would never go jet skiing. Next chapter's been posted and it's sorta long. Thanks for the review!!

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Date: Aug 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28:Baby Blues

Aww poor Alica. I bet she looked great ^_^. 

 

Oh and sorry I hadn't been reviewing. Ive been getting stuff ready for school and been real busy with church stuff but I will definitely read and review for the other chapters ^_^  

 

Love the story <3



Author's Response: It's okay:) I understand. School started for me last Monday. Luckily I don't have a lot of homework in high school so I might be able to update twice a week. Thanks for the review!!

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Date: Aug 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Tell me something good

Awe yay shes pregnant (^L^) that woulda been funny if she wasn't pregnant and she fainted because of the fight and just wanted some cheesecake afterwards. xD but.....not in this case LOL!

 

Love the chapter <3

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: The Jacksons: A family dynsty

TRIPLETS!!!!!! *faints*(x_x)

 

Hehe wow wow wow<--- three wows for three babies ;) Congrats to Alica and Michael. 



Author's Response: Yep, they've got their hands full! 2 new chapters have been uploaded!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Lady In My Life

Yay Alica!!! When it comes to Michael you got to fight off them Dirty Dianas and Billie Jeans (; 

Loved the chapter <3