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Bio:
I am a fan of Michael Jackson, and I also like to write stories about him as well. Plus, I also like the TV show Full House, as Stephanie Tanner is one of my favorite characters on it; Jodie Sweetin did an awesome job bringing her to life on the show as well. Another show I like is Lizzie McGuire, as it really inspires me to write, too. :)
Also, when it comes to my stories, please leave nice feedback. After all, nice reviews and feedback are what help me be inspired to write more. :)
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I had caught several fish when it started to rain. "Shoot..." I thought to myself. I started so turn back around, but the current was too strong. I panicked a little. The wind grew stronger and kept pulling the boat. I started to feel rain droplets on my skin. I looked around to see if there was any land near by. Sadly, the was none. "Okay," I tried to calm myself, "Just calm down. You're awesome. You can find a way out of this." I looked for anything to help me: A life boat, Life jackets, the fish, anything. Then I remembered the Walkie Talkie I had in my case. I ran over to the case and took out the Walkie Talkie and as I was about to contact my two friends, I heard something flop on to the deck.
Categories: Adventure, Fantasy
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5053 Read Count: 9993
Date: Jan 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Ch. 4: Close Calls and Terrible Research.
Neat so far. :) And I can imagine Michael as a merman (sort of like the 1989 Disney film The Little Mermaid, but different). And I can see Michael using his voice to charm Alex, too (which would be kind of like what Ariel originally planned to do to Eric with her beautiful voice before Ursula, the Sea Witch, came along). Also, unlike Ariel in The Little Mermaid, it seems that Michael is able to change himself into a merman and back to human at will, which is something I find to be awesome.. :)
Keep up your super-neat, very intriguing and phenomenally inspiring writing! :)
Author's Response:
Actually the Merman form that Michael has is the type of mermaid from the 1989 Disney film. Also, Alex and Mike are just friends, though Maddy is starting to ship those two like FedEx XD
Thanks so much from the both of us! :D
Date: Jan 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prolouge
Neat start... :) I like it. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. :)
Date: Jun 20, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Surprise Surprise
This is really great so far, as well as very well-written and awesome, too. :)
Plus, I would definitely go for Alex being Michael’s Ariel any day — well, if this was kind of like the 1989 Disney film, but different. Of course, it’s a good thing that the villainess Ursula the Sea Witch is fictional, being a part of The Little Mermaid, because otherwise, she would cook up a way to do to Michael what she did to Ariel before he had a chance to use his voice to charm Alex. And for Michael, Alex, Maddy and Blue, that would definitely be a problem right there…
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
(This is how I imagine Michael to look in the story, of course...)
"People only see scars, they can't see all the good things inside a person."
That's exactly it, they can't. All they see is scars and blood.
Fifteen year old Hayley Williams will be starting her first new year as a sophmore at McBriur High in Franklin, Washington. The smallest town in Northen Washington.
Parents dead, no family members in contact so she relies on a family friend.moving state to state, school to another different school, private or public every year for most of her life. Hayley always had one thing in common with each every school: Bullying.
No friends, nothing.
At McBriur, Hayley meets her first friend ever. A girl just like her. Paris. Both girls become great friends, and begin to write songs, then a band.
But Hayley fears her depression will soon haunt her again, and so will the torment she has been encountering for more than a decade. And by whom you may ask?
The most adored, respected, popular and seduced football player, Michael Jackson. Accompanied by his girlfriend Ola Ray and his gang. Who knows for how long she has to face this, or will she just have to cut her way out..
He's the whole reason I want to be dead...and alive.
Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Anorexia, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Rape, Self-Harm, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4820 Read Count: 834
Date: Jul 12, 2015 Title: Chapter 5: || Chapter Four: Colorful Evening ||
Wow... This chapter is really neat, as well as very well-written, too. I like it. :)
(Thank goodness this is fanfiction and that Michael would've never done something that cruel as a teenager, because from what I know about him, I am sure he was quite nice personality-wise.)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing... :)
Date: Jul 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: || Chapter Three: Tumblr ||
Neat so far... :) I like it. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too.
(This is how I imagine Hayley to look in the story, of course...)
Keep up your super-neat, very beautiful and phenomenally creative writing... :)
After escaping from the abusive hands of her husband, Julie starts a new life in the suburbs of her town and meets a mysterious man who usually frequents the woods, where there are strange events going on.
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Categories: Romance, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Adult, Mystery, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4544 Read Count: 490
Date: Jan 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Wow. That took a lot of courage for her to do what she did and head out of there - and find a better life, hopefully. :)
I can also see her thinking to herself this quote from the 1994 film Forrest Gump (which is a really good movie, too): “Dear God, make me a bird, so I can fly far, far, far away from here.”
Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
Date: Jan 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Wow. Good for Julie that Michael was right there looking out for her, and that before she left, George was on the ground, where he deserved to be, too. Served George right - having that old mentality of what a woman is supposed to be (meaning in the kitchen and always obeying her husband, and nothing else). However, what George doesn't realize or understand is that women have come a long way in history - since Bible times, in fact.
Even Jesus Himself remarked to his friend Lazarus's sister Martha in the New Testament from the Bible that her sibling Mary had chosen one thing, and that was to listen to Him.
Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)
Date: Jun 28, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Neat so far... :) I wonder if she will tell Michael about her vow to never trust men, as well as the dead deers in the forest, too...
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing! :)
In a distant utopian future there exists a fairytale about the King of POPulations, a true king, who lived for all time. The tale is a warning of man's destructive power in the absence of love.
Categories: Family, Fantasy, One Shot
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2080 Read Count: 789
Date: Jan 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: VOX POPULI VOX DEI
Very neat! I like it. Very inspiring as well. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! So very glad u liked it. :)
Also, for the other reviewers, sorry the site screwed up when I responded...
Zeriaon:
Thank you so much for saying that. I hope it's true. And I'm glad u enjoyed it. :) ...The delusional part of me really hopes that he will indeed be remembered this way.
JustPassinThru:
Wow, thanks! Honestly, when I first got the idea, it was going to be only the snippet in the middle with the mother and son. I had wanted that to be longer actually, but it didn't turn out that way. I don't know how I would extend this, the point of it is probably worn out by the time u read to the end IMO, but I certainly welcome ideas. Like I said, I thought it would have ended up longer also. Thanks again! :)
Michael Jackson is world-known superstar.
Everybody wants to be in his place.
Surrounded by fame and money.
But nobody sees the dark side of it.
Michael has a sad, lonely life.
But it takes a complete turn when he meets her.
Cara Delevingne is a beautiful young girl.
Despite her painful life, she finds a way to keep living.
Helpless, hopeless.
That is until she meets him.
A love story filled with pain, passion, lust and betrayal.
Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!, Lyrics
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Attempted Suicide, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Self-Harm, Sexual Abuse, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1642 Read Count: 1970
Date: Feb 01, 2014 Title: Behind The Mask
Neat so far. :) I like it. And I hope that Michael will tell her that he knows what being picked on and bullied is like for him. I can see Cara being a little surprised, but at the same time, also a tiny bit pleased that he can relate to that, too.
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing! :)
Date: Feb 01, 2014 Title: Behind The Mask
I feel so bad for Cara, as I understand what being bullied was like for me in school. Thankfully, unlike Cara and so many other people I've heard about who use cutting themselves as a way to try to escape the pain, I chose writing as an outlet and as a solace (and I still do).
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I decided to write about this topic because I went through the same thing. Writing helps a lot when it come to this topic..
Date: Jun 25, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2. Mad World
Oh, wow…! Very awesome so far, as well as very well-written, too. I like it. :)
Plus, I hope that Cara’s uncle Fred will get the punishment he deserves, such as prison. If he goes there, he will learn how Cara must have felt when the prison inmates hear about what he tried to do to her, and would probably call out things like “Give him to us!”, for it is said that people like child abusers, pedophiles and child molesters are not very popular in prison.
Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing! :)
Date: Jan 27, 2014 Title: Behind The Mask
Neat so far. :) I like it. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too.
And I hope that Cara will be able to open up to Michael about her insecurities and her being picked on, as well as her habit of cutting herself (which I hope she gets some help for, since self-harm isn't a good thing at all and is actually a problem rather than a solution). And I hope Michael will suggest that she move into a different school where she will be more accepted, as well as adopt the habit of writing things down on paper (as writing is said to be a healthy habit). Plus, I hope she gets to meet some of Michael's friends, such as Elizabeth Taylor, Emmanuel Lewis, Brooke Shields and Macaulay Culkin as well; after all, they stuck by Michael's side in his darkest hours and defended him as well. In my view, those are good qualities of a great friend. :)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally inspiring writing! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: Jan 31, 2014 Title: Behind The Mask
Neat so far... :) I like it. And I hope that Cara will tell Michael about her being bullied and picked on, and that Michael will reply that he knows what that feels like, too.
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: Feb 04, 2014 Title: Behind The Mask
This chapter is really awesome. :) I'm glad Cara asked Michael to promise that he will not cut himself, so that she won't do the same thing either.
Also, I agree with Michael when he said that God gives the hardest battles to His strongest angels, too. Every one of us fights a hard battle every day here on Earth, whether it's against a bully (who fights a battle that's not at all easier on the inside with themselves) or against an addiction of sorts.
And I also hope that Cara will get to meet some of Michael's famous friends, that she can share her story with them, and that they can relate to her in some way, too.
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your reviews. They are really appreciated