Penname: Evening Star [Contact] Real name: Dani
Member Since: Aug 30, 2012
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Age: 21+
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Summary:

These are short stories of Michael and his steamy sexcapades with his lady....and YOU could be his lucky lady!

 

Participate and if you WIN, I'll write a short story about you ;)

 

I ENCOURAGE ALL MY SECRET READERS TO GIVE THIS A TRY!!!!!!

 

After a certain amount of time has passed, I will give each reviewer from my LAST story a number. Each winner will be RANDOMLY chosen using a RANDOM NUMBER GENERATOR that can be found online.

 

Read chapter one and see details!!!!

 

WARNING: Strong sexual content and language. Very Mature Subject Matter.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, HIStory: 1995-1999, Invincible: 2000-2003, This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19640 Read Count: 4816
[Report This] Published: Jul 23, 2013 Updated: Apr 13, 2014
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Jul 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Want to win a short story written about yourself?

OMg *FANS MYSELF* i loove this story!!!!!!!!


 my name is Danielle AKA Kitten:D



  • 28

  • olive color

  • black with blond streaks in my hair

  • eh, skinny but not to skinny

  • i have a very out going sassy kind of additude

  • dangerous era

  • I have dark green eyes and pouty lips

  • Well lets see here i have my lower lip peirced in the middle a couple of ear peirceings my hips peirced and i am a bartender:-

Summary:


Categories: Adult, Horror, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Death, Emotional Abuse, Rape, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22622 Read Count: 3688
[Report This] Published: Aug 30, 2013 Updated: Apr 27, 2014
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The End of The Beginning

Ok I cant be a silent reader anymore this story is very goood and very creative and i looove it. 

I wish i could write stories like this i have always wanted to try to write something along the lines of the Show Dexter ( one of my all time favorite shows btw) but im not that creative

 

Cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! Believe it or not I was going to make this like Dexter but wanted him to kill innocent people instead. I'm actually looking for a co author for another horror  story if you're interested.  if not I understand lol. And let me tell you, this is more insanity than creativity. xD Its just wrote because I watched The Conjuring two months ago and I'm still terrified. Anyways thanks so much for reviewing it makes me want to update even more!

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: You're Mine

Awsome updates and i looove spiders and i like black widow spiders are cool looking please continue!

And about me liking spiders i just have one comment. in the words of sheldon copper from the big bang theory I'm not crazy my mother had me tested lol

Author's Response:

Thanks love! Yeah, I hate spiders but I am writing a story about murder so..... Lol thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2013 Title: Wicked Widdower

(Lol looove the idea. And I'm in a goofy mood for some reason) so.. michael i was wondering *gets nervous* do you have another jar of black widow spiders i can have i loove spiders

Author's Response:

I only use those if necessary, don't make me..... I wouldn't want such a pretty little face like yours to have to be hurt. But trust me, knowing you like spiders would only make me not want to use them.

 

~Widdower.

 

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The End of The Beginning

hmmm *looks at you amuzed* well Mr. Widdower that is just to bad and honestly there is not much i am scared of but i do believe that everyone is scared of something and im sure i am scared of something but i just havent found out what it is. but i do admit i find Porclin Dolls disturbing, not scared of tthem just disturbing..



Author's Response:

Well that's nice. Not everyone has a fear. I myself am not afraid of anything..... 

Summary: Just a stone's throw away from London lies the manor house of the illustrious Phantomhive earldom and its young master, Michael Phantomhive. On the night of Michael Phantomhive's tenth birthday, a fire engulfed his manor. The boy was missing for 19 years before returning with a mysterious black clad butler, Annaliese Michaelis. To others, it seems that the butler is simply the best at her craft, from anticipating her young master's needs to carrying them out to the best of her abilities. Little do they know, the servant is actually a demon that had entered into a contract with Michael, promising the man to help him achieve revenge on the arsonists in exchange for his soul. Annaliese Michaelis, an exceptionally loyal butler, is ever at Michael's side, ready to carry out her young master's wishes, and serving as a butler for the time being. As the Queen's guard dog and standing at the top of the British underworld, the reckless Michael must face many difficulties along the way. Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

Categories: Horror, Suspense, Adult
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Death
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5206 Read Count: 268
[Report This] Published: Sep 03, 2013 Updated: Nov 27, 2013
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Author's Note

Ok you have my attention and this sounds very very interesting i want to read it



Author's Response: Really?? This is great!!

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Author's Note

Nice chapter can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Great!! I love it that you enjoyed the story :) thanks...i'll update the new chapter tomorrow

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 08, 2013 Title: Kuroshitsuji (Black Butler)

Omg this chapter is almost like dejavu for me haha me and a group of friends use to play dungeons. and dragon's and her character loved playing twisted games she made me hate porclin dolls lol amazing chapter btw

Author's Response: haha LOL that's funny there, but i'm so happy you love it >-<

Summary:

Hi, I'm WWE Diva AJ Lee.

And I'm best friends with the King of Pop, Michael Jackson. :)

Michael and I have been best friends for years, ever since his time with the Jacksons.

And we love each other dearly, but Michael doesn't know how I feel.

I've been in love with Michael ever since we met, and it's never changed since then.

I haven't told him because I didn't want to ruin our friendship.

And it's worse now.

He's getting married.

To the daughter of Elvis Presley, Lisa Marie Presley.

I know I don't know her much, but I know that she's trouble.

How can I tell Michael how much I love him now?

Thanks to everyone who reads this story. I hope you all love the new banner.


Categories: 1993-1994, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Song Fics, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Michael Jackson and AJ Lee Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39750 Read Count: 8954
[Report This] Published: Nov 06, 2013 Updated: Apr 21, 2016
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Nov 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Characters

Awsome chapter girl and i was so happy when i saw this cuz oddly enough AJ is my fav wwe diva !!!!

Author's Response:

Ooh, she's my fave too!!! :D

The Afterlife by MJsChick Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Ever felt a cold chill run down your back? Felt like someone was watching you? Maybe had a premonition that something was wrong and you couldn't figure out why? You're just imagining things, right? Well......what if you aren't? What if there really is a different plane of existence out there? Ghosts? Spirits? Whatever it is, what do you do if one of these.....beings....takes an interest in you?


BTW, I was not able to edit the character or warning selections when I began this story. Please ignore those as they really don't describe what will be contained in the story. Make sure to check out some of my older stories. Feedback is appreciated on everything and I always try to answer!


Categories: Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45339 Read Count: 3654
[Report This] Published: Dec 20, 2013 Updated: Jun 13, 2014
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Dec 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Hey I just found this story and I love it. I do believe in reincarnation and that energy is around us and other things too. And I believe in spirits too. Plus I'm a Wiccan. Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reading. I could always use the prospective of someone who has more experience than I do. If you see something wrong, point it out! I love constructive criticism!

The Accused by SkyWriter Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 270]
Summary:

 

award winner

The centre of Michael's world crumples when Diane Hargrove discovers that her four year old child has been molested. Exhausted from the Bad Tour and the emotional highs and lows of dealing with his favourite little girl's complicated medical history, Michael finds everyone pointing the finger at him; accusing him of the unthinkable. With the weight of the world upon his shoulders, he struggles through grief and depression and the stress of being the someone that the world perceives him to be.

Scared of being alone, Michael enlists the company of number one fan, Malania Nakamura, who he feels like could just be the only other person on earth who understands his wounded heart. 

What will the future hold for Michael's freedom and for Malania's own troubled state of mind?


Categories: Award Winning, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Anorexia, Attempted Suicide, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Rape, Self-Harm, Sexual Abuse, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 336374 Read Count: 165044
[Report This] Published: Jan 31, 2015 Updated: May 12, 2020
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 18, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow I just finally got caught up with the chapters on this story and it is a good story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. This story really pulls at your heart strings I'm telling ya Awsome job! 

 

Summary:

 

Through a series of very unfortunate events 27 year old artist Michael Jackson gets tapped to be the Angel Of Death, The Grim Reaper if you will.  He's betrayed by some one he loves and his soul gets thrown into a job no one could ever be prepared for.  Decades go by and he's called to collect a soul and there he meets the woman that will save him.  This is the journey from all consuming darkness into all encompassing light.  Travel with us if you dare.

 

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Humor, Sci Fi, Supernatural, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Death, Neglect
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29553 Read Count: 1756
[Report This] Published: Sep 08, 2015 Updated: Nov 30, 2015
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 12, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Human

I really do like this story  I love stories like this I can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thank you so so much. I hope you stick around to see it all unfold. So much more to come!! <333