Penname: DaizyfreeMJJ [Contact] Real name: Rieff
Member Since: Aug 26, 2012
Membership status: Member
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Age: 12-15
Gender: Gender Non-Conforming
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Summary: Past Featured Story
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It's been almost a year since Jessie and Michael's two-year relationship fell apart, and since she walked out of his life. Yet after Michael publicly releases new songs from his Invincible album, blatantly trashing her for thier break-up, she finds herself back at the one place she fled in tears, and back to the one man who broke her heart.

Michael still loves Jessie, wants her back, and will do anything in his power to bring her back home to Neverland. But will thier love be enough? To last through anything?

Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 143 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 848855 Read Count: 395259
[Report This] Published: Aug 31, 2010 Updated: Oct 01, 2012
Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed
Date: Dec 31, 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It's December 31st, 2021 and here I am..... revisiting a CLASSIC

Summary:

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For no mere woman can resist the beauty of the thriller...

Ola Ray once said that she fell in love with him during the making of "Thriller." That she wishes now that she had told him so. That their relationship was close and intimate, but never romantic.

This is my version of a what-if, if MAYBE things had gone a little differently. If she had the courage to tell him how she felt. 


Categories: Romance, Adult, Angst, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24087 Read Count: 10996
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2011 Updated: Dec 22, 2013
Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: And Cut (Part II)

Omg, this is SOOO GOOD! OH MY GOODNESS, this is amazing, THANK GOD YOU'RE NOT ENDING IT, I was afraid... God, this is soo great to see, its just making my heart flutter the mire and more I read on, I cannot wait for more, another one of my absolute favorite stories.

Author's Response:

Oh, bless you, dear, thank you so much for your kind words! I knew if I didn't make it clear it wasn't gonna end people would get confused LOL no worries I have certain things planned!! Thanks so much again!

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Shades

Your writing is like poetry. It has this sense of imagery that you crate, because nothing is straight forward and to the point with you. I love it. And when I saw you introduce the first line of that song, I went ballistic;

THAT. IS. MY. SHIT. And I immedeately began singing along. :)

Author's Response:

You like that song too??? This could be the start of a beautiful friendship lol

I giggled at your review, it's funny and sweet at the same time. I'm so glad you like my writing style, it's comments like these that really touch and motivate me. :)))) thank you so so much!

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: And Cut (Part II)

Omg, this is SOOO GOOD! OH MY GOODNESS, this is amazing, THANK GOD YOU'RE NOT ENDING IT, I was afraid... God, this is soo great to see, its just making my heart flutter the mire and more I read on, I cannot wait for more, another one of my absolute favorite stories.

Summary:

Michael goes to Las Vegas also known as Sin City with his family to celebrate the release of his new album THRILLER. But the quiet night that he had in mind takes a turn when he meets Schuyler. She becomes the woman who changes his life. Michael wants more of her but the problems start when she walks out of his life and Michael has to go out of his way to find her. He becomes focused on showing her that he is the man that she has been searching for.

Will Michael get Schuyler? Or is he wasting his time with a woman who never loved him?

Join Michael as he tells you his story in his own words of the thriller night that changed his life and the woman that taught him how to love....

***OVER 200 REVIEWS. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR SUPPORT AND LOVE!

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** "A THRILLER NIGHT IN LAS VEGAS" IS ONLY BEING POSTED BY ME ON MJFICTION IF YOU SEE THIS STORY ANYWHERE ELSE, IS NOT ME THEN IT HAS BEEN STOLEN. THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT!!


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193321 Read Count: 40403
[Report This] Published: Jan 19, 2012 Updated: May 26, 2014
Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Schuyler's Sacrifice / Michael's Fear....

Nuhh... NOOOOO!
SHE ISNT REAAAADYYYYY! NOOOOOOO! DONT FUCKING DO IT, DONT YOU DARE! NOOOOO SHE ISNT READAAAAAAAAAY! I LIKE HAPPY ENDINGS, BITCH I WISH THE FUCK YOU WOULD! X'''''''''''''''D
DONT DO IT, NOOOOOOO!

Author's Response:

WHOA!! O__O someone is angry at me XD The new chapter is up now

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed
Date: Nov 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 - The End!

Its so sad to see a good story end. :/ Although I wasn't one of the most ACTIVE readers, I defiantly had to say this was one of the few GOOD stories on here. All that's left is a bunch of bullshit. This was a great story and I hope you'll come with another one!!

Author's Response:

Aww that's very sweet of you to say. I am currently working on my two other open stories if you want to read them (Waiting for you and The time traveler) until something new of me sparks though that won't be any time soon. But either way I would like to thank you for at least taking the time to read this story. I appreciate the support on my writing. Much love!

Summary:

Notice To All My Readers:

The Altered Version of Chapter 47

is now uploaded.

 

I’m sorry to tell you that I decided to alter the course of this story starting from Chapter 45.

The chapters are currently being edited and I would upload them as soon as I can.

Don’t be disappointed. I simply felt like I could have done this better.

Take the time to read and tell me what you think.

Sorry for any inconvenience caused.

 

Sincerely,

TheJollyRoger

 

 

All this on the first time she got to see him in flesh and blood.

 

For years she had fantasized him as her Prince Charming,

 

But he discriminated her like a piece of junk he was willing to discard and replace.

 

Her cheeks started burning from embarrassment. Tears pooled up within her eyes making her vision all blurred and hazy.

 

All she could see were their silhouettes now. Her tears were about to get jerked out any second.

 

And she had no intention of crying in front him.

 

 

 

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

 

 

 

“You’re a remarkable person, Wendy,” Michael said,

 

“What I find in you is something unconditional. I don’t want to lose you.

 

And I don’t want to compromise what we have for anything in this world.

 

No matter how many times you say you can’t fit me in with your life, I know you can.

 

Because I know you let me in simply because you wanted.”

 

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What if all that you've always run away from happens to be everything you've ever needed?

What if every step you took towards it takes you even farther away from it?

Would you embark on a journey that has no destination?

 

 


Categories: Romance, Family, Angst, Dangerous: 1991-1993
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 181365 Read Count: 19882
[Report This] Published: Feb 07, 2012 Updated: May 30, 2013
Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: My Girl

RAAAAAGH.

I wish they would just ge tthe FUCK TOGETHER ALREADY, GOT DAMMIT, the teasing is killing me softly,but surely yet slowly.

Author's Response: You'd soon realise the tease is worth it all! lol And honestly speaking, things get boring to imagine and write once the boy and the girl get together. I need conflict!!! Lots and lots of it!!! Hee hee hee. And hey, if you want to contribute some ideas, please help! I need all the help in the world to get this story done! Soon! Thanks for the review! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed
Date: Oct 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: On My Anger

Yo. I'm about to jump on my bed.
They're finally getting CLOSEEERRR... ERRRG...

X_X.

They need tah hurry up, like OOHH EMM GHEE, AHH D';.....

This is getting GREAT with the more frquent updates and all, YOOUSHH, PLEASE update again soon, because I'm DYING with out more, AHH, PLEEASE. ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIIIIIYT.

Author's Response: And hello to you too Daizy! Gee, you sound so super excited! I can imagine you reading write now! Hee hee hee. You make me smile girl. Thanks for the review. Yeah, I've taken a liking all of a sudden to writing this story so I keep updating it. You say you needed more action and that's what I'm here to give. Hope you enjoy the new update. Stay tuned. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed
Date: Sep 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All The Things You Are

Ooooo! Relationship talk, YUUS.
PLEASE be getting somewhere, aaah....

Author's Response: You have no idea about the bombs about to land. Buckle up girl! Thanks for the review. Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Oct 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Girlfriend

Oh, hell no.
Don't start no shit NOW?! DA FUU?!
NOOO, WHEN ARE THEY GONNA GET TOGETHER, ITS BEEN 30 CHAPTERS, NO.
I can't TAKE IT ANYMORE. THEY NEED TO STOP THIS DILLY DALLY AND GET WID IT.

D;

Author's Response: Isnt the wait what makes the passion explode??? ;-) Thanks for the review darling. Much L.O.V.E.

Summary:

Skyler was a small time girl who landed a job at a new york bank. One day her whole world changed. It was the day she met F.B.I's most wanted. Michael Jackson

WARNING! THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE AND GRAPHIC SITUATIONS.  

THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH FOR GIVING US OVER 600 REVIEWS! WE ARE SO GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING THIS STORY. YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!!!


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145091 Read Count: 134095
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2012 Updated: May 11, 2016
Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed
Date: Mar 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

You know, i started hyperventalating when I saw yall at the top of the story feed. Just had to put that out there, but now I'm gonna read. :)



Author's Response:

lol. i didn't know this story had that kind of affect on people. i hope you like the chapter. AtMJsHouse did a very good job on it.

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That bitch is ordering her death wish.

AND PLEEEASE don't take so long with the updates, OKAY?!

And can yall PLLLLEEEEASE TELL ME HOW DA FUQ DO I PUT A PICTURE IN A TEXT?!?! I can't EVER get it up, I NEVER works, so can you plese tell me how to do it???



Author's Response:

I dont know how either. I've tried but it never works for me =(

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

God, this story is nothing better than an escapism. Oh, I love it. Wow, Michael is just surprising me more and more by the minute.... Now what is his reaction gonna be? NEED to see and find out!

Author's Response:

escapism? wow. i really like this review lol. thanks hun

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

That was fucked up.
And when I tell you this, THIS IS REAL SHIT, I AM NOT MAKING THIS UP;

THE PART WHERE SKY RAN AWAY FROM MICHAEL, MADE ME SCREAM, ROLL ALL OVER MY BED AND CRINGE IN A CORNER. I WANTED TO DIE, THIS CHAPTER WAS SO GOOD.

Best.
Chapter.
EVER.

Author's Response: Lmfao you're so intense

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

If you would have seen the way I jumped on my bed, screamed to my celing, banged on my walls and tried to rip my pillow in half, because of the way she got caught by Michael, you woild have thought I was a lunatic. My heart was pounding and I was yelling "FUCK, FUCK, FUUUUUCK" in my room so loud that my sister over heard, and thought something was seriously wrong with me.

And please, I understand that you can sometimes be busy, I REALLY do.... but I really LOATHE the long waits. I really do. So if you coud be EVER so nicely... To not make them so drawn out and tideous.