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I'm here to write, read, rate & encourage! My favorite era of Michael's is the Invincible Era. Michael is one of the greatest people to ever grace the earth with his prescence. Sometimes I wonder how a man I've never met can mean so much to me and trust me, people ask all of the time. I just love him so so so much, it's the most serious feeling I've ever encountered.
I also love Jay-Z, Nicki Minaj, Wu Tang Clan, Billy Crystal, high heels
(preferably Giuseppe Zanottis and Christian Louboutins), books, gangsta rap ;), singing, Barbie dolls, ribbons, masks, graphic tees, and vinyls.
My "codename" is Mrs. Maraj-Jackson
I'm pretty stern in my reviews, but I only do it to benefit your published work and MJFiction. Don't be discouraged by any means by my opinion.
I loathe when people abandon their stories! So from one Barb to another, don't do it!
MY DOT # IS 275,293 (Older Michael's Right Eye!)
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Meet Meekena Johanson a 20 year old homeless woman. She's been living in the street for 10 years straight. Her mother died from cancer. Her baby brother died when he was born from heart failure. She doesn't have a family nor a warm bed to lay in. Trying hard to find a find a job without the need of a good education can be hard, especially for this woman. You see Meekena is autistic. Not in the artsy way either. She's been this way since birth. She can never get a break from name calling nor bad comments. Even though she's different from everyone she has feelings like everyone. Only one person has realized that.
Michael Jackson......
Join the journey of Meekena and Michael through tabloids, teaching, and disrespect.
You see Michael isn't your average pop star. He's the nicest of them all. But sometimes your whole perspective of one without really knowing them can change...
IN A BIG WAY......
Michael's 22 by the way.
Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7420 Read Count: 3332
Date: Oct 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Meet the Characters
Yeah, I know a lot of people who are just immune to spelling and pronouncing it right, so I was making sure.
Author's Response:
thanks and i think i'm one of those people lol
Michael and the police officer
Categories: Adult
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 913 Read Count: 572
Date: Oct 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is good. I could have used a little more detail, like elongating the movements of the characters.
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Categories: Family, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126308 Read Count: 20396
Date: Nov 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Pinky Promises
This is great. There are a few extra letters placed in the story but your idea is good. I like spacing, it makes it easier on the eyes of the reader but, you may use a little too much space.
Author's Response: A review! Yes, Haha! I've accomplished something. You want to co-write? You seem like a good critic...
Date: Nov 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I could edit and revise somethings for you so, sure. I'll have to start tomorrow.
Date: Dec 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Growing Up
I really like this chapter, I think it's the best you've written.
Author's Response: You inspired it. I think I stared about four new chapters, but they just didn't fit the story. Then, I realized you had posted a chapter, and it just hit me.
Michael was lonely like he had been though out most of his life. So, his manager, Frank, decides to help him out with that problem. What happens when the most untouchable, unreachable man in the world meets the most untouchable, unreachable woman in the world?
Michael Joseph Jackson
Beverly Mae Richards
Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2962 Read Count: 350
Date: Jan 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: I Don't Want You to Be Alone
This is a great start.
Two best friends go on a game show looking for love.14 girls sign up either for Michael or Chris but will they stay with that person or switch along the way.Who will win Michael and Chris over 14 girls who will they choose?
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Categories: Adventure, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3207 Read Count: 218
Date: Oct 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Episode 1-Who are you here for?
I'm so glad you put my HB in there. I was just a little shocked that she would be going for Chris! Anyway, I really like your concept but try putting the speech in quotation marks so it's easier to read.
Alessandra (Alice): 24, single, beautiful, secure, and blind.
Michael: 31, single, famous, shy, and lonely.
When michael runs into Alessandra in a chance encounter, what will happen?
Will Michael fall for her even though shes blind?
Will Alessandra ever get her sight back?
What will the Alessandra do when she finally finds out who she really ran into: the world famous singer of all time??
Alessandra:
Michael:
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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2434 Read Count: 280
Date: Oct 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Pretty
Your use of vocabulary is very decent. Just remember to look for where you might have missed capital letters. I'm really interested in reading more of this story.
Author's Response:
yeah, i try to fix my grammatical errors. its just that i wanna get it posted so fast!!! lol. im glad your interested, and i hope youll continue to read.
Jamie is just starting out her career when she meets Michael and Janet after a state wide talent show, and they instantly hit it off. Plus, that same day she was offered to sign to Young Money Records! Only thing is, the CEO Lil'wayne (THE lil'wayne!) has developed a thing for her, and so has Michael! And to top it all off, Jamie has a hard time adjusting to fame and all the responsibilities it comes with.
Who will she pick?
Will she survive fame?
Why is janet attracted to such a Jerk? (lol)
Categories: Adult, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4564 Read Count: 446
Date: Oct 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Best day ever!
I'm glad you're either 1. Using Nicki in here as herself, with a different name or 2. Using her photo as an aid. If it's #1, it could use some work. If it is the latter, you're doing so well. I like where this story is going.
Author's Response:
I'm just using Nicki's picture as an aid, and thanks :)
A chance encounter in an airport leads to unexpected romance & adventure.
Categories: Romance, Adventure, Adult, HIStory: 1995-1999
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 160463 Read Count: 48472
Date: Nov 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I love how you ended this chapter. I really enjoy the updates from this story.
Date: Nov 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Hot damn! *Bites finger*
Date: Dec 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
This chapter was so beautiful. It's really ashame how much we take for granted in our lives.
A love novel written by Michael Jackson(not really) describing the most tender love moments of his love life with his lover Yvonne. The two face obsticles that may be too much for the of them to endure; lust, unfaithfulness, and so much stress. What starts out as a beautiful relationship between two young lovers, turns into an endless roller coaster that they don't know if they should stay on, or get off of.
Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 913 Read Count: 807
Date: Nov 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
I like this idea a lot but you need to indent and space so it's easier on the eyes of the reader. Looking forward to the update...
Author's Response:
yeah im so sorry, i did a draft and it turned out to come out like this... will listen to your advice though thanks so much.
Melanie Dwyer
15 year old, Melanie Dwyer finds an old photograph. She recognizes the two children. One’s her mother, and the other is her aunt Dulcie… but who is the third person, the one who’s been torn out of the picture? Melanie will have two months to figure it out, since she’s spending the summer with her aunt and her cousin in the same house her mom and aunt used to visit when they were kids.
Then, Melanie meet’s Sissy. Sissy is mean, spiteful, and determined to ruin Melanie’s summer. Sissy also has a secret. Could it have something to do with the old photo? Melanie is dying to find out. Though if she’s not careful, that’s exactly what might happen to her—die that is.
Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Adventure, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1191 Read Count: 2550
Date: Nov 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I'm really interested in the plot of this story. I can tell that, as the story continues, it will become confusing if you cannot keep up and I like that.
Being in a very violent relationship, Kylie is fed up. Her boyfriend, Nelly, isn’t in her heart anymore and things between them have changed, a lot. They try to make things better but it only gets worst.
Kylie has two best friends, Sparkle and Miracle. They’ve known each other forever. And what happens when they all go out to a concert. They meet Michael Jackson of course.
Michael and Kylie starts to get really close and everybody knows that there is something special going on between them. Then one day, they randomly thought of letting everything out. They’re dating.
But what happens when different women comes between their relationship? What happens when nothing is going right and best friends are fighting? What happens when Michael and Kylie starts arguing?
Everybody is full of Resentment
Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1586 Read Count: 265
Date: Dec 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I'm taking the time to thank you personally for your comments and I'm glad you enjoy Text Me. I like this story, you should update girl!