[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 09:48 am Title: Tell The Truth...If You Dare
"What a big mouth you have grandma." The voice immediately brings my blood to a boil. Sauntering in late to dinner and alone, Mr Babyhairs Jackson."
I HATE HIM 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I don't think Di should get sent home. I mean, he did dare her to call someone and that's what she did. Fenty (my phone keeps correcting it to Gently lmao), gotta go😒 and I think Michael is letting a lot slide about Nye but she's a witch soooo can't say I'm mad 😂😂😂😂
ima be so depressed when I get through all these chapters and have to wait until the next update 😥😥😥😥😥
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2017 09:39 pm Title: Muppet Fakes And Bathroom Breaks...
Di and my baby Pen are friends this go round? I'm liking this. Why is Pen always getting caught staring at Michaels junk 🙄 And I found Pen, well Cleo's Instagram. She's gorgeous bruh. Good chapter as always 😊
Date: Mar 14, 2017 07:32 pm Title: Under My Skin...I'm Under Yours...
And I am NOT used to Michael being SO rude to Pen so I'm resisting the urge to want to punch him in the face rn .. still love him though
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2017 07:30 pm Title: Under My Skin...I'm Under Yours...
"I took a sip of my water not prepared for what was to come next. She turned and bent down to pick up a napkin that had fallen from her hand to throw it in the trash and I almost choked. I'm talking water coming out of my nose type mishap. Fuck!! I looked down at my shirt trying my best to wipe away the moisture before it settled into the fabric. Gotdamn her ass looked like it was beamed down from the heavens fresh from the ovens. She got buns hun…Oh I tend to be corny sometimes. You'll get used to it."
BYE MICHAEL 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 mannnnn Pen and Michael be having me dying ðŸ˜ðŸ˜‚😂😂 good chapter, GOAT
Date: Mar 14, 2017 12:59 pm Title: Gound Zero
Okay, I'm looking at the reviews (YES I KNOW THAS CHEATING DONT JUDGE ME) and this seems like this is about to be goooooooooodddddd *fans self* *takes deep breath* you're my favorite *hands you the mjfiction crown* okay back to getting lost in this story now lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2017 12:51 pm Title: The Train To Destiny...
"Hey… I'm brain damaged. Well that was my new excuse for every Freudian slip I have now and in the future. I pretty sure there will be plenty of them"
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 oh boy this is going to be a good story lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2017 12:30 pm Title: Gound Zero
OMG!!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
SO. GOOD. SO. FAR!!!!!
STOP BEING SO GREAT OK?!?!
Author's Response:
Lmaooo. I love you!!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2017 12:52 pm Title: Promises...Will They Keep?
Last chapter-- I do feel bad for Nye...Just a little wittle bit for losing her memory and now she's in a coma that's gonna take her months to come back From-. But I do feel bad for my girl Pen. Like damn she in love but now Mike gotta play fiance again because of ol girl.
New chapter --- so nye is doing great she does have her memory back just the past ones and not present ones. Bummer. But at least she's doing fine. Poor Mike gotta pretend but thank God he Finally ton Pen the truth. I had a feeling she wasn't gon give into him easily no matter how smokin hot he is. But I wonder how long this "staying away from each other" thing is gonna last.
Author's Response:
Hey bb!!! How are you? Getting better? I'm so glad to see you around!!!
Yeah it's sad that Nye has to go through this memory loss thing but we all know she's gonna be her old self soon. Lol.
I do feel it most for Pen tho cause she was hopeful to see where things would go with Michael and now all this drama. She's trying to protect her heart by staying away. YESSS we will see how long it lasts but for now she's not having it. <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 09:49 pm Title: Promises...Will They Keep?
I really CANNOT deal right now.
Put up apperances for the sake of Nye? Puh-lease.
No she hasn't changed, she just can't remember the shit she did/Michael sleeping with Pen/Michael breaking up with her. The minute her memory comes back (which I think she is going to continue to FAKE even when it does come back because that's just Nye for you) she's going to go back to being the ill bitch that she was once before.
Shall I add that Chad, Chuck, Charles, whatever is a bitch for not manning up and admiting to Michael that he's fucking his "ex-fiance."
Author's Response:
Girl!!!!! I'm not gonna give anything away but... That's all Imma say. Lmaoooooooo. Michael is keeping up with the bs because he feels guilty. He really needs to break that dependency he has on saving Nye from herself. <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 08:48 pm Title: Wake Up Call
"Girl Prince is that purple wonder dude. I, on the other hand am a King."
Rolling my eyes ^^^ lol. This guys ego is higher than a kite.
Michael can actually prevent all hell that has potential of breaking lose. Nye is critical condition so he doesn't need to stay by her bedside. He needs to pick up some breakfast, go back to Pen's place and explain what happened. Simple as that. It's 'touch and go' so technically he doesn't know if she'll make it or not.
The readers know she will, but Michael doesn't... he can live a little.
As for Pen, she's just as confused as any of us would be if we were in her position. She might had a gut feeling it's about Nye though.
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 08:39 pm Title: Trick And Treat
Just when I thought everything was going okay you switch to Nye's POV and mess up the vibe Tut, lol jk. I know paradise doesn't last long in the real world, but for the sake of fiction and Pen's heart can we be a little easy? Lol. Enjoying catching up so far. On to the next!
Author's Response:
You know Nye had to wiggle her way in there somewhere. Lol. <333
Date: Feb 07, 2017 06:23 pm Title: Promises...Will They Keep?
Smh poor Pen. Just run girl, run for the hills. Michael BYE. And hell naw Nye trifling ass ain't changed, she's just not herself right now. Soon as her memory comes back, she will be back to her usual bullshit and bye that time Michael ass better hope Pen ain't moved on. He's on the verge of losing her with this playing house shit. This is more detrimental tbh, he should tell her they are broken up. She will be alright. He is so damn dumb smh
Author's Response:
Pen is like see you when you don't have baggage. She's hurt and I don't blame her. Nye is in a vulnerable state right now so bring mellow works for her. She honestly doesn't remember and it can be scary I'm sure. But rest assured that inner bitch is lurking around the corner. Michael is being ruled by his guilt. <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 06:10 pm Title: Promises...Will They Keep?
Okay, this should not be funny but for some reason imagining Michael in the studio screaming holy fucking shit... had me CTFU.
Michael is being dumb as fuck and I don't blame Pen for her attitude on this. Poor girl... And even if Nye has changed Michael should be aware that her memory could pop up at any minute and she will be right back to being the old bitch that she was.
Sigh... this is a MESS!!!
But I need more! And soon.
From your creepy internet lover!
Author's Response:
I was picturing that too lmaoooooo. Like out the blue he would just yell out. Pen isn't having any of him right now. She's hurt that he's willing to stay in a relationship he's already left. Nye is being sweet but you're right that bitch is chillin right around the corner itching to come out. And you know she's going to be on some foul shit too!!! I'm trying for next weekend for the next one!!!<333
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 11:41 am Title: The Guilt After The Pleasure
Lmao same old Michael, purposely getting Chad's name wrong. LMAO why does that crack me up so much!? Nye in a coma... I mean what difference does it make that girl is brain dead as it is! Leave her alone and let "Charles" deal with it. Hell, let him fill her in on the last four months.
Omg I can't wait to find out how Pen reacts to this.!!! UGH!!!!!
MORE!!!!<3<3
Author's Response:
Pen's reaction will be interesting. We will see how Michael deals with Nye too. We all know Nyrnis shady as hell. Lmaoooooo. I had to bring that back with Michael getting dudes name wrong. It wouldn't be inked with out a good wrong name call. <333
Date: Jan 21, 2017 10:12 am Title: The Guilt After The Pleasure
Poor Pen, she is certainly going to be put on the back burner. As Michael and his guilt stays with Nye, enough to marry her leaving Pen high and dry. His guilt that he cheated, when she did the same thing! She wants the fame and the money! Pen loves him!
Honestly, I agree with some of the other comments! Pen needs to get her ass as far away from Michael as she can.
Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Pen is going to be mad as hell but she won't show it. She's just going to stay away from him as much as she can but let's see how things go. We have a chapter or two between now and getting to Michael running out on the wedding hope you enjoy the journey there and beyond. <333