[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2015 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 26: How?
Lawd!!!! Oh God. This has gotten really crazy. I don't think crazy is the word for it. Damn, why they had to take Patrick's life man. He never would hurt anybody let alone a damn fly. Now Mike got nobody. He doesn't.have his big bro anymore. His cousin to be with. This is too sad. And the bad thing about it is they they all.Just graduated yesterday. Now Kai is gone in Cali miles away from Atlanta heartbroken and scared for everyone.
Smh!!!!!
Who the hell is doing this shit? I'm starting to believe it's Jules crazy ass. Cause in one of the chapters, he told Mike he wishes someone take him out first or something like that but hell, he said it and it could be him doing it.
Mike just needs to take Ghost advice and get the hell out of there asap. Go live with Kai or something. It's getting to dangerous for him and his life is on the line as well.
More soon girl!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2015 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 25: Congrats...but, see you later
Why is she not telling him about Ghost?!
The last week of school and the goodbye all happened so fast. I'm curious what's coming up next!
Date: Jul 22, 2015 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 26: How?
I'm literally crying.... I loved pat! :(
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2015 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 25: Congrats...but, see you later
You know what. Girl, I'm sitting here trying to hold my tears in but hell, fuck.it. I'ma let them out.
I'm so proud of them all for making.through and graduating. This was one of the best moments of their lives and I knowKai's mom and dad would have been really proud of her. She's done good for herself and lil bro.
Btw, I figured her uncle was going to get her a car.But $2,000, shocked me
But the part where she had to leave, it broke my heart. Lawd!!!! Mike and everybody else was in tears. That's his baby and like he said, they are gonna be alright. They'll always be together and no one will come between. (They better not either, I ain't playing , I ain't playin, lol)
But off to a better like Kai and Honor go. I hope Mike and them get a trip to Cali real soon. I can't take the separation already, lol.
Btw, this ghost dude, is creeping me out.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2015 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 24: Private Beaches, Private Shows
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!! they did it!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2015 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 24: Private Beaches, Private Shows
Very loving chapter. I wonder how Michael and Kai are going to make things work while being so far away. They'll make it happen though. I just know it 😊
Author's Response:
It's gonna be tough no doubt, but these two can get through anything haha!
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2015 11:50 am Title: Chapter 24: Private Beaches, Private Shows
Yess!!! Hallelujah!!! The baby isn't his. Girl I swear I was doing cartwheels, frontflips backflips, and rolls in my head at the results. Lmao!!!!!
So this Ghost dude Kai saw lives in the neighborhood now? From the way she described him, man was sexy as hell. Lol.
Now let me get to the beach and then the private show Kai gave Mike. That was really hot. A little too hot. I mean poor Michael couldn't touch her in the shower. Kai be with those games. But Jesus christ, the way they satisfied each other was .... wow!!!!! Then they did up against the wall but still was heard, lol. That Mike stick would do that to ya.
But I'm happy Luca had a great birthday and everyone had a great senior trip together, especially since Kai will be leaving the next day.
More soon :)
Author's Response:
I couldn't make the baby his, it just wouldn't feel right haha thank God i took that route hahaha
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2015 12:08 am Title: Chapter 23: Stay, Go?, Yes or No?
I'm getting nervous! I'm starting to think this might be his baby. As the creator of this story, I beg of you, please don't let this happen. Lol I don't think my heart can take it. Please lol.
Date: Jul 20, 2015 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 22: Broken Hearted
I get why she should leave but why wait so late in the game to tell him? He's not going to take this well. Smh
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2015 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 23: Stay, Go?, Yes or No?
Well, I'm glad they aren't breaking up and will remain together even if they are miles away across the country from each other.
Now this chapter reminds me of my boyfriend. The Way Michael was playing with Kai in the mall, my boyfriend does exactly that except he never sneaks up on me cause he knows he gonna get bobbed real good. Lmbo.
This unknown caller is really got under my skin. I'm with Mike on this, if you wanna kill him so bad then go on ahead an do it. What's with the funny bullshit???
So Lauren is still nagging and she's gonna name him Jackson????!!!! Yeah, she sounds a little obsessed alright, especially with Kai. Her name is always coming out of lauren mouth.
And why did you have to end it like that. I was ready to get down to business and know if that baby was Michael's. Cross to.gets and hope it isn't.
But as for Kai, I believe she can handle it because, if it turns out to be his, she can't be mad at him or Lauren because they conceived the waaaay before they made it official to be bf and gf. But I do understand because of the baby mama drama that she does not wanna deal with. Hopefully, she doesn't have to.
Up date soon!! :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2015 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 23: Stay, Go?, Yes or No?
Oh please please PLEASE don't let Michael be the father of that baby!!! I'm begging you!!! I'll love you forever, I promise. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2015 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 22: Broken Hearted
She needs to take Michael with her!!! I love this. Please continue soon!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2015 12:26 am Title: Chapter 22: Broken Hearted
Uhh, Michael is being a total ass right now, but I guess he has his reasons. But still, he needs to communicate with Kai if they want to have a better relationship.
Now Lauren is really starting to irks my nerves foreal foreal now. But idk why I feel like this baby could be Michael's. Idk. Maybe it isn't like he claims it to be. I do kinda believe him.But until they get a DNA test done then I'll know.
So he finally came clean and told her what was up. Instead, he didn't mention about the hit that's out on him. Well, there are some things you can keep to yourself but it can backfire as well and I don't want that for him.
Kai finally told him about her moving to L.A. after graduation. I think it's best that she does. She'll have a better life but I don't want her and Michael to break up because of it. He should move with her and make something better of himself. if he moves with her, then the hit thing would come to a stop. But I know it doesn't work that way. I do think it's probably Jules or he either has something to do with it.
But please make Mike and Kai work out. I don't want them to break up. Girl, figure something out. Quick!!!! :) kml.
More soon :):)
Author's Response:
I don't want them to neither girl! I'm gonna see what the creative juices does lol, although Michael is stubborn. Lauren is a very annoying factor but ... Let's just hope the baby isn't his.
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2015 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 22: Broken Hearted
200%? Dude has spent too much time sellin' for him to be throwing out such lies. He's not even 100% because he got wasted after she left.
Kai is such an 18 yo, playing those games with him. She'd have saved them both some time by straight up saying "tell me what's up" and if he didn't, telling him to hang back until he was ready to fess up. Now, has she floated the idea of Michael coming, to her uncle? That seems like a realistic possibility.
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2015 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 21: Can't Take Away Happiness
These secrets are going to hurt them. I can't imagine what it's like for him now, constantly watching his back.
And what the eff is up with him turning her down? She was asking for it, all he had to do was go for it.
Thanks for the frequent updates :)