[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2015 12:51 am Title: Chapter 30: Yes, No, Maybe
Ohhhhh nooooooo!!!!!!! This can't be the end. :(:(:(:(:(
Mike you right, you made a huge mistake not packing your bags and leaving with Kai. Pat got the justice he deserved and you can finally leave for the better.
IIstrI strongly believe they will stay together. They been through too much not to stay.
Author's Response:
Michael made a huge mistake, :( He's gonna regret it I'm sure.
Thanks for reading girl, and I'm keeping up with your story! its so addicting lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2015 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 30: Yes, No, Maybe
They should stay together. They WILL stay together. And Michael better hop his ass onto a flight to L.A. Talkin bout I think I made a mistake. Hell yes you did!!! Lol I hope you continue. Whether it be another chapter or a new book. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
He's too stubborn for his own good, I don't know why he's fighting it haha, but keep up with them, they may be back sooner than you think haha. never know, one day we'll find out!
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2015 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 29: Rest In Peace Patrick
damn. It's like everywhere they turn something else is going wrong
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 29: Rest In Peace Patrick
Oh no! I hope that crooked cop doesn't try to do anything stupid right now! I can't believe he had the audacity to show up at MJ's house the day of Patrick's funeral. He's just all kinds of evil, isn't he? I hope he gets his really soon 😡
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 29: Rest In Peace Patrick
Lawd, this is why I don't do.funerals anymore. I can't help but cry. The moment the first person start up I'm shedding rivers.
But Pat is really going to miss. My heartgoes out to all of them. We all know exactly how not feels to lose a loved one.
But Erica?? Wtf is she there of all people? Then she looking at Kai sideways. Smh.
And the crooked cop is at the door!!!! Run y'all run!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 28 : The Truth, the truth, do I like the truth?
Bipolar isn't an excuse...and the mania wouldn't be that brief. Plus, the depressive phases would lessen the anger....bipolar isn't timed like that. Conduct disorder, for sure, but that's more of a description of one's behavior than it is a reason for it. Now, if he was going on/coming off of street drugs, that would make more sense.
I love that the cop's streetname is "Crooked" lol.
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 28 : The Truth, the truth, do I like the truth?
Dang! Well at least they got answers now. I knew Jules was shady. I'm so happy MJ finally came to his senses and cut that girl loose. I was laughing so hard when Kai was trying to stay calm about it but then blew up on him. Lol that was nicely done. So realistic. Something I definitely would have done. Now MJ knows that Kai don't play dat ish. Lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2015 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 28 : The Truth, the truth, do I like the truth?
Girl I was getting scared when Kai was going off on Mike. I was like, he done hit the last straw and she's done. But I'm glad he's getting off his BS cause Kai has done too Mich for him even though it was little. But it's always the little things that count. Also, he let that Erica chick go. Idk what was on his mind. He was asking for major trouble with that girl.
And like I said before, I knew it was Jules. He was apart of it So i knew it. But his uncle being apart of it tho?? I wouldn't have thought. Well, at least Dre and Pat are getting the justice they deserve. Lock them mofos up!!!!! ;(
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2015 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 26: How?
Get to LA, MJ.
Thanks for the frequent updates :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2015 11:25 am Title: Chapter 27: Don't Mess Up
Michael's being stupid. I get he's hurting but that's no excuse. Kai is trying to talk to him and be there for him as much as she can but yet he's trying to confide in some other chick just because she's close by and Kai isn't. He needs to get it together before he does something stupid like ruin his relationship with Kai.
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2015 11:11 am Title: Chapter 27: Don't Mess Up
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2015 09:06 am Title: Chapter 27: Don't Mess Up
Uhhh.... Mike who the hell is Erica??? He better not trot to do anything. I don't blame Trey and Kira for going off cause it's ridiculous. You rather talk to son other chick but not your girl who's putting in the time to talk to you about everything. I swear Mike don't be knowing what he got sometimes. He too damn stubborn for me.
All I know is he better not try anything and I mean ANYTHING with that unknown skeezer Erica. She better be just his confidant and less.
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2015 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 26: How?
Whoa! I did NOT see that coming. My heart goes out to Michael and Kira. Oh no, Patrick 😭. Now Michael really needs to get out the hood and go be with Kai. This should be more motivation for him than anything. Very sensitive but excellent chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2015 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 25: Congrats...but, see you later
So many emotions I feel right now. Excitement, anxiety, elation, heartbreak, curiosity...lol just to name a few. Great job on this chapter 😄
Date: Jul 22, 2015 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Well Look Who It Is
Nooooo why Patrick he was good he just graduated with a baby on the way, Poor Kira, this is fucked up. MJ will never be the same.
R.I.P Pat