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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2015 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Boy Next Door

Sometimes you really do like the next door neighbor.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2015 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 2: It's Just The Little Game We Play

This is what Kai was afraid was going to happen. Kira saw and heard Mike flirting with Kai. But, that's usually the way life is. The person that you like or are infatuated with does not feel the same way about you. I enjoy the way you write.  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy the story and just wait until you read the sequel! Haha girrrl!

 

but yeah Kira really liked Michael but he just don't see her that way . :/ unfortunately 

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2015 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Well Look Who It Is

Wow! Now, there will be opportunity for them to get to know each other. Although, she probably does not want to because her friend Kira is interested in him.

Reviewer: Liltilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2015 10:38 pm Title: LOVE AND OTHER THINGS

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY A SEQUEL I LOVE THIS STORY SO I KNOW I'M GOING TO LOVE THE SEQUEL



Author's Response:

It's up btw , idk if you knew or not. Lol

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2015 04:27 pm Title: LOVE AND OTHER THINGS

Exactly what I wanted to hear. Looking forward to it.

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2015 01:07 pm Title: LOVE AND OTHER THINGS

Yas!!! I love you!!!

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2015 09:50 am Title: LOVE AND OTHER THINGS

yoooooooooooooooooo i really wanted to now what happened to Kira!!! lol you got me there!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2015 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 16: Woah

Katherine left when they were asleep.  Michael is going to be upset.   Michael and Kai have a great bond.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2015 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 30: Yes, No, Maybe

I think I know what that mistake was....

Reviewer: Liltilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2015 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 30: Yes, No, Maybe

FINAL CHAPTER?????????  NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THIS MY FAVORITE STORY I CANT WAIT FOR YOU TOO CONTINUE THOUGH, THIS STORY GIVES ME LIFE🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌 

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2015 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 13: Love is Love

oh she soo loves him :)

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Date: Jul 27, 2015 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 11: Oh BROTHER!

Pooe Michael was traumatized seeing what happened to Katherine.  He is so sweet with Kai.   I see her being good for Michael helping him to get right.

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2015 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 4: Sorry You're Not My Kind Of Girl

Michael maybe a bad boy but he is the perfect gentleman to Kai.  I like how he is being honest with her about the life he lives.

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2015 08:43 am Title: Chapter 30: Yes, No, Maybe

Are you kidding!😡 You can't  leave it like this!😭 You have to have a Part 2. 😥 LOL

I know you did this just to get a rise out of your readers.😈Way to go girl.😀😅😉😇

 



Author's Response:

Haha keep looking out :'), thanks for reading!

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2015 12:58 am Title: Chapter 30: Yes, No, Maybe

Seriously? Are you really going to end it like this? Lol I have no closure here. Is there at least going to be a sequel or something? You've got me so engrossed into the story to leave me hanging like this. Please tell me something good lol. I need more 😢

Author's Response:

I know :( as crazy as it seems, I'm sad that it's the ending too, but I have something in mind..just trying to figure it out haha but stay tuned :)

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