Date: Feb 18, 2016 03:27 am Title: Chapter 63
I have read through all 63 chapters literally in like less than a week, this story is great! And I love that you took the time with each chapter to develop both Michaels and Malanias characters before they ever got romantic or anything, I truly appreciated that. Seriously great work, you're an amazing writer, each chapter's got me so engaged! Just one suggestion, I was wondering if perhaps you could provide us with some visuals of what you imagined Malania's character to look or even Michael, or maybe even of how you envisioned the suite they are staying at looks like? I know it would sure help me to better visualize the story but other than that I'm so looking foward to reading the rest of the chapters!
Date: Jan 18, 2016 06:51 am Title: Chapter 63
Lol...A little warm? Does it ease into sizzle? JK No I'm not we've come too far for me to lie to you now!! I was looking forward to chickens being choked not eaten. * slow turns with a grin.
The beach was so cute them being all cuddly and all that PDA sprinkled around.
I truley hate Samuel for what he did to Mal. Like what would drive someone to do that. I know it's about exacting power but it's so malicious. Same with Larry and what he did to little Casey. UGHHHHHHHHHH. Yes I'm declaring out right that it's that POS creep. I can't wait for the chapter that weasel gets caught. Let me get away from the sadness and rejoice with Michael that Mal doesn't have a hairy chest.
Just ease into it. *A couple dozen winks*
Here's to Michael finding out if there's hair in other places.
You're doing a great job releasing your stress and the chapter was amazing!!!